dil se rey:kriyaansh ff(ch 19-pg 117)6th apr - Page 50

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww snigdha!!
i really appreciate ur efforts..
chalo only 4 u em updating..
jitna b o u cn!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
4 more to go..

Oops sorry..3 to go..
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Only 1 comment left for dis page..
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I will be spamming until u update..😃
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CHAPTER 15

sorry sweeties no pms 2day as hav 2 prepare 4 assessment n this is a pre cooked update😉

He left her 2 school n went on his duty!!thr he cudnt concentrate bt he had a flight so leaving her thots aside he went 4 it!

He came bck weary n thot ov visiting her'it ws past her school..

He searched 4 her evrywhr n thot mayb she has left'he turned 2 leave'suddenly he heard the song coming 4m the rehersal hall'he went thr n saw the most captivating scene ov his lyf..

Kriya on the dance floor doing salsa n contemporary on dil ye bekarar kyun hai??

He ws mseumerized n the way she ws dng each step cleanly n beautifully ws just applaudable..he kept on watching her..she had 2 swirl n wen she did,she saw him n lost her balance n ws abt 2 trip..

He rushed 2wards her n held her in his arms nt it ws 2 late..she had got a cramp in her foot..she vinced in pain..he helped her 2 the nearby couch n made her sit..then he twisted her foot 2 remove the cramp..she shrieked in pain bt it ws gone'

K:thnks

R:no thnks n sorry in frndship.bhool gayye??

K:oh!!i take mine bck

R:better.well u nvr told me u dance so well

K:cx u nvr asked me

R:well point e!!

K:lolx'

n he saw her laughing n got lost in it..

his trance ws broken by Vicky who came 4m behind..

v:all set??

R:wot??

V:I mean its home tym ppl!!

K:ok!!

N they both went out 2 leave'rey dint wnt 2 show kriya tat vicks z his bro cx then she d b conscious n wont b tat frank as b4..he told her 2 vicks who ws inwardly happy at tat n agreed'

They both went away..rey left him home n sped 2wards his'
AT HOME

V:hmm'setting on full swing..ahem ahem..

R:stop it dude!she z just a gud frnd..

V:wow!just a gud frnd??well I saw ur super hot chemistry on holi day n then the rehersal hall n then u telling me nt 2 disclose 2 her u r ma bro n still just good frnds!!

R:chotey!cn u tell me 1 thng??

V:sure bhai

R:wots her name??

Vick who ws sipping coffee spat all tat n laughed madly'

R:wots wrong??wot did I asked tat funny??

V:well u knw her 4 so long n still dnt knw her name??

R:I cudnt dare 2 ask her..she might feel bad

V:hmm'.ma sher fears sm1!!interestng..well bhabhi jee ka name e neeti!!

R:bhabhi wot??

V:dnt u knw tat even??bhai s wife or wife-2-b z calld bhabhi!!

R:chotey teri toh!!n he ran aftr him

They kept on playing this game n then sat on the floor panting'

R:sudhr ja chotey warna!!

V:warna kia bhai??if u do anything wrong wid me,em gonna tell ur feelings 2 bhabhi!!remember she z ma frnd??

R:no vicks!u wont do it..

V:yes bro!i ll do it (he showed him his tongue n laughed at his helplessness)

R:comon nw hav food..

V:looks like thr z sme pasta already cooked in the fridge n tat z fresh 2!hmmm'..(he laughed sarcastically)

R:well..umm..actually..

V:oouch!!

R:stop it chotey!!

V:bhai!!i cnt even tell u 2 stop it..jaqb pyaar kia tu darrna kia??go n tell her na!!i want ma bhabhi soon

R:chotey behave

V: (making a puppy face)wot did I do??

Then they had dinner wid Vicky teasing rey n then vick took his permission 2 leave

V:bhai!nw I gotta go bck 2 hostel..its getting late n I need 2 wake up early morning 4 ma ward rounds..

R:y dnt u stay here 2nite?i ll leave u 2 school 2moro

V:no bhai!i ve promised ma frnd 2 teach her pharma'

R:her??hmmm'caught u!!!(n he smiled mischieviously)

V:no bhai she z just a frnd

R:just a frnd?cool!!tryng 2 pull ma leg n saving ur skin??cool!!chal aj chora tujhe!!

V:ok bhai!!bye..love u (n he kissed him)

R:love u 2 chotey!!bye!!

The 1st thng he did aftr gng out of rey s apartment ws 2 call swayam

V:hi bro!wots up?

Sw:hi nthng chotey!u calling me tat late.z evrythng fine at ur end??i mean did rey kriya came 2 knw abt each othr??

V:nt yet bt they ll knw it soon'we need 2 do smthng b4 its 2 late dude'

Sw:1st tell me wots the progress??

V:scene z on dude!he chuckled..bro ws asking me her name n I said its neeti..bt hw much cn I hide??kriya z still unaware ov his name n the fact tat we r brothrs..

Sw:interesting!!nw we need 2 plan smthng filmy!!ok lemme thnk!!

V:ok bro!!u thnk n inform me..nw I gtg 2 teach ma frnd pharma

Saw:ok c ya!tc

V:tc

Swayam started thnkng wot 2 do?he went 2 his frnd capt kartik s room n told him the story..he ws a Casanova n knew hw 2 impress grls n set stories..

K:hmm..sounds interesting..well I ve an idea..

Sw:wow gr8!i expcted tat 4m u..gud tell wots the idea??

K:'''..

Sw:wow!!tats awesome..em damn sure it ll work!!n gav him a hi-five

PRECAP:

Paas,paas aur paas😉

CHAPTER 16

Edited by tinatartari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First one to lyk n comment..yupiee!!!
I will comment abt d update after reading.
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Posted: 13 years ago
snigdha ye lo update n its just 4 u :)
ya sure read n do cmnt..
i ll w8 4 ur cmnt!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kriya dancing n slipping on seeing rey..rey holding her was wow!!!!
N liked d rey n vicky's convo n relationship!!!!
Swayam is such a sweety yar..he always have ideas for kriyaansh!!!
Lovely update..
Thnks tina..
Luv u so much..
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Posted: 13 years ago
snigdha_arsha
np dear :)
its always u who inspire me 2 write mre n more n dnt wrry vick has got v fab plans 4 them..just w8 n watch ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tinatartari

snigdha_arsha

np dear :)
its always u who inspire me 2 write mre n more n dnt wrry vick has got v fab plans 4 them..just w8 n watch ;)


Ya sure wud b waiting for further parts too..

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