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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
awesome update...👏
both are in same class...n they sit with each other...good...

"Fate is nothing when you desire something deeply,

And world is nothing when you love someone deeply..."


i really like these lines of update...n it is very true...
well lets see what samar has promised to karnika...

Meri kahani abhi tak adhuri hai,
Sabse milkar bhi lagta hai jaise kisi se
bahut duri hai,
Har lamha jeeta hu zindagi ka apne,
Phir bhi lagta hai abhi aur ek pal jeena zaroori hai,
Aaj tak jeevan me kami thi,
par tumse mikar laga- ab meri zindagi puri hai...

The Perfect Epitome Of Love:
Pyar Ki MuRat - KaSam

amazing lines...too good...
update soon...
luv u...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

one new RTMC story

wow !!!
Thank u so much dear for making such a nice story 😛 😛
It's awesome I like it so much 😊
continue dear ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
hey nivi ,
welcome to i-f
ur story is wonderful...
and the poems are too good...
i would luv to follow ur ff
plz do pm me whenever u will ud ...
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Hey RTMC fans & My FF Lovers, I have uploaded a video on youtube. It's the first look of my ff : Pyar Ki MuRat. If you want to watch it, just go to youtube and enter the following in the search box, as it is:
fan fiction - Pyar Ki MuRat
Select the first video and do comment how it is.
Hope you all like it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
superb dear😊...

"Fate is nothing when you desire something deeply,

And world is nothing when you love someone deeply..."

i am loving this poetic love story😳...lines u r using r awesome👏...

so KaSam met again😊...great...she knows he is good at poerty but now i want him to know that she sings well😊...that will surely bring them closer😳...

eagerly waiting to know about that promise😍...plz update soon...

& ur video is superb dear👏...loved it😳...keep it up👍🏼...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Nivi_princess

Hey RTMC fans & My FF Lovers, I have uploaded a video on youtube. It's the first look of my ff : Pyar Ki MuRat. If you want to watch it, just go to youtube and enter the following in the search box, as it is:

fan fiction - Pyar Ki MuRat
Select the first video and do comment how it is.
Hope you all like it.



I loved it from the core...

for those who need the link-
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
lovely update dear😊...
but me waiting for the next update more...
plz update asap...
and thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Recap:As she looks at him, he immediately looks in the book...

Part 2:

After sometime bell rings:

Mr. Oberoi ' Class dismiss...

And he leaves from the classroom.

Karnika takes her bag and is about to leave...

Samar ' Hello Karnika...

Karnika (turned back) ' hello...

Samar ' A ... How are you?

Karnika 'A ...fine and you?

Samar ' I am too and...

Jiya (interrupting) ' K, let's go. We are getting late.

Harsh and Pragya look at each other and...

Harsh ' Pragya, you here?

Pragya ' Hey Harsh, Arjun!

Jiya to Pragya ' Err?

Pragya ' Jiya and Karnika meet Arjun and Harsh, my school friends.

Harsh ' Guys meet Pragya...

Arjun introduces everyone... All become friends...They move to the college canteen.

Kaksh ' Err...

All understand that he is going to ask someone to bring burgers; so all order something and ask him to bring it, before he could ask...

Samar is gazing at Karnika and smiling. Karnika feels uncomfortable.

Karnika ' Jiya, I am going to the library, ok?

Jiya ' hey what happened?

Karnika leaves without replying...

Samar (lying) ' I am going to the office...

And leaves before somebody questions...

In the Library:

Karnika is sitting in the corner. No one could see her as there is a big book shelf...

She is lost in reading... It was a love story.

In the book:

Girl ' How much do you love me?

Boy ' You really want to know?

Girl nods.

Boy ' Love...

Karnika is completely lost in reading when a voice comes...

"Love can't be measured, felt it can be,

How do I tell thee?

How much I love!

My love for you is selfless,

My love is timeless,

It's so pure that jealousy hurts the Almighty Above!!"

Karnika looks up curiously...

Samar stands in front of her smiling...

He comes closer to her and sits beside her.

Karnika (closing the book) ' Why are you here?

Are you following me?

Samar ' I am here because I love... because I love to read books (picking a book from the table). And I just follow my heart...

Karnika ' ok! That's it Mr.!

Samar realises his mistake while Karnika is very angry at him and his way of talking.

Karnika ' I am trying to be nice with you and you...

Samar ' I am...

Karnika ' What do you think who you are!

Samar ' It is Library...please low down your voice otherwise...

Karnika ' Otherwise what?

Samar moves towards her, keeps his hands on her mouth, pushes her towards the wall and bents...

Samar ' Shh!

They are lost in each other...

Samar ' I am really sorry... I didn't want to hurt you... I don't know what happens when I see you... I am sorry... Can't we become friends?

Samar moves his hands down.

Karnika ' It's ok... But promise me you'll never do it again...

Samar ' I promise.

Will he keep his promise till the end❓

*******

Hey friends!😃 I know you all were very curious to know about the promise and when you'll read above😲, you are surely going to kill me... But you all know, Samar will surely break his promise...😉

Edited by Nivi_princess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
huh!...promise...
mujhe yaad h, just abhi maine mom ko promise kiya tha ki main 8 am comp band kar dongi.
see silly people abhi 8; 35 am ho raha h , i m still on comp...
heheheheh...
so today's ud -i enjoyed...

off course the best scene was wen samar closed her mouth...they both lost in each other.

the poetic part, i always read twice...
nt bcoz i don't get it in once, just bcoz i love reading it ...

so indirectly propose tho ho gaya, -i donno wat happens to me wen i m wid u????? and even the poem.

i noe he will break the promise...

after all samar n me -EK HI THALI KE CHATTE BATTE H...

WA8ING FOR NEXT.

U R a cool wrier, but damn awesome vm maker...
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
abt dis ud n d previous on - it was awesumic !!! ⭐️
u r a gr8 writer !!!! 👍🏼
d poems add sooo... MUCH 2 d story !!!! 😍
just luvd it !!
n obiously he'l break DAT promise !!! 😆
n d video rocks 2 !!!
keep up d amazing work !!!!
P.S- culd u send d link in d PM ...its easier dat way !!!

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