dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr

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hi guys!this is 2 b dr tina😊 n it z ma 1st ff 4 kriyaansh n 2nd ff ever~ i knw every1 z sad on sad kriyaansh end bt i wanna make it different n in ma style..hope u like it..plxx gimme ur feedback shud i continue or nt?P.S if u want pm plx add me 2 ur buddy list
introduction
this ff z abt the love n lives of different ppl who r linked 2 each othr smhw..sme ov them r sibs n othrs r frnds yet thng binds them all 2gethr ie their passion dance.in this ff u ll c hw their lives come 2gthr n love blossoms btween childhod buddies wich later become enemies.their loves,hates,fears,MU s,hw they get centred..
emotion,drama,comedy n melody...a heart 2 heart wid all!!
character sketch
reyaansh singhaniya
24 yr old,son ov a very rich businessman.his dream since childhood ws 2 become a pilot in uniform so he z currently undergng his training in IAF.he z a v ambitious,self centred,serious n cool guy who knws hw 2 balance life n work.he z a party guy.kriya n he were czns n childhood buddies,born n bred 2gthr.he ws in love wid kriya in childhood bt then an MU tore them apart.nw he thnks she hates him n cnsdrs him as a competitor.
kriya ghai
21 yr old.rey s czn n sharon s sister.she z a shy type girl next door.she loves 2 write n live alone.she z a jolly n bubbly grl thou,nvr srs abt lyf.she z gud wid her frnds bt nvr gud at mkng frnds in the 1st place.she z a bit shy around guys bt ws only close 2 rey n swayam.she loved rey since childhood bt due 2 MU rey hates her n thnks she hates him 2..she has nw believed tat rey ws nvr her destiny n she z sad thou bt contented wid tat.she always follows her parents n elders dreams.she z stdyng in a medical school in mumbai.
captian swayam sherawat
24 yr old.rey n kriya s neighbour in childhood.he z a fun loving,jolly n srs guys who loves 2 b happy n mk othrs happy.he z rey s best buddy.currently serving in indian army.he z a casanova n always like grls around yet he z a patriot.he knws abt kriyaansh s love story n sad ending n wanna clear the MU between them.loves sharon bt cud nvr admit it 2 her..
sharon ghai
19 yrs old,kriya s younger sis.she z the dude of the college unlike her sis she z outspoken,confident n outgoing.she z liked by all n z a party girl..she z doing a bachelors in arts.she always follows her dreams n dnt give an ear 2 her parent s advices.she thnks her sister(kriya) stupid n mks fun ov her bt deeply she z inspired by her as she(kriya) z v sensible,sensitive n caring 2wards othrs.she believes u live life 1ce so dnt care n enjoy it
vicky singhaniya
21 yr old n rey s younger brother.he z kriya s classmate n z a cool dude yet he z stupid n does idiotic thngs unlike his bro.he went into medical solely cx ov kriya as his parents esp mum ws quite envious abt her n wnted her son 2 become a doc so she cn stand wid pride among her family.he z 6 months younger than kriya n always hated her bt deeply he ws impressed by her n nvr wanna show it 2 any1.he used 2 take toys,books same as kriya s n smtymes kriya gives it 2 him herself happily.he loves 2 party n hang out wid grls.many a tymes he got insulted by grls,he follows latest trends..
neha sherawat
21 yr old swayam s sister n vicky kriya s classfellow.she loves hindi movies n talks like tat.she z kriya s best frnd at school.she z an emotional,jolly n chirpy grl who talks abt boys all the tym.
nailesh garewall
19 yr old.sharon s classmate.he stammers while talkng n z nt clear in talkng.vishaka s twin bro n fears his sis as she z dominating
bharat chopra
19 yrs old,a part time mechanic.he z a fightaholic.he loves 2 start a fight anytym he gets a chance
rinni chopra
vishaka garewall
19 yrs old.nailesh s twin.a cnfident,outspoken n cool grl.she z a tom boy n loves 2 dress like guys..
snigdha
19 yrs old.a very chirpy,cute,bubbly n sweet grl..she believes in balanced living..she makes evry1 happy wid her jokes n ws a very sincere frnd!she believes tat life life 2 the fullest n relish evry moment ov ur existance
asma
19 yrs old..she takes lyf easy n relax..she has a deep,dark secret in her lyf wich she keeps 2 herself.she loves 2 party n play pranks thou gud 1s..nvr thnks ill ov any1!!
shravni
17 yrs old..sharon s frnd..she z a cool grl n z a computer expert..every1 loves her chirpy personality..
mr viraat singhaniya
rey n vicky s dad.he z a cool n happy-go-lucky person.every1 loves his company..
mrs shilpa singhaniya
rey n vicky s mom.she z a dark charactr n hates kriya..she z mrs ghai s sister n z very biased n strict mothr..
mr soboot ghai
kriya n sharon s fathr.he z v strict n disciplined person.he doesnt like daughters bt z blessed wid 2.never gives any attention 2 them
mrs smriti ghai
kriya n sharon s mom.she loves them n esp kriya as she z been hated by evry1 almost..sharon z her papa s pari as she z chirpy bt kriya being a loner..
dr yuvraj thakkur
kriya s teacher.he z a consultant n z a motivated teacher.he loves 2 teach
sapna jain
sharon s teacher.she z married n mother ov 2.
colonel karanveer singh
swayam s senior.he z in gud terms wid swayam.he loved sapna jain who got married n z the mother ov 2 kids nw
RDX
KSG
nicole
P.S new characters ll b introduced as the ff progresses..hope u like it.w8ng 4 ur feedback..n plx tell me hw 2 insert images here??
PM LIST
MEET THE STARS
reyaansh singhaniya
kriya ghai
EPISODE GUIDE(direct links)
chapter 1-pg 2
chapter 2-pg 4
chapter 3-pg 7
CHAPTER 4-pg 11
CHAPTER 5-pg 13(kriyaansh xclusive)
CHAPTER 6-pg 16(option 1 😉)
CHAPTER 7-pg 23
SPECIAL EPI-pg 25
CHAPTER 8-pg 26
CHAPTER 9-pg 30
CHAPTER 10-pg 46
CHAPTER 11-pg 50
CHAPTER 12-pg 55
CHAPTER 13-pg 61
CHAPTER 14-pg 69
CHAPTER 15-pg 77
CHAPTER 16-pg 90
CHAPTER 17-pg 94
CHAPTER 18-pg 101
CHAPTER 19-pg 117
CHAPTER 20-pg 130
LINK 2 THREAD 2
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please continue we will love to read your ff
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plz continu nd pm me on ur update.
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plz pm me when u continue and MU jaldi se clear kr do.
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pm me when u update plz nad amazing so far
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lovely update. thanks for the pm. update next part yup 1st chapter soon.
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Its a very nice concept and i think u shud continue...
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thnks guys 4 ur positive response..
yup sure i ll update soon...hopefully 2moro!!
i ll start the update 2day bt complete it 2moro n subsequently pm all 2moro hopefully wen update z complete!!
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CHAPTER 1
kriya,kriya wake up beta!2day s ur 1st day in medical school.wakeup or u ll get late(came the voice of mrs smriti ghai)
kriya:mom!uthti hoon abhi!srf 6 am hue en abhi toh!plx thora aur soney do na!(mom i ll wake up.its still 6am.plx lemme sleep a lil more)
smriti:kriya beta plx uth jao tum bohat dair lagati o ready honey main..mene kitni dafa bola e tum ko jaldi soya karo per tmhen to facebook aur games e nae chorteen.beta ab tum medical school main aagaye o!ye mazak thori e,tmhn ab khoob dil laga k parhna o ga warna fail o jaoge(kriya beta plx wake up u take very long 2 get ready..i ve told u many times 2 sleep early bt u keep on using ur facebook n games.beta nw u ve entered medical school,its nt a joke.nw u ll hav 2 wor day in and out in order 2 succeed)
kriya:i knw mom.plx phir c lec mat shuru o jao..em already very nervous abt 2day..hw em i gonna survive medical school??in doctors(its a novel by eric segal in wich he has xplained the lyf of doctors)i ve read its really tuff 2 cope up wid studies in medical lyf!
mom:u n ur novels!god!wot shud i do wid this grl?ok.no more excuses.go 2 washroom widthin 5 mins n freshen up n get ready 4 ur school or u wont b allowed 2 play ur fav game 2day.look sharon z already up n gettng ready
kriya:no mom n gets outta bed half heartedly
AT SINGHANIYA MANSION
vicky:Zzz...phone rings tring tring...
vicky picks up:whoz this??is this the time 2 call??
rey:get up kiddo!!u gotta go..its ur 1st day at medical school
vick:plx bro!dnt call me kiddo..em dr vicky nw..
rey:its only ur 1st day at college...
vick:u knw wot bro!me n ur baatcutter r gonna b in the same class
FLASHBACK
kria:cmon rey!i ll b the dr 1st...u always take ur turn n wenevr its ma turn u run..nw its ma turn 1st
rey:no baat cutter i ll b 1st..u knw em elder than u n its ma right 1st
kria:ok em nt talkng 2 u...(makes a puppy face)
rey:ok dnt b angry..sorry baat cutter..ok u take ur turn 1st n i ll b next..
kria:ok line cutter nw take a deep breath(she puts the toy steth on his chest) i thnk u ve got a very serious disease...ok here i write u some medicines.go n buy them..this syrup u ve 2 take 1 tsp in morning,evening(hands him a small toy cup in wich there z pepsi) n nw u need this injection..
rey:ok dr kria!!
vick:bro,bro whr hav u lost??
rey came bck 2 his senses...
rey:ok vick!cmon get up n get ready.n best ov luck 4 ur 1st day at school..i wish i were thr 2 cheer u!!
vick:np bro!u always wid me..ok bro...c u!tc!
rey:tc kiddo oops dr vicky!!lolx...
AT GHAI MANSION
kriya z gettng ready wen she gets a call on her phone 4m an unknown no.she picks up..
kria:hello!
no voice 4m the othr side
kria:whoz thr??
still silence
kria:if u dnt wanna speak,y do u call?? n angrily cuts the call...
nw cn sm1 guess who the caller ws??ll mention it in ma next update...
so here finally we come 2 end ov ch 1,sorry 4 no kriyaansh bt thr were a lil bit ov kids kriyaansh😆 ll reveal the MU in the upcoming episodes.till then bear wid me as i need sm space 2 buildup the story n this is gonna b v diff 4m the regular kriyaansh we saw uptil nw..
RECAP:1st day in medical school...lots ov memories...flashbacks...n a suprise😉
note:any suggestions,criticism,wishes ll b entertained.dnt hesitate n tell me😊
CHAPTER 2(direct link)
Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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It was lovely part till now.
will eagerly wait to update it fully.

hmmm s read the full one plz try for longer updates next time.
thanks for the p[m
update next part soon.
Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago

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