dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 65

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Posted: 13 years ago
woow awsoome mann u killed it cnt wait 4 da next update plz do update asap and pm me 2
tinatartari thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
CHAPTER 18
em really v v sorry guys!!no pms n no color coding..its just the update..ma 3rd update 4 the day!!!n nw em off 4 2 days...ll b bck on thu night or friday if em bit 2 tired n nxt update ll b then 4 a special celebration epi!!!
so mk it upto 111 then...n ll pm 4 updates 2gethr!!!n ll write the next parts aftrwards...
Rey ws hospitalized..kriya came everyday!!n fed him food n read him books n crack jokes n made him happy'vick saw his bro enviously'he dint tell his parents abt the accident or his mothr wud hav come n ruined evrythng'
Kriya ws taking good care of him n they were getting 2 knw each othr better'she took him 2 the park outside so tat he may get well early..
2 WEEKS LATER
Rey got discharged 4m hospital'
R:cmon lemme show u ma bike ride
K:no u r nt well yet
R:cmon dude lets go
He made her wear the helmet n sit on the back of vick s bike..vick took his car..
R:hold my waist tight or u ll fall
K: (hesitantly) its ok n she grasped the back handle'rey drove fast..thr ws a bus cmng so he had 2 apply brakes suddenly..kriya lost her balance n fell on his back..rey turned around n thr ws an intense eyelock..
Rey held her hands in his n tied them 2 his chest..
Then they again set off!!he showed her many different places n then they went 2 a temple n prayed..
K:I wanna tie the thread around the tree
R:ok lets go
She ws tryng hard bt cudnt control ovr it so rey took her hand n his..she gazed in his eyes n they tied it 2gethr..kriya prayed 4 a nice life partner 4 her who loved him more than rey (who cn it b??lolx')
Rey prayed tat he get the 1 wid whom he z tying the thread (so sweet)
Then she went 2 tie the bell..it ws high so rey held his hand n both tied the bell!!then rey rang the bell n kriya held his arm n they rang the bell 2gethr'
Aftr tat they took Prasad n the pandit jee said sadda suhagan raho!!
She felt awkward n he ws inwardly smiling'
Then they went 2 a park'.
R:cmon BC!dont u need 2 tell me smthng??
K: (surprised) tell u wot??
R:ur feelings 4 me
K: (acting nw) wot??wot feelings
R:cmon BC ab aur mat satao na!!!plx say those 3 magical wrds
K:wich 3 magical wrds??
R:cmon na!!
N she started running n rey ws chasing her..finally he caught hold ov her n tied her arms in his arms on her back..
R:say it BC
K:well u shud say it 1st then
R:I said many a times bt u ignore it
K:ok I wont nw
R:ok close ur eyes'she did n he whispered in her ears'I love u my
baat cutter..ll u b mine forever??
K:I love u 2 eagle'ya!!
He jumped in joy'yayaya!!!
N they both hugged..then wen they separated,he moved his lips closer 2 her n took her in an intense kiss'he sucked her lips n relish them..she gav in n opened her mouth more..their tongues explored each othr n kriya moved her hands in his hair..he ws cupping her face n the passion grew more n more wilder'she gasped n they separated 4 air'
It ws their 1st kiss evr n both enjoyed..they rey took out a ring 4m his pocket n slipped it onto her ring finger'tears of happiness slipped 4m her eyes..he wiped them off wid his lips..
R:BC its an event 2 rejoice nt cry!!
K:idiot these r tears of happiness
R:oh!then y em nt cryng??
Kriya hit him on his shoulders'
K:u'u dog!!
R:bhaoww bhaoww
Kriya laughed at his condition'.
It ws getting dark nw n they head 2wards her hostel..wen it came,kriya ws gng inside wen rey got hold of her arm..
R:u gng??
K:yup
He kissed her cheek..
R:good night love!!
She kissed bck
K:good night
N she went 2 her room..she ws very happy n dancing wid joy..it ws the best moment ov her lyf..aftr rey s rejection,this ws the 1st event wen she felt so happy'she ws on top of the world'
Rey calld vick n told him..vick ws really very happy!!
V:finally love birds accepted'
He told swayam n he ws happy 2!!
Nw rey n kriya used 2 talk 4 long on skype'.he met her everyday n they had long meetings..smtymes wen she ws sad cx ov any test she slept on his shoulder..she has become a part ov his lyf..they shared even the slightest detail ov their lyf..
PRECAP:
HAWTEST update ever
CHAPTER 19
Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
tinatartari thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
sharvniC
i need ur pm 2!!ll read n cmnt on thu night or fri morning
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it

finally confession..

main toh keh rhi hun MU clear hi mat karvao.. seedhe shaadi.

plz koi sad part update mat karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update tina;.
loved it.
yaay finally kriyaansh confessed.
lovely update.
next update bhi jaaldi kar do cant wait aftewr seein the precap.

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Posted: 13 years ago
kriyaansh24
chalo tmhari maann li!!
MU ki no clearance abhi!!khush??
n shaadi!!!dnt u thnk ye premarital romance xyada interestng e??
i still hav enuff scenes 4 part 30 widout marriage...n per update at least 3-4 scenes!!!:D
n aftr marriage to scenes e scenes en!!!
bas dekhti jao!!!abhi mene sb ke kehne p plan kia e k ff jaldi end nae karna tu ma evil mind wrkng up
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Posted: 13 years ago
asmaju
nxt update aftr ma mod cx mere ko fail nae hona!!!
mama ne laptop le lena warna :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
acha guys abhi me gng off 2 school...
its already gettng late
c ya..tc n pray 4 me plxx...this mod z v imp...n i cnt flunk it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tinatartari

asmaju

nxt update aftr ma mod cx mere ko fail nae hona!!!
mama ne laptop le lena warna :(


k tina 'll wait.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hawww not fair I m not getting pm's but loved the update tons it was too cute nad sexy

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