dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 31

we reached page 45...tina update

Originally posted by: lovely7010

hiii im maneet
friends...
n page demand to i dunno

hii mannet..my self shaffy
n frnds 😃

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

hi shaffy,
so when ur exams start and whats thee first.

page demand i believe is 45

hii vaishali
xams are in may n i don't knw whts da first xam

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

hii mannet..my self shaffy
n frnds 😃

hey im 15 n how old r u???

Originally posted by: tinatartari

kriyaansh24

i was asking about the karvachauth flashback...
so basically mom kriya ko pasand nhi karti
par romantic scenes toh milenege.
am saying 2 weeks ke liye make kriyansh stranded in jungle.. i mean landslide, avalanche kuch ho gaya and they can't get out..
kriya will be telling abt her Lovestry to rey as aegle or rey..
fir bhi rey doesn't believe her.. just plant the doubt seed in his mind

oh just done writing wid the next update n i ve made their way bck 2 their frnds..cx i thot those jungle scenes were getting boring n repetitive n 4 more n more intense scenes i had decided smthng else..

so fir ab kia kiya jaaye???😕

plz tell quick shud or shudnt i update??cx then ll hav 2 mould the story just lyk tat!!😳

Hey tina...
I read all the parts..they are just amazing...
Loved the flasbacks...and the story its just awesome...
Plz can u pm me nxt time u update..

CHAPTER 10

(On popular public demand I ve 2 ammend the story a bit..n ve added this chapter..

It ll cover their 2 weeks stay in the forest..)😉

Rey pulled out the thorn 4m her sole wid a jerk..

She shouted:aahhh!!

R:nikal gayya..r u feelng better nw..

K:ya much better..

Ok lets go..they set on 2 go...darkness ws setting in n still thr ws no way out...then it ws midnight..rey wnted 2 find at least sme place 2 stay as it ws getting cold n dark n he knew she suffered 4m hypothermia before..he saw lights at sme distance..

He took kriya wid her thr..she ws limping due 2 tat thorn s wound..thr he saw a straw hut on a tree..it ws lightened..thr ws a wooden ladder 2 climb the tree..he held kriya in his arms..she snaked his neck wid her arms n he ascended..thr ws no1 around..it ws an IAF hut made 2 monitor the enemies during war..

He placed her on the ground n lit the fire..

R:well we cudnt find the way.just go 2 sleep

K:no ways!sleep??here??in front ov u??never..

R:cmon BC u ve 2!u r already weak cx ov hypothermia..

K:bt I cnt trust u

R:ok I ll face the othr side.f9??

N he moved 2wards the othr side of the tree..

R:nw sleep..

K:ok

N they both slept..as they were bit close,aftr they slept,they lied down n were in each othr arms 1ce again...

MORNING

Rey woke up.he saw kriya knelt down n praying 2 her universejee!!

K:plz universe jee!!let me meet ma frnds soon..

Rey ws mseumerized by her beauty n again he ws shockd on the word universe jee!!so she calls god universe jee lyk her..rey!man!wot r u thnkng??hw cn she b her??r u mad??

They again set 4 their journey..the cold weathr ws impeding their progress..

Suddenly some goons started following them..kriya hid herself behind rey n clutched her collar firmly'her othr hand ws holding his arm..he cud feel her touch n ws rejoicing it!!

Then he fought wid the goons n got injured..they then searched 4 a mud hut..they knocked at the door bt no1 ws thr..rey ws badly injured n he had 2 bullet wounds also..

Kriya ws really tensed at his cndtn..he ws fainting..

K:r u ok??plx dnt faint

R:dnt worry em fine..n he almost fainted..

Kriya ws cryng,tears constantly shedding 4m her eyes..

Rey:BC I thnk its due 2 the bullet wound..do u knw hw 2 remove bullet 4m the body??

K:yup.i ll..

He then fainted..she splashed water on his face wich ws in a jug placed nearby..then she removed his shirt..his well toned n shaped body made her go LALALA

She then searched 4 a knife n a candle..she warmed the knife wid a candle n stabbed him whr thr ws the bullet..he ws semiconscious..he shrieked

R:aaahhh!!!!n clutched her hand firmly..

She ws continuously cryng n she shut his mouth wid her hand so tightly tat he bit her in pain..she felt strong pain bt dint shriek..

Then she removed the othr 1 n same happened..then she cleaned his wound wid a cloth wipe in the living room'then she bandaged n dressed him'she held his hand in order 2 sooth him..he ws semi conscious..then she ws sitting thr n it s night n she unconsciously placed her head on his chest n slept..

They woke up in the morning wid the sudden voice ov the door opening..kriya became frightened..

An old man n an old lady came

Old man:who r u n wot r u dng here??

Old woman:I thnk they r a newly wed couple n they came here 4 their honey moon n got lost in the forest..

K:no,no..we r nt'

R:tightly clutched her hand asking her 2 stop..we r nt on honey moon.we came here wid our frnds..

Old man:means u nt husband wife??

R:no no we r husband wife bt we came here wid our frnds..

OM:ok ok..i thnk u r injured

R:ya!sme goons started following us..

OL:lemme bring sme hot milk n medicine 4 u..

She brought a balm n hot milk n asked kriya 2 apply it

OL:grl!u apply this balm on ur husband s arm..

She shyly took it,the old lady n man went in the othr room n she removed his shirt n applied it..

All thru the time they were looking in each othr s eyes..

R:senorita!u ll become a gr8 wifey!i cn bet

K:stop it u monkey!y did u say 2 the couple tat we r couple??hw dare u??

R:aww!!u look so cute wen u r angry!!

K:u'u dog!!

R:hawww!!!

They were quarelling wen the old couple came bck..

OM:u look so cute 2gethr..

OL:made 4 each othr..

R:ok we gotta go!!bye..

OM:whr r u gng??i ll nt allow u ppl 2 leave..u r injured n cnt travel..(2 old lady)thr clothes r torn.i thnk u shud giv her ur clothes

She took kriya 2 the othr room n gav her her sari 2 wear..kriya being kriya dint knw hw 2 wear it..she tried bt failed..

OL:oh!this new generation!u r married n dnt knw hw 2 wear a sari..it must b ur love marriage..

Then he taught her hw 2 wear a sari..she came out n rey ws mseumerized 2 c her in Indian dress..she ws looking pretty n he ws dumbstuck'

OM:u 4got 2 giv her sindhoor(vermillion)bring it

OL came wid vermillion n ask kriya 2 wear it wen old man stopped her n asked rey 2 put it in her maang..

Rey reluctantly put it in her maang'

Then the old couple came wid lunch..kriyaansh hav nt eaten anything 4 2 days'

OL:hav lunch children!

K:u take it..thnks aunty

R:y u nt eatng anything??u ve nt eaten anything 4 2 days...

K:its ma karwa chaudh vrath..

R:oh!i 4got its ma vrath 2!

Old couple so sweet..we just 4got..we r gonna fast nw 2!!

PRECAP:

Jungle scenes contdd😉😉

nw hw z the update??sorry em bit late..n the hut on the tree idea ws given by aditi!!⭐️

CHAPTER 11

Hope Im d first one to comment again..

The update was really amazing..Loved it tons!!!