Yeh Fitoor Tera episode discussion thread # 1
Toxic headed to emerge a DISASTER
Do you think King shud be postponed?
Nepal Flash Flood Disaster: Hundreds feared dead
CHAPTER 13
(guys i had 2 update it aftr a day bt due 2 v sad n hopeless cv s n all ppl sad,this is just ma effort 2 cheer u up guys n this update ws written by me 2 days bck!!plx ignore the errors as i ve nt proof read it!!dedicated 2 snigdha!!hope u change ur plan ov leaving aftr reading this!!)
R:bye baatcutter..ll call u soon!!
K:bye eagle n thnks
R:hey baatcutter!thr z no thnks or sorry in frndship so u take ur thnks bck..infact ryt nw..thnks baat utter
K:nw wots tat eagle??
R:em returning u ur thnks baat cutter
K:ok accepted
Rey s POV
God!she z so cute!!n irresistible..i wish she stays in front ov ma sight 4ever!!
Thou she z a baat cutter bt idk y wen she speaks I feel like I shud keep listening 2 her..her voice z musical n her touch z magical..i thnk em startng 2 feel smthng 4 her.wen ll she understand tat??
Kriya s POV
Eagle z nt as bad as I thot.he ws thr wid me the whole night.i ws in shock.he cud hav done anything wid me n I cudnt hav done anything bt still he maintained his limits n dint evn look at me..he saved ma lyf several tymes n also helped me out.he z so nyc n caring
BACK 2 MUMBAI
Kriya n her frnds came bck..she told rey tat she reached thr safely.he used 2 call her everyday n tell her all the jokes,fun n his lyf.hz it gng on thr n everything.she also shared even the minutest details wid him..they hav become an integral part ov each othr s life.they start their day wid wishing good morning 2 each othr n ended wid good night..smtymes they slept wid their cells on call wid each othr..rey cud hear her sleeping n he even heard her heart beating..
HOLI
It ws holi.kriya woke up early wid rey s call
R:hi baat cutter!happy holi!!
K:happy holi eagle!!
R:so wots ur plan??
K:well plan z tat em gonna go 2 clg n play holi.ma frnds wud also b cmng n we ll enjoy..
R:so u wont miss me??
K:well I ll miss u a lot.hope u were here 2 so we cud hav double masti n fun bt guess tats nt possible..
R:hey dnt b sad BC!u knw I cnt c sadness on ma dear frnd s face..
K:ok em nt sad..c u..tc bye..
R:ok BC!love u n chuckled
Rey thnkng:I knw BC I ll the 1st 1 2day 2 color u!!
Kriya got ready n went 4 college.she ws wearing a white suit in wich she ws looking like a fairy..
All her frnds came thr..thr ws noise of happy holi around..b4 any1 cud colour her,she felt a hand on her face 4m her back'
Happy holi my baat cutter'
It ws rey who came bck 4m behind n colored her cheeks red..she ws surprised n felt v v happy..she turned around n hugged him tightly
Happy holi eagle'ap yahan??
Wo sb baad main.1st take this color n color me b4 any1 else..
She colored his cheeks red'he ws feeling jolts of electricity wid her touch
FLASHBACK
Holi party at singhaniyas
Rey ws sleeping on her bed..shilpa came 2 his room
Shi:rey get up beta!its late n 2day s holi
R:mom plz soney do na!i want sme more sleep
Shi:cmon rey!u cn sleep sme othr day..u knw ur masi z cmng wid her family
R:suddenly got up in bed..ok mom I ll get ready
He takes a shower n wears white dress..then he hears them cmng..he quickly wents 2 bed again,takes his sheet on his face n pretends 2 sleep..he has got colored water gun in his hand..
Kriya comes 2 his room n sees him sleep..she secretively pulls the cover n b4 she colors him he colors her..
R:happy holi mano
She pretends 2 b angry
K:huh!!
R:hey mano!wot happened ??
N she quickly turns n colors him..they started havng a water fight n then they r running aftr each othr wen she slips n lands on the bed.rey who ws standing nearby also by her foot movement ;loses his balance n falls on top ov her'
R:hw ws ma surprise deary??(he waves his hands in frnt ov her eyes)u look lost??
K:no no..i ws just amused by the fact hw did u come here??
R:well I ve been posted 2 mumbai
K:n u dint bothr 2 tell me??
R:cx I wnted 2 surprize u
K:pretends 2 b angry
R:nw dnt pretend..u drama queen..u knw I cn read ur eyes
K:huh!!ok!
R:ok lets play..
They started playing..thr ws a water pool..
Kriya s frnds were noticing tat she z giving them less attention n she z focused on rey..they thot ov a prank..
Snigdha who ws a fresher in the school came up wid a glass 4 rey
s:hi eagle!!this is 4 u!
r:hi thr!who r u??
k:she z a fresher n ma new frnd snigdha n she z asma..
r:hi girls!thnks n sorry.i dnt take bhang..
a n s:bt its nt bhang
a:its just thandai n its gud 4 health
kriya signled rey 2 take it.he took it'both asma n snigdha winked at each othr'
rey held it n drank it in 1 sip'he asked 4 more'the guys gav asma n snigdha a hi-five'
rey drank 4-5 glasses of bhang n he ws high nw..kriya asked him 2 stop bt he wsnt listening'
then he started singing n dancing
rang barsay '.
He took kriya along n thr were several eyelocks..
Then he filled her maang wid vermillion..she ws shockd..
R:BC I love u..i love u a lot..u r mine 4evr nw..
K:eagle u r nt in ur senses ryt nw..cmon let me take u home..
R:no BC em nt gng home..its so cool..
Asma n snigdha laughed wid each othr
So finally kriya ll b happy again.she ll 4get tat childhood duffer teddy who snatched her happiness 4m her..they look soo cute..a perfect couple
Vicky who ws watching it 4m a distance said:ya they r a perfect couple..made 4 each othr..em happy,em v happy 4 bhai n kriya tat finally they ll b 1.hope they 4get the hatred n evrythng'ma bhayyiya n bhabhi'he took a snap of them standing 2gethr hands in hands n looking at each othr..
R:baatcutter u r so damn cute'
K:ok lets go eagle..tell me wher do u live??
He told her..she dragged him 2 her car'
She opened her car door n helped him 2 sit
R:no I ll drive
K:sshhh!!!stop it!!just sit quietly
N she started drivng'
PRECAP:
Kriyaansh 2gethr..holi side effects'
CHAPTER 13
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