dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 11

The moon ws hiding behind the clouds..kriya ws dying ov hunger n so ws rey..

He ws remembering her mano n she her teddy..

Suddenly they heard the old couple shout

Chand nikaal ayaa!!

Kriya saw the moon n ws delighted..the old couple asked rey 2 feed kriya..

She ws feeling bad tat she fasted 4 rey like always n she z gonna break her fast 4m eagle..

She performed all the rituals in front of eagle(wich z actually rey)keeping her rey in heart'cx she had no othr option..

Nw touch his feet..

She had 2 n he unknowingly touched her feet like he always did wid his mano..

Again he ws lost in thots n she ws shockd'

Then he fed her n she fed him'it ws an epic!!

Then the old couple left leaving kriyaansh alone..

R:whom were u fasting 4??

K:why do u care??

R:cmon tell me na!do u hav a boyfrnd or husband??

K:none ov them actually..i loved sm1 4m childhood bt he cud nvr understand me.he ws his mom s pet who cud nvr c the truth..i ve been fasting since childhood n its become ma habit nw..thou he z nt in ma lyf anymore..infact em sure he wont b evn remembering me'(a tear escaped her eyes,he unintentionally wiped it off,thr ws an odd silence between the 2!)well who u fasting 4??

R:well just lyk u its ma habit since childhood..thou I always try 2 4get it bt smhw I get 2 knw n then I fast remembering tat cheater who played wid ma lyf n emotions..

K:well tat ws real bad!!guess everybody does hav a dark n sad corner in their lyf'bt all boys r casanovas..

R:may b u r rite bt nw I ve 4gotten her n moved on in lyf..i hate her 2 the core nw..bt all boys r nt Casanovas,'

K:really??u cn hate her??i cnt evn thou I tried a lot..i cnt even stop missing him'

R:ok leave the topic.u tell ws medicine ur passion or wr u forced here??

K:well it ws ma grand pa s last wish.he wnted 2 c his eldest grand child as a dr..i em here 4 him only.i wnted 2 b an IAS officer

R:oh!thr r many desires tat cn never b fulfilled..

K:ya I knw'

R:bt still u r lucky..

K:ya I em!!

R:ok.did u evr thnk ov having a boyfrnd n cheating him??

K:well y cheating??he ws never mine bt mayb I cn nvr take any interest in guys aftr him!he ws ma ideal,ma soulmate n my lyf

R:huh!u sound 2 filmy..well I thnk u shud b courageous enuff,go make frnds wid guys n hang out n go on dates..u ll definitely love it!!

K:I guess u r experienced!!

R:any doubt??

K:nt at all..well I ve a frnd of mine flt lt Karan SinghGrover!(nw tat the telephone man)he arranged 4 all this trip..

R:oh karan?he z a gr8 guy bt do u knw he z a Casanova??he broke up wid his 50th grlfrnd last week

K:well I dint ask u 2 cmnt on him..got it??n btw he z just a gud frnd nt a boyfrnd'

R:hmmm'just a gud frnd(n he chuckled)

2 weeks passed wid kriyaansh living at the old man s home.nw rey had fully recovered n wnted 2 go..

OM:son at least take a bath b4 gng..

OL:go help him..u r his wife..

Kriya ws literally embarrassed bt on their forcing,she had 2 go..it ws nt a formal bathroom..thr ws a place whr water ws running (canal water)'

Rey ws applying soap on his body n kriya ws standing wid head turned on the othr side'he asked her 2 apply soap on his back as he cnt reach thr cx ov the wound..she did it wid closed eyes..her touch on his bare body ws driving him crazy..

Wen she ws abt 2 turn,the soap fell on the floor n she slipped..she ws in the midway wen rey caught her waist in his muscular arms..they both slipped in the water'

Kriya got all wet n ws getting drowned wen rey caught her..they had an intense eyelock..she turned 2 move b trey caught her wrist n placed it on his chest..he then cupped her face n started bringing his lips close 2 hers 4 a kiss..thr lips were merely inches apart n she cud feel his breaths on her face'

She came bck 2 her senses n turned away..rey came bck 2 n cursed himself in his mind 4 tryng 2 do such a thng'

Then they returned bck n all their clothes were wet.the couple laughed silently looking into each othr s eyes..then they were given new clothes..they took their leave n started their journey bck

PRECAP:

Back 2 frnds n camping

CHAPTER 12
Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update ...loved it very much
kriyansh lost in jungle and rey fought for kria and kria took care of him and rey applied sandoor that was awesome update...superb
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update tina.
wow they shareda bit of their pain and still didnt understand it was the same.

thanks for thw pm and a lovely update.
yup they r goning to the camp so are kriyaansh gonna get seperated now??😕
plz update next part soon.
Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much
kriyansh completed there fast with each other thats the destiny...superb and shared there deep feelings with each other and the bath scenes were awesome ...loved it very much
continue soon waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing!!!!!!!!
awww i wish kriya knew it was rey himself in front of her while doing the rituals...
n luved the last part wer dey both fell in the water...u truly r an amazing writer...

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Posted: 13 years ago
It was an awesome update but I missed d track dis tym n ended on late commenting!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks dear for the update.

They still kept fast for each other unknowingly.Nice

I thought that rey was going to get slight doubt when kria was telling him for whom she is keeping the fast.

The bath scene was nice n the eye lock hayeee.

I am dying to see their reaction when they will know about each other's true identity,

Plz keep on updating.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Luvd it awesome...dey r tlking abut ech othr bt dey dnt knw it...waitng fr d tym wen dey gt 2 knw ech othr's real identity...
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Posted: 13 years ago
1st Congo for complete 50pages<font size="6">Awesum update bt kriyansh ka romance kb start ho?? Kb pata chalega rey ko ki uski mano kria hai and kria ko ki uska teddy rey hai?? Kb?? Anyway update fast.</font>
Edited by LOV_ARSHA_KREYA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
didn't want it to end..
but it has to end...

bt i didn't understand tht y rey hates kriya. y he feels tht she played with his emotions

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