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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Hey y didnt u pm me for the last chapter.

Singdha thanks for completing her demand.
it was wonderful update.
vicky is so cute.
hope kria nattes whole story to rey in unconsiuousness.


Ya I hope so..but d flashbacks r really interesting ryt..
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 9

THis update z dedicated 2 snigdha_arsha❤️
(as tina z medical stdnt so z kriya...😆😆😆 n tina likes pilots so z rey a pilot n kriya likes pilots😉)
Kriya jumped down the cliff bt her hand ws caught midway by rey.he tried 2 pull her 2wards him bt he 2 lost balance n they both fell off the cliff..rey held 4 a tree n they were hanging in the air..

K:leave me.y u held me??

R:cmon grl!u cnt do this..u wr gng 2 die

K:ya!cx u dint left me wid any othr option..just leave me.i ve got nothng left in life.i wanna die'

R:u talk just like baatcutter''

Kriya ws hell shocked'

FLASHBACK

Karwachaudh..

All the wives were keeping fasts 4 their husband s long lives..smriti n shilpa were also fasting..thr ws lots of hustle n bustle in the home'

It ws afternoon.smriti calld the kids 4 dinner..

R:cmon mano!lets go!

K:u go teddy.i dnt wanna go

R:y??

K:em nt hungry..

He thot she z angry at smthng so he took their food in her room..

R:ok baby!open ur mouth

K:plx tedd dnt force me

R:r nt u ma princess??

K:plx tedd!!

R:ok If u dnt like the food,here s the chocolate..open ur mouth..

K:I cnt eat this..plx..

R:bt y??

K:cx its ma fast 2day

R:WHAATT???FAASSSTT???y??

K:dnt u knw its KC n mom n aunty r fasting

R:so they fasting 4 dad n uncle.whom u fasting 4??

K:em fasting 4 u(blushed)

R:oh really??love u(he pecked her cheek,it ws b4 their confession)

K:ya!

R:ok then em nt eating 2!

K:y?

R:cx if u cn fast 4 me,cnt I fast 4 u??

N both dint hav their food..

In the evening

Chand nikaal ayaa,chand nikaal aya'.

They heard tat..

All the ladies were bzzy wid their husbands..

Rey came in kriya s room wid chocolates n bunites..he also brought a sieve n a diya..

She did all the rituals tat she saw her mom dng widout knwng wot 2 say n y??n then she touched rey s feet.he ws touched..he held her 4m her shoulders n touched her feet..

K:ye aap kia kar rae o??

R:if u cn touch ma feet,cnt i??

Then he fed her n she fed him

His thots were disrupted by her cry

K:aahh!!its hurting.leave ma arm,its hurting..

R:ok then move a lil up n gimme ur waist so I cn hold it n save u 4m falling.only then ll I leave ur arm..

K:so u wont agree tat easily??

R:nt at any cost

She bit his hand wid her teeth

R:aahh!!girl r u mad??

K:leave me n lemme die

R:no I cnt.nt till em alive

He pulled her up wid all his force n snaked her waist wid his arms'

Then he ascend upwards wid the rope he already tied 2 the ground..

They reached up n he settled her on the ground

R:dnt u try 2 attempt suiside again or'

K:or wot??

R:or I ll kiss u'on ur..lips..got it??

K:wot??r u mad??

R:lets go!

He held her wrist firmly n they set their journey 2 the mountain..

On the way,she ws walking blindly..

K:ouch!!

R:nw wot??

K:aaahhh!!ma foot z hurting

R:u dumb girl!cnt u c 4ward..he leaned 4wards n tried 2 pull out the thrown 4m her sole

K:aahhh!!its badly hurting

Rey made her sit on a rock n tried 2 pull tat thorn out..kriya felt so much pain tat she clutched his shirt tightly..😳

Thr ws an eylock!!

PRECAP:

jungle scenes(on popular public demand😉)

CHAPTER 10
Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tinatartari

snigdha_arsha

wow!!tat ws quick!!i thnk i shud pm u the update nw as only u were srs wid ma demand😆
updating in 10 mins...
ma update z ready...just posting left!!😉


😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
asmaju dude i pmed u the last update😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
res

unres
It was a wonderful update. yup rey saved kria. its awesome.
update next part soon.
Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tinatartari

asmaju dude i pmed u the last update😭


i didnt get it. its k i read it na...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update was really awesome...First one to comment from d last three updates!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congo for d 4th update on d same day..
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Posted: 13 years ago
this is not fair..

kab se aisa latka ke rkha hai..

good to know abt vicky's pov..

so kriya wud tell rey the stry as eagle or rey...
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Posted: 13 years ago
kriyaansh24
this is not fair..
kab se aisa latka ke rkha hai..
good to know abt vicky's pov..
so kriya wud tell rey the stry as eagle or rey...
lolx...everythng z fair in love n war my frnds!!😉
well i dnt thnk she cn tell him as rey..bt lets c!!
bear wid me n i cn assure u u ll definitely enjoy!!

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