dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 57

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Originally posted by: aishasully

soo r u gnna update 2dayyy?


Ya..she will b update today.
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I want u to be so happy so Im taking dis page to 90..
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Yipeee Huraaayy...
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CHAPTER 16
thnks a lot frnds 4 ur overwhelming response..i had 2 update on pg 87 n its 90..em so happy!!i had planned special epi on completion of 100 pages as chapter 19 bt nw i thnk i ll hav 2 mk it bit earlier or update faster...em really sorry 4 nt updating..i had ma term exams gng on nwadays n its real tuff 2 update bt ur love brought me here...special thnks 2 snigdha_arsha n all those who cmnted...ll mention all ur names aftr ma term...love u alll

Rey took kriya 2 coffee aftr her school in his starbucks..
She used 2 love tat coffee..they kept on talking 4 half an hr...
R:u never showed me ur home BC
K:well if u knw I live in hostel just like every1 else..its a boarding u knw...n just go home on weekends..
R:so wot??isnt ur hostel ur home??i wanna c ur room...
K:oh!so sorry u cnt!boys r nt allowed..
R:really??i love 2 do prohibited thngs..
K:no ways!!
R:ok tell me ur room no..
K:its 206
R:nyc!!c ya!!
K:no u wont come eagle!!got it??
R:ok ok!!
N then they buzzed off aftr smetym..
At night,kriya came out 4m the shower wid wet hair n drapped in just a big towel,tat ws 4m her chest
down her knees...
Rey climbed the pipe n ws sitting in her window(like always)
He ws lost,lost in her serene n pure beauty!!
She ws unaware ov his presence,opened her hair n patted them 2 dry..as the room wsnt a big 1 so water drops 4m her hair were falling on his face..then she shaked her hair n her hair were on his face..he ws getting lost in her body scent n she ws ttly unaware ov tat!!
Then she started a towel dance(means dance in a towel,nt opening it,put brakes on ur dash thots ppl)
Hum to bhai jaise hain waise raheenge(4m veer zaara)
It ws a full on treat 4 rey 2 watch her dance all wet..he ws getting amused wen she quickly ran 2 the wash room n came aftr 5 mins wid full clothes on(hehehe'no scene)
He ws still watching her..tats wen she noticed him n ws shocked..
K:eagle!ap yahan??
R:c honey!i told u I love impossible
K:stop it!!hw did u come here??
R:4m the pipe!
K:wot??u cud hav hurt urself!!
R:no sweety!i em IAF officers!4got tat?em expert at such thngs n he chuckled
K:so u expert at entering grls rooms 4m windows by climbing pipes??
R:no no u getting me wrong!!its nt like tat!!
K:then its like wot??
R:its like its ma 1st tym I em dng it 4 a grl..bt hav done it 4 IAF missions several tymes'
K:liar!!
R:I swear!!
K:well wots the proof??u swearing by keeping smthng in mind
R:cmon y d I lie 2 u?
K:cx all men r Casanovas..
R:excuse me!!
K:excused'n she laughed'making rey lose his senses
His gaze ws broken by kriya s alarm..
K:oh!its study time!
R:2day I ll join u in ur studies 2!
K:cmon u just cnt!!
R:y??
K:cx u dnt knw anything abt medical
R:I wanna knw..n he came 4m the window 2 her room'
Wow!ur room z just awesome'
K:thnks'
R:ok teach me wot u r reading'
K:no ways!!she started stdyng bt rey kept on disturbing her so she cudnt continue n left stdyng..rey ws on her bed n came 2 her lap..he placed his head on her lap n she started brushing his hairs wid her fingers..
K:ok nw wot do u want?
R:just u!
K:wot??
R:I mean ur company,the company ov ma frnd..
K:tum bohat badmaaash hotey ja rae o eagle!!
R:mention nt n made a puppy face
K:y dint u lemme study??
R:wot did I do??
K:gud!u did nothng..i did everything
R:ya!
K: (showing fake anger) m I tat bad??
R:got up 4m her lap'no baby..u r 2 good n hugged her tight'she resisted tat brought him bck 2 his sense'
K:wot r u dng??thr z a limit ov frndship..snt cross ur limits eagle..u r just a gud frnd n I bear all ur flirty attitude just cx ov tat n u r taking ma frankness wrong'
R:em sorry baby!!
K:enuff!i thnk u shud leave nw
R:ok bye baby n so sorry..ma intention wsnt wrong..
K:I said leave
So he left 4m the same window n pipe..
He ws really very disturbed tat he hurt her..
R:y did u do tat 2 her??cudnt u control ur emotions??she cnsdrs u only a frnd n u started havng positive vibes 4 her...I lost her..i lostb her friendhip,her trust n ma love...
N he cried out loud...
He cried so much tat he cudnt notice a truck coming 4m the othr side..he tried 2 move his car n it crashed into a tree...he had an accident..thr ws blood all around...
PRECAP:
Kriya taking care ov reyCHAPTER 17
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Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing marvellous update tina bdw i am loving ur ff more day by day
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that was an awesome update...
OMG the PRECAP is also awesome...
waiting for next update...
update soon and PM me plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum updt Tina...feelin bd fr rey...Hopefully he's nt hrt badly...
Waitin fr precap...kria takin care of rey..sounds Gud...
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