dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 45

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Posted: 13 years ago
ok guys!!if u dnt want a swaron track,f9 thr wont b any!!
bt i ll show sme scenes in between in epis!!
bt i ll focus ttly on kriyaansh!!
n thr wud b dreamy sequences...
bt then i need 2 introduce leaps as its nt possible 2 continue new scenes lyk tat on kriyaansh
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Posted: 13 years ago
leaps abhi se...

i mean abhi oh crct confession bhi nhi huya...

kahin aisa toh nhi ki future mein they r mariied and u r showing flashbacks...
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hahaha...no dear!!nt yet!!its a contt story gng nt flashbcks...😭
n thr ll b lots n lots ov twists b4 tat!!😉
thou i ve planned a wedding in store 4 them bt lets c!!
n right nw em updating a very very hot update nw...
n tat z most probably part 18 or 19...
so cmnt quickly,mk it upto 100 4 part 18 or 19 cx it ll b a celebration epi n u r gonna love tat...
my demand 4 the part 13 z 69...
u guys hav 4 more pages 2 go...so plx [plx plx cmnt early n mk it upto 69 n i ll update nxt..
the more quick u complete ma demand,the more quick i ll update n the more scenes u ll get n the celebration epi z definitely gonna b rocking!!!😆😆😆
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6 more to go for dis page..
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Hey Vaishu..
Thnks for joining yar..making d work more easy...

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Originally posted by: kriyansh24

abhi bhi baaki hain?????


Ya just 1 more page left..
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CHAPTER 14

She drove him 2 home..

On the way he ws tryng 2 touch her,smell her hair n said thngs

R:my baat cutter!i really love u.i love u a lot..u knw I love u more than her..she broke ma heart'bt I cudnt stop loving her..i told myself tat I hate her bt I cudnt..she always remained in ma heart'I buy a present 4 her on her evrybday..i cut her bday cake..i do evrythng 4 her tat we used 2 do 2gethr..u r smwhot lyk her'bt u r more cute n nyc..prms me tat u wont leave me?

KLws confused wot 2 do??rey ws constantly begging)ok ok chill eagle!i wont leave u as u r ma frnd na!

R:nt just frnd,u r more than tat

K:ya!u r ma gud frnd

R:nt just gud frnd,u r more tan tat

K:well ur apartment came

Kriya took him 2 his apartment n opened the door as rey has given her the key already'

She struggled n brought him 2 the door..she stumbled as she cudnt take his weight completely..she ws abt 2 trip n rey caught her in his muscular arms'thr ws an eyelock n he pulled her closer'he cupped her face n ws abt 2 kiss wen she backed'

Then she took him 2 his bedroom aftr a hit n trial process'.(lolx'em a mediac na,so I ll try 2 incorporate medical terms wherever I cn)

Kriya tried 2 place him on his bed bt lost her balance n fell on top ov him..thr ws an intense eyelock'

She moved b trey caught her by her waist n pulled her closer..she struggled b trey turned n pinned her 2 bed..she raised her arms in defence n rey crossed his fingers wid hers(imagine the kabbadi scene)

Nw both her hands were in his grip n his fingrs were crossing hers..no mattr hw much she ws struggling bt cudnt get outta his hold,he came closer n closer nw their heart beats touchng each othr n their hearts were pounding such tat the thuds were audible'

He brushed her lips wid his..it ws electrifying..she gav in n opened her mouth 2 giv him space'his grip on her hands loosened n she held her hairs in her hands'

N he fell on top ov her unconscious(lolx'tina cnt go 2 far cx I wanna keep their love pure..lolx')

Nw kriya came bck 2 her senses cursing her wot ws abt 2 happen..she tried 2 get up bt cudnt as rey ws on top ov her'

N she slept in tat posture..

Rays of light fell in her eyes forcing her 2 wake up..she saw herself cuddled wid rey..she ws ashamed bt tried 2 pacify herself sayng he ws high'so she tried 2 rise bt her hands were entwined wid rey s..they were holding hands..so she kept on drooling ovr him till he wakes up..

He woke up n turned 2 look direct into her eyes'it ws then did he realize tat they were holding hands.so he loosened his grip wich made kriya conscious n she stood up'he ws still havng a hangover n cx ov tat he had headache n blurred vision..

She rushed 2 the kitchen n made lemon water 4 him'n brought it 2 him..rey drank it widout any question n felt better..

K:hw r u feeling nw eagle??

R:much better

K:oh!tats cool!!

R:hw did I come here n wot happened last night??

K:well nthng special!u wr high n talking strangely so I brought u here'

R:thnks

K:thnks 4 wot??em ur frnd na?n tat ws ma duty!thr z no thnks or sorry in frnds'

R:ok babe!i take ma thnks bck.happy??

K:a lot..n she smiled'ok nw I thnk I shud leave

R:well y??

K:cx I ve 2 go bck 2 ma home..

R:nt b4 u hav ur breakfast..sit I ll make it 4 u

K:cmon eagle!thr z absolutely no need ov tat!

R:no but vut!its a frndly order..

K:ok flt lt!!!

He went 2 the kitchen n started making food 4 her..he ws expert at making dishes as he ws a bachelor n aftrall an airforce personnel!!!

He made pasta n served it on the table..then he called kriya'

R:cmon baatkutter..come quickly

She came n sat on the chair

R:ok nw taste it

K:yummyyy!!its so tasty..u r a gr8 cook..i nvr cooked in ma lyf xcpt in childhood'

FLASHBACK

Kriya made sm recipe of omelette tat she read in the newspaper 4 rey..she asked him 2 come 2 her room'

K:u knw wot?i made this esp 4 u

R:wow!!tats gr8!lemme taste'

Rey s eyes started watering bt he wiped n said'

R:yumm!!tats delicious.i loved it ttly'

K:really??bt y ur eyes watering??

R:cx it reminded me ov ma mothr s food

K:did I cook tat gud??

R:gud??u were fab!!

K:so I shud try tat 2

R:hell no!i wont share it wid u..its mine

K:I want it 2!!

N he started 2 snatch it 4m her..they had a brief fight n rey ate all..only 1 piece ws left n kriya caught it'

Rey bellowed his eyes in defeat'

Wen she tasted it,she shrieked n spat tat all'

K:yuck!!its so spicy!!water,water,water

n they drank the whole jug half half'

rey ws swaying his hands in front of kriya

r:hey!whr u get lost??do u hav sme bf or wot??

K:eaggllee!!errr!!!

R:oops!!ouch!!

K:behave urself

R:sorry madam'so hz the breakfast

K:it ws awesome

R:well then I deserve a kit kat break'

She hugged him n kissed his cheek unintentionally..later she felt awkward'

R:wow!tat ws awesome

K:feeble smile'ok cn I leave nw??

R:4o sure!bt lemme drop u

So they set out 4 her school'nw imagine kriya in yesterday s dress bt she cnt go home n change cx she d b late 4 lecs'

PRECAP:

Rey saw kriya s dance

Kriyaansh dance

CHAPTER 15
Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago

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