dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago
wen will u update d next part eagerly waiting for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys ll update soon..
em nt gettng time 4 tat!!
hav 2 complete sme tasks homeworks etc n prepare 4 tests aftr vacations,tats y a bit bzzy!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt...
trip ws awesome..
plzz updt soon...
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CHAPTER 13

(guys i had 2 update it aftr a day bt due 2 v sad n hopeless cv s n all ppl sad,this is just ma effort 2 cheer u up guys n this update ws written by me 2 days bck!!plx ignore the errors as i ve nt proof read it!!dedicated 2 snigdha!!hope u change ur plan ov leaving aftr reading this!!)

Rey n kriya hav exchanged their nos by the end of their trip..he promised 2 call her in Mumbai..n then aftr havng a long,enjoyable n unexpected trip,they went off bck 2 mumbai!!isnt it strange tat they never asked each othr abt their real name n used 2 call them by their nicks,nw tats wot I call as true love..

R:bye baatcutter..ll call u soon!!

K:bye eagle n thnks

R:hey baatcutter!thr z no thnks or sorry in frndship so u take ur thnks bck..infact ryt nw..thnks baat utter

K:nw wots tat eagle??

R:em returning u ur thnks baat cutter

K:ok accepted

Rey s POV

God!she z so cute!!n irresistible..i wish she stays in front ov ma sight 4ever!!

Thou she z a baat cutter bt idk y wen she speaks I feel like I shud keep listening 2 her..her voice z musical n her touch z magical..i thnk em startng 2 feel smthng 4 her.wen ll she understand tat??

Kriya s POV

Eagle z nt as bad as I thot.he ws thr wid me the whole night.i ws in shock.he cud hav done anything wid me n I cudnt hav done anything bt still he maintained his limits n dint evn look at me..he saved ma lyf several tymes n also helped me out.he z so nyc n caring

BACK 2 MUMBAI

Kriya n her frnds came bck..she told rey tat she reached thr safely.he used 2 call her everyday n tell her all the jokes,fun n his lyf.hz it gng on thr n everything.she also shared even the minutest details wid him..they hav become an integral part ov each othr s life.they start their day wid wishing good morning 2 each othr n ended wid good night..smtymes they slept wid their cells on call wid each othr..rey cud hear her sleeping n he even heard her heart beating..

HOLI

It ws holi.kriya woke up early wid rey s call

R:hi baat cutter!happy holi!!

K:happy holi eagle!!

R:so wots ur plan??

K:well plan z tat em gonna go 2 clg n play holi.ma frnds wud also b cmng n we ll enjoy..

R:so u wont miss me??

K:well I ll miss u a lot.hope u were here 2 so we cud hav double masti n fun bt guess tats nt possible..

R:hey dnt b sad BC!u knw I cnt c sadness on ma dear frnd s face..

K:ok em nt sad..c u..tc bye..

R:ok BC!love u n chuckled

Rey thnkng:I knw BC I ll the 1st 1 2day 2 color u!!

Kriya got ready n went 4 college.she ws wearing a white suit in wich she ws looking like a fairy..

All her frnds came thr..thr ws noise of happy holi around..b4 any1 cud colour her,she felt a hand on her face 4m her back'

Happy holi my baat cutter'

It ws rey who came bck 4m behind n colored her cheeks red..she ws surprised n felt v v happy..she turned around n hugged him tightly

Happy holi eagle'ap yahan??

Wo sb baad main.1st take this color n color me b4 any1 else..

She colored his cheeks red'he ws feeling jolts of electricity wid her touch

FLASHBACK

Holi party at singhaniyas

Rey ws sleeping on her bed..shilpa came 2 his room

Shi:rey get up beta!its late n 2day s holi

R:mom plz soney do na!i want sme more sleep

Shi:cmon rey!u cn sleep sme othr day..u knw ur masi z cmng wid her family

R:suddenly got up in bed..ok mom I ll get ready

He takes a shower n wears white dress..then he hears them cmng..he quickly wents 2 bed again,takes his sheet on his face n pretends 2 sleep..he has got colored water gun in his hand..

Kriya comes 2 his room n sees him sleep..she secretively pulls the cover n b4 she colors him he colors her..

R:happy holi mano

She pretends 2 b angry

K:huh!!

R:hey mano!wot happened ??

N she quickly turns n colors him..they started havng a water fight n then they r running aftr each othr wen she slips n lands on the bed.rey who ws standing nearby also by her foot movement ;loses his balance n falls on top ov her'

R:hw ws ma surprise deary??(he waves his hands in frnt ov her eyes)u look lost??

K:no no..i ws just amused by the fact hw did u come here??

R:well I ve been posted 2 mumbai

K:n u dint bothr 2 tell me??

R:cx I wnted 2 surprize u

K:pretends 2 b angry

R:nw dnt pretend..u drama queen..u knw I cn read ur eyes

K:huh!!ok!

R:ok lets play..

They started playing..thr ws a water pool..

Kriya s frnds were noticing tat she z giving them less attention n she z focused on rey..they thot ov a prank..

Snigdha who ws a fresher in the school came up wid a glass 4 rey

s:hi eagle!!this is 4 u!

r:hi thr!who r u??

k:she z a fresher n ma new frnd snigdha n she z asma..

r:hi girls!thnks n sorry.i dnt take bhang..

a n s:bt its nt bhang

a:its just thandai n its gud 4 health

kriya signled rey 2 take it.he took it'both asma n snigdha winked at each othr'

rey held it n drank it in 1 sip'he asked 4 more'the guys gav asma n snigdha a hi-five'

rey drank 4-5 glasses of bhang n he ws high nw..kriya asked him 2 stop bt he wsnt listening'

then he started singing n dancing

rang barsay '.

He took kriya along n thr were several eyelocks..

Then he filled her maang wid vermillion..she ws shockd..

R:BC I love u..i love u a lot..u r mine 4evr nw..

K:eagle u r nt in ur senses ryt nw..cmon let me take u home..

R:no BC em nt gng home..its so cool..

Asma n snigdha laughed wid each othr

So finally kriya ll b happy again.she ll 4get tat childhood duffer teddy who snatched her happiness 4m her..they look soo cute..a perfect couple

Vicky who ws watching it 4m a distance said:ya they r a perfect couple..made 4 each othr..em happy,em v happy 4 bhai n kriya tat finally they ll b 1.hope they 4get the hatred n evrythng'ma bhayyiya n bhabhi'he took a snap of them standing 2gethr hands in hands n looking at each othr..

R:baatcutter u r so damn cute'

K:ok lets go eagle..tell me wher do u live??

He told her..she dragged him 2 her car'

She opened her car door n helped him 2 sit

R:no I ll drive

K:sshhh!!!stop it!!just sit quietly

N she started drivng'

PRECAP:

Kriyaansh 2gethr..holi side effects'

CHAPTER 13

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First 2 comment!!
Loved the update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks alot it was really gud..feeling some how better after reading.I wnt say I will continue d FF's but I will surely try to when Im totally myself without any turmoil..
Thnxx really alot for d characters dey were really gud..
N u r too gud...
Thank u so much!!!
Love u tons!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
snigdha_arsha
Thanks alot it was really gud..feeling some how better after reading.I wnt say I will continue d FF's but I will surely try to when Im totally myself without any turmoil..
Thnxx really alot for d characters dey were really gud..
N u r too gud...
Thank u so much!!!
Love u tons!!!!
dude its nt smthng 2 b thankful ov!u really r ma inspiration 4 this ff!!u boosted ma cnfdnce n i wud like 2 say 4 u jaaney nahi denge tujhe!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow thanks for the update.
snigdha needs it truely.
now to the update. it was amazing.
wow such blossming friendship between kria nad rey.
hope they come to know their true names soon.
thanks for the pm and update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
😉 Luvd ur update and esp ur dedication to Snigda...Kriyaansh ke realization ki ghadi kareeb aa rahi hai I guess and hope they take it positively...guys u pepl r doing a fab job keeping Kriyaansh alive thru ur ffs and as they say pen is mightier than even the willow, so tum logo ke hote hue Kriyaansh hamesha utne hi hot, romantic & wanted rahenge touchwood😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
snigdha_arsha
Thanks alot it was really gud..feeling some how better after reading.I wnt say I will continue d FF's but I will surely try to when Im totally myself without any turmoil..
Thnxx really alot for d characters dey were really gud..
N u r too gud...
Thank u so much!!!
Love u tons!!!!
dude this is nt a thng 2 b thankful ov!!i really owe u a lot..u were ma inspiration thruout 4 this ff!!
u boosted ma cnfdnce 2 write furthur n u made me do evn better!!
n i wud like 2 say 4 u jaaney nahi denge tujhe!!!
i wont let u go 4m IF n d3 forum...

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