Yeh Fitoor Tera episode discussion thread # 1
Toxic headed to emerge a DISASTER
Do you think King shud be postponed?
Nepal Flash Flood Disaster: Hundreds feared dead
CHAPTER 15
sorry sweeties no pms 2day as hav 2 prepare 4 assessment n this is a pre cooked update😉
He left her 2 school n went on his duty!!thr he cudnt concentrate bt he had a flight so leaving her thots aside he went 4 it!
He came bck weary n thot ov visiting her'it ws past her school..
He searched 4 her evrywhr n thot mayb she has left'he turned 2 leave'suddenly he heard the song coming 4m the rehersal hall'he went thr n saw the most captivating scene ov his lyf..
Kriya on the dance floor doing salsa n contemporary on dil ye bekarar kyun hai??
He ws mseumerized n the way she ws dng each step cleanly n beautifully ws just applaudable..he kept on watching her..she had 2 swirl n wen she did,she saw him n lost her balance n ws abt 2 trip..
He rushed 2wards her n held her in his arms nt it ws 2 late..she had got a cramp in her foot..she vinced in pain..he helped her 2 the nearby couch n made her sit..then he twisted her foot 2 remove the cramp..she shrieked in pain bt it ws gone'
K:thnks
R:no thnks n sorry in frndship.bhool gayye??
K:oh!!i take mine bck
R:better.well u nvr told me u dance so well
K:cx u nvr asked me
R:well point e!!
K:lolx'
n he saw her laughing n got lost in it..
his trance ws broken by Vicky who came 4m behind..
v:all set??
R:wot??
V:I mean its home tym ppl!!
K:ok!!
N they both went out 2 leave'rey dint wnt 2 show kriya tat vicks z his bro cx then she d b conscious n wont b tat frank as b4..he told her 2 vicks who ws inwardly happy at tat n agreed'
They both went away..rey left him home n sped 2wards his'
AT HOME
V:hmm'setting on full swing..ahem ahem..
R:stop it dude!she z just a gud frnd..
V:wow!just a gud frnd??well I saw ur super hot chemistry on holi day n then the rehersal hall n then u telling me nt 2 disclose 2 her u r ma bro n still just good frnds!!
R:chotey!cn u tell me 1 thng??
V:sure bhai
R:wots her name??
Vick who ws sipping coffee spat all tat n laughed madly'
R:wots wrong??wot did I asked tat funny??
V:well u knw her 4 so long n still dnt knw her name??
R:I cudnt dare 2 ask her..she might feel bad
V:hmm'.ma sher fears sm1!!interestng..well bhabhi jee ka name e neeti!!
R:bhabhi wot??
V:dnt u knw tat even??bhai s wife or wife-2-b z calld bhabhi!!
R:chotey teri toh!!n he ran aftr him
They kept on playing this game n then sat on the floor panting'
R:sudhr ja chotey warna!!
V:warna kia bhai??if u do anything wrong wid me,em gonna tell ur feelings 2 bhabhi!!remember she z ma frnd??
R:no vicks!u wont do it..
V:yes bro!i ll do it (he showed him his tongue n laughed at his helplessness)
R:comon nw hav food..
V:looks like thr z sme pasta already cooked in the fridge n tat z fresh 2!hmmm'..(he laughed sarcastically)
R:well..umm..actually..
V:oouch!!
R:stop it chotey!!
V:bhai!!i cnt even tell u 2 stop it..jaqb pyaar kia tu darrna kia??go n tell her na!!i want ma bhabhi soon
R:chotey behave
V: (making a puppy face)wot did I do??
Then they had dinner wid Vicky teasing rey n then vick took his permission 2 leave
V:bhai!nw I gotta go bck 2 hostel..its getting late n I need 2 wake up early morning 4 ma ward rounds..
R:y dnt u stay here 2nite?i ll leave u 2 school 2moro
V:no bhai!i ve promised ma frnd 2 teach her pharma'
R:her??hmmm'caught u!!!(n he smiled mischieviously)
V:no bhai she z just a frnd
R:just a frnd?cool!!tryng 2 pull ma leg n saving ur skin??cool!!chal aj chora tujhe!!
V:ok bhai!!bye..love u (n he kissed him)
R:love u 2 chotey!!bye!!
The 1st thng he did aftr gng out of rey s apartment ws 2 call swayam
V:hi bro!wots up?
Sw:hi nthng chotey!u calling me tat late.z evrythng fine at ur end??i mean did rey kriya came 2 knw abt each othr??
V:nt yet bt they ll knw it soon'we need 2 do smthng b4 its 2 late dude'
Sw:1st tell me wots the progress??
V:scene z on dude!he chuckled..bro ws asking me her name n I said its neeti..bt hw much cn I hide??kriya z still unaware ov his name n the fact tat we r brothrs..
Sw:interesting!!nw we need 2 plan smthng filmy!!ok lemme thnk!!
V:ok bro!!u thnk n inform me..nw I gtg 2 teach ma frnd pharma
Saw:ok c ya!tc
V:tc
Swayam started thnkng wot 2 do?he went 2 his frnd capt kartik s room n told him the story..he ws a Casanova n knew hw 2 impress grls n set stories..
K:hmm..sounds interesting..well I ve an idea..
Sw:wow gr8!i expcted tat 4m u..gud tell wots the idea??
K:'''..
Sw:wow!!tats awesome..em damn sure it ll work!!n gav him a hi-five
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Paas,paas aur paas😉
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Originally posted by: tinatartari
snigdha_arsha
np dear :)its always u who inspire me 2 write mre n more n dnt wrry vick has got v fab plans 4 them..just w8 n watch ;)
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