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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pyar Ki MuRat : KaSam

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
awesome update dear
loved it
really like kasam scene
update soon thanks 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
😳IT WS LOVELY...🤗...
amazing, sooperbo...
chaa gaya jii, ud tumraaa...
chaa gaya KASAM...😍...

kasam ki kasam hai kasam se, humko pyar h sirf tumse...☺️

first meeting just perfect......
soo sweet...so romantic.
samar was under her bewitchment , totally conquered...⭐️...
her eyes mesmerized him...

sooperb attemp-WER IS PHONE BHOOT???''''🤣
DIN HE GET SOMETHING BETTER TO ASK. 🤣
well wat to do, hamari karnika bhot jyada pasand aa gayi samar ko...☺️...

chain, neend sab udd gaya ab tho samar ka.☺️
samar ki tho nikaal padi...😆...

his friends moking of him, 🤣SPECIALLY that lights camera , action part...

his sentence under her trance....fate is nothing if smone has deep desire...😍.ooo...samar tho abhi se manju ban gaya ...😳

wa8ing for next ud...
do it fast.
we can pressurize u, since ur exams r over...

kasam rokksss...🤗...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

ohh woooww..

that was really amazing..

n wat a meeting..

loved it alot...

hopefully they meet up soon..

i really enjoyed the part.

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
hi nivi😃...welcome to IF
the story is really good😊...
plz pm me next time whenever you update it😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
hii m new reader
cradit goes to rashu (sweetsanyo)
plz pm me to
its awsm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Chapter 5

Part 1:

In Boys' Hostel, at 9:00 pm:

Rajiv – Good night bhaijaan!

Samar – Good night bro!

Rajiv sleeps in few minutes while Samar is sitting near his bed and writing something in his diary...

While writing, he looks at corridor's opened door and he moves there to close it and...

He sees Karnika in the Girls' Hostel's corridor!!

Samar (thinking) – Is it a dream? yeah! I am really dreaming...

He looks at his hand and pinches himself... and again looks outside. But there is Karnika!

She is reading a book and Samar ... totally lost again...

Then after sometime she goes inside...

Samar – Oh God! She stays in the Girls' Hostel and her room's corridor is just in front of that of mine!

Samar (deep in thoughts) – Hey! You idiot! What are you saying? She is just like other girls and what happened if you saw her now? But she is unique... Her beauty is unique... And she is very nice girl... and... so what? You are not going to follow your heart!!!

Samar (confused) – What am I thinking?!! What is happening to me!!Why am I so restless?

He could not sleep the whole night as his mind was flooded with her thoughts...

In the morning, in the college (KPSC):

Kaksh – Hello everyone!

All reply (except Samar) – Hi!

Kaksh to others – What happened to Sam?

Harsh – Nothing...

Arjun – Lost in Karnika's thoughts huh?

Samar (retorted) – Just shut up!

Rajiv to Samar – Bhaijaan, Don't worry... She will meet you if your fate wants... (Smiles innocently)

Samar smiles back.

Kaksh – Hey guys! Do you know our Sam is a great poet?

Arjun (Surprisingly) – What! I mean... really?

Harsh – Wow! I am very fond of reading poetry... please Samar just speak out one or two...

Rajiv – Hey! Don't force him, if he wants to share he will... Kyun Bhaijaan?(Right bro?)

Samar is still lost in the thoughts... then after sometime...

Samar – I am going to the class... Are you all coming?

Harsh – Yeah I am... Oh! We should hurry otherwise we'll get late...

Kaksh – Can we go to canteen instead of class?

Rajiv nods in negativity and...

Arjun – Come on Kaksh! Let's go to the class...

Only few minutes are left for the bell to ring...

All the 5 run ... and finally they enter the classroom and the bell rings!

Kaksh and Rajiv sit together and Arjun and Harsh too...

Samar is in hurry but doesn't find any seat...

Teacher steps in and thank god! Samar finally gets a seat...

As he sits, all stand up to wish the teacher...

He manages to stand again and...

He is standing with Karnika!!

As Samar and Karnika stood they kept their hands on the desk in hurry and their hands collide...

Karnika looks at him and is taken aback.

Both – You here?

All sit down but they remain as it is...

All look at them and the teacher too...

He is Mr. Oberoi, English teacher, fat and wears huge spectacles covering half of his face. He is short tempered and of course his class is the most boring class for all students...

Mr. Oberoi – Who are th...

Samar (lost in Karnika's eyes and interrupted unknowingly) -

"Fate is nothing when you desire something deeply,

And world is nothing when you love someone deeply..."

Karnika is also lost in his words of love and is smiling...

Mr. Oberoi – Wah! What a poem!!

Samar and Karnika realising that they are in the class...

Samar – am... a...

Mr. Oberoi – May I know who is the poet of this nice poem?

Samar (unable to understand as he was lost when he spoke those words) – Sorry?

Karnika sits down silently...

Mr. Oberoi – The poem you spoke just now... who wrote those lines?

Samar – A... a...

Mr. Oberoi – I know... I know, it must be one of the great poets like Robert Frost, Shakespeare etc, Now here comes our first topic...(continued teaching)

Samar sits down and gazes at Karnika. Karnika suddenly recognises him looking at her...

As she looks at him, he immediately looks in the book...


Precap - Samar promises something to Karnika.

But what is the promise❓

Jaanne k liye padhte rahiye ff: Pyar Ki MuRat😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

me in blue


Chapter 5(thank for giving ud so early, bas aise hi achho bachi ki tarah regular ud deti raho...)

Part 1:

In Boys' Hostel, at 9:00 pm:

Rajiv ' Good night bhaijaan!

Samar ' Good night bro!(good manners, we shud wish every1)

Rajiv sleeps in few minutes while Samar is sitting near his bed and writing something in his diary...(chalo atleast not studying, mere exam h main tho bed par studies karti hoon.)

While writing, he looks at corridor's opened door and he moves there to close it and...

He sees Karnika in the Girls' Hostel's corridor!!(yehhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dikh gayi dikh gayi...)

Samar (thinking) ' Is it a dream? yeah! I am really dreaming...(yes its a dream which is true...)

He looks at his hand and pinches himself... and again looks outside. But there is Karnika!(bola tha na maine... )

She is reading a book and Samar ... totally lost again...(haye...kinna romantic h hamra samar...)

Then after sometime she goes inside...(che yaar itni jaldi chali gayi!)

Samar ' Oh God! She stays in the Girls' Hostel and her room's corridor is just in front of that of mine!(haina maaze ki baat...!)

Samar (deep in thoughts) ' Hey! You idiot! (no u r not😆)What are you saying? She is just like other girls and what happened if you saw her now?(dude u r in love wid her.❤️.☺️.) But she is unique... Her beauty is unique... And she is very nice girl..(we all noe that...our mugdha is bestest,). and... so what? You are not going to follow your heart!!!(why not...😡.)

Samar (confused) ' What am I thinking?(u r thinking the most right thing in world.😍)!! What is happening to me!!Why am I so restless?(bola na...u r in love!😳)

He could not sleep the whole night as his mind was flooded with her thoughts...(neend udd gayi h, chain kho gaya h...)

In the morning, in the college (KPSC):

Kaksh ' Hello everyone!

All reply (except Samar) ' Hi!

Kaksh to others ' What happened to Sam?

Harsh ' Nothing...

Arjun ' Lost in Karnika's thoughts huh?(correct guess...😆...)

Samar (retorted) ' Just shut up!(why don't u accept it!)

Rajiv to Samar ' Bhaijaan, Don't worry... She will meet you if your fate wants... (Smiles innocently)(yeh! dats like a best friend..😊.)

Samar smiles back.

Kaksh ' Hey guys! Do you know our Sam is a great poet?

Arjun (Surprisingly) ' What! I mean... really?(yesss...)

Harsh ' Wow! I am very fond of reading poetry... please Samar just speak out one or two...(he can't...he don't have any inspiration around, KARNIKA-his inspiration😍.)

Rajiv ' Hey! Don't force him, if he wants to share he will... Kyun Bhaijaan?(Right bro?)....(yes, very true)

Samar is still lost in the thoughts..(khoye raho!). then after sometime...

Samar ' I am going to the class... Are you all coming?

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Teacher steps in and thank god! Samar finally gets a seat...

As he sits, all stand up to wish the teacher...

He manages to stand again and...

He is standing with Karnika!!(yehhh!!!!!!!!!!!, ab maza aayega!)

As Samar and Karnika stood they kept their hands on the desk in hurry and their hands collide...(takdheer hi mil gayi h tho, hath takrana tho mamoli baat hai!...😉...hey main bhi poet ban sakti hoon😆)

Karnika looks at him and is taken aback.(kyunnn!!!!!???????????😡)

Both ' You here?(aur kidherrr......jahan aap , vahan hum🤗)

All sit down but they remain as it is...

All look at them and the teacher too...(aakhoni hi aakhon main ishare...)

He is Mr. Oberoi, English teacher, fat and wears huge spectacles covering half of his face. He is short tempered and of course his class is the most boring class for all students...

Mr. Oberoi ' Who are th...

Samar (lost in Karnika's eyes and interrupted unknowingly) -

"Fate is nothing when you desire something deeply,

And world is nothing when you love someone deeply..."(sooperbo poem jii...samar se jyada credit main NIVI ko dongi...love u.)

Karnika is also lost in his words of love and is smiling...(haye! hamara samar pasand aa gaya karnika ko...🥳)

Mr. Oberoi ' Wah! What a poem!!(oh teri!, ek teer se do nishane...😎...karnika bhi impress and sir bhi!😆)

Samar and Karnika realising that they are in the class...

Samar ' am... a...(bolo nah tumne likhi h...credit lene main kabhi piche nhi htana chahiye...main tho kabhi nhi hat ti)

Mr. Oberoi ' May I know who is the poet of this nice poem?(the person in front of u,)

Samar (unable to understand as he was lost when he spoke those words) ' Sorry?(he forgot english...he asked-May I know who is the poet of this nice poem, ...simple...)

Karnika sits down silently...

Mr. Oberoi ' The poem you spoke just now... who wrote those lines?

Samar ' A... a...(he forgot his name😕?????)


Samar sits down and gazes at Karnika. Karnika suddenly recognises him looking at her...

As she looks at him, he immediately looks in the book...(how☺️ romantic...😍...)


Precap - Samar promises something to Karnika.

But what is the promise❓ (guess is ready-MAY BE he will say-

1)min hamesha tumhare saath hoon😳

2) main hamehsa tumhare liye hoon..❤️

3)main yeh dosti hamesha nibhayonga☺️


Jaanne k liye padhte rahiye ff: Pyar Ki MuRat😆(yeh bolne ki jarurat hi nhi hai...😉...voh tho hum vaise bhi karenge......ud soon.)


love u.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Meri kahani abhi tak adhuri hai,
Sabse milkar bhi lagta hai jaise kisi se
bahut duri hai,
Har lamha jeeta hu zindagi ka apne,
Phir bhi lagta hai abhi aur ek pal jeena zaroori hai,
Aaj tak jeevan me kami thi,
par tumse mikar laga- ab meri zindagi puri hai...

The Perfect Epitome Of Love:
Pyar Ki MuRat - KaSam
Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
lovely update bt im excited 4 nxt ud
what is that promise???
Cont.soon thanks 4 pm luv u dear
u r a vry gd writer

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