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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

What an update''''..👏...really speechless...😍

Haye main wari jawan'''main sadke jawan''''..ok now be serious'''.update'''..😎

''''''..her dreamy eyes made him come more closer to her... Chandni closed her eyes... he looked at her pink lips that seemed to be the most beautiful thing he had ever seen...He wanted to feel her lips...''

Naye-naye naina mere dhoonde hain
Dar-badar kyun tujhe
Naye-naye manzar yeh tak.te hain
Iss kadar kyun mujhe
Zara-zara phoolon pe jhadne laga dil mera
Zara-zara kaanton se lagne laga dil mera

'''''..Veer didn't planned anything...it was very unusual for him'''but something was killing him...some thoughts were prevailing his mind... ...he wanted to ask her...he was tired of of himself...he was clueless about his feelings for her''.. it seemed someone was dragging him towards her and at the same time someone was pulling him away from her''.''

Main pareshaan pareshan pareshaan pareshaan
Aatishein woh kahaan
Main pareshaan pareshan pareshaan pareshaan
Ranjishein hain dhuaan haan.

''''''. Even though he left hours back...she was still sitting silently on the bed...there was something strange about him...how could she every time let him come closer to her''Why does she forget everything with his touch... she was unsure of what to do...''

Be-baat khud pe marne lagi hoon
Marne lagi hoon
Bebaak aahein bharne lagi hoon
Bharne lagi hoon
Chaahat ke cheete hai, khaare bhi meethe hai
Main kya se kya ho gayi
Zara-zara fitrat badalne laga dil mera
Zara-zara kismat se ladne laga dil mera

'''''' her life had come to a point where she had to make a decision or she must leave this place and go back to her normal life and never see him again... it wasn't easy, even the thought of it seemed pricking her sharply...''

Main pareshaan pareshan pareshan pareshaan
Aatishein woh kahaan
Main pareshaan pareshaan pareshaan pareshaan
Ranjishein hain dhuaan haa..ho..


Both were restless'''..i knew it will happen''''..😛

The way veer praised her''''and said that she is the queen of angels''''.that was really amazing'...😳.'..but veer don't say that she shouldn't be here'''''couz she is here only for u'''

N after that''''.they were so close''.but reh gaya''..n she turned,he understood n left'''dhat teri ki''''.

The night was sleepless for both of them'''''chand is only thinking that why she is not able to control herself'''why she always get close to him''''well chand u don't know but we all know the reason''..😉'''.n veer is remembering the words said by the old lady''''..😛...But still he was not able to understand what she meant by those words''''..poor guy'''..

N manohar''''wah wah''''kya zabardast idea dia hai''''.advertisement in newspaper'...idiot''😆''..now I really understand why kaka get so much irritated with this weirdo'''..couz his mind is empty'''''..🤣

N kaka is going to ladak''''to find about the language written on map''''.n that too with with manhor''😲''.god poor kaka''''.he has to listen his nonsense talks n useless ideas till his whole journey''''😆

But really hope that kaka will find something soon about the map and veer's fortune too''''before it's get too late''''''But he is leaving both of them alone not knowing what disastrous thing is going to happen in the absence of him'''''

N chand's mother is not believing what kamini is saying'''''.. but still kamini is trying every possible thing to save chand''''.but granny do whatever u can do''''.but remember onething,no one was able to change destiny''''.n nor u''''

N veer is avoiding her so that he can control himself''''..veer try as much as u can but u will never able to do it''''..n same for the chand''''.loved the kitchen scene very much'''..😳

N he just wanted to see her,just for once,he knocked at her door n she didn't open'''.chand u challenged him''''n see what he did'''..

The best n amazing part of the update'''''😍

Veer is so desperate to see har that he climed on her window''''n broke the glass with a wooden trunk''''.n stepped in''😲''.chand is totally shocked n scared''''.even me too'''well I m only shocked not scared''...'.i have never expected this behavior'''..this kind of dangerous act from veer''..😕..'.Well di now I really can say that it is a dangerous love story''''totally different'''..👍🏼

N the last line'''..u know of which line I m talking''''their first kiss''..ho gaya ho gaya''.🥳...'but now what will happen now''?????...😕

Suspense,suspense n suspense''''''we can only wait''''😔

Shit''''di u know I really liked the last part''''that I read it 7 times''' and I really want to read it again''' only the last part from where she closed the door till last'.'..now I m also desperate like veer to know what will happen next'''..n to know the secret behind that white dress lady''''..😍

di know u should understand that why i like this story very much...couz of your different story line and amazing writing style...👏...really can't wait for the next one...😊

plz Update soon di'''..

Luv u''''.😊

thank you so much sweetheart...i loved your comments and wonderful phrases of the songs... i read your comments 7 times...😃... i appreciate your effort of writing beautiful and long comments that makes me so happy...i smile when i read your comments... i will try and update soon sweetie...
thank you so much for liking the story...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

OMG the update was brilliant..👏

thanks Dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

really amzing n superb part di..

loved it..

waiting for wats coming next..

thnx for the pm...

hi dearie...thank you so much for appreciating...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_awan

So happy finally he kissed her hope they will stay together with no bad things happening

hi Maria...thank you so much for your comments...good to read one after such a long time...i am glad you liked this story 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 15



"How do I conceal my emotions that burn without a fire" he said with a fierce look...



She closed her eyes tightly as his hold was strong enough, making her fall for him...with full

petrified paroxysm of desire he lay his lips on hers...



He caressed her body passionately, never letting his lips leave her mouth...Her skin was soft and

pure under his rough hands.



The world seemed to disappear...



For one moment she melted into him...Her lips were full and soft, the connection didn't break...



The power of his lips on hers was alluring...the world was lost to the moment.



After few minutes...




Chandni opened her eyes and pushed him away "leave me" She turned her face and took a few

deep breaths



Veer couldn't tolerate a word of rejection from her and pulled her strongly in his arms...



Chandni wanted to struggle, to reprimand, to complain...but he grabbed her face and kissed her

so forcefully that a lick of flame burned her to the core...



His hold was strong for her and his mouth was crushing her lips...


She tried to pull away as he sucked her lips with force...he felt her body fidgeting...she tried to

push him away but he did not let her budge an inch...



The more she pushed the more he pulled her body strongly against him...



She couldn't bear the pain...tears almost floated her beautiful eyes...her face was red...his one

hand grabbing her by the waist to pull her close to him and other pulling on her silk tresses

simultaneously...she felt his tongue plundering her mouth...




After a long time...



Veer's lips left hers and he walked away to unbolt the door... he turned to look at her before leaving her room...



she looked ferociously at him... but he winked at her...

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Kaka reached the monastery...he looked at the address on the piece of a paper...



Manohar seemed tired of the journey... "Kaka,how many times will you check the address...we

have reached the right place...lets go in"



Kaka walked slowly towards Gompa...it was situated at a distance of twenty kilometers from the

town of Leh.



It was a beautiful monastery of Ladakh...It belonged to the gelukpa order of Buddhism...they

looked at the new monastery situated on a hilltop, to the north of Indus River...



It was a residence of approximately eighty monks... as they entered they saw a rich collection of numerous valuable artifacts and ancient relics...




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Veer entered his room and took off the shirt...his arm was hurting...he looked in the mirror and

saw some scratches on his arms...


he remembered when he was kissing her harshly...she dig her nails in his arms with pain...for

the first time in his life he forcefully touched a girl and kissed her so badly...


His thoughts carried him through the regret, he was not feeling good after what he did with her...

how could he not control his feelings for her, that could have been gentle instead of the fierce

passion that gave her the pain...



After few minutes


Veer was looking at the antique pocket watch his Father gifted him on his last birthday. With moist

eyes he thought about his Father...though he never spent time with his Father but he did

remembered him...


He was lonely...though he had relationship with so many girls in his life...there were so many girls

who loved him but he never even bothered to look at them...his relationship was limited to one

night with every girl...





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Chandni touched her sore lips...she washed her face thoroughly...she touched her jaw and

chin...it was painful for her... she felt like hitting him hard on his head...but at the same time

she knew the fact that she was getting attracting to him...



She couldn't sleep properly...It was difficult for her to hide her emotions, kill her feelings...she

was angry at his behavior but she wasn't prepared to accept the truth that he was the first man in

her life who touched her heart and soul...




She closed her eyes and remembered the day when she saw her Mother crying bitterly...she

couldn't forget that day in her whole life...It was her sixteenth birthday...


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Meenakshi was busy preparing for her daughter's birthday party...


Kamini "i am again telling you...that man doesn't deserve to come here..."


Meenakshi "no mom...he has changed...he wants to meet his daughter..."


Kamini "daughter!!!!...does he even know what it means???? does he knows his responsibilities??"


Meenakshi "mom '.i understand...but if he's regretting and wants to come back and live with us...then what's the problem...i have forgiven him...i know he has changed"


Kamini "you don't know anything...you are again falling in his trap...did you forget how he cheated you before..."


Meenakshi "mom that was fifteen years back...but now he has changed...please mom we can give him one more chance...for Chandni's sake...she needs a Father..."


Kamini "fine...do what you want...but I know him very well...he can never improve..."


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Meenakshi was eagerly waiting for Ragvender, when she got a call from her friend who had an accident and was admitted in the nearest hospital... "mom I have to rush to see Seema...she's in the hospital...will be back soon"


Kamini was busy preparing for her visit to the temple...she always gave offerings to the poor on her Grand daughter's birthday... she left for the temple soon...


After some time...


The door bell rang... Chandni was getting ready...she looked beautiful... she walked downstairs to open the door...


Ragvender was lost when he looked at Chandni...there was lust in his eyes... "can I come in??"


Chandni reluctantly let him in...


Ragvender leered at her "can I have some water...???"


Chandni went in the kitchen...he followed her... somehow she turned behind...he tried to hold her...she managed to get out of the kitchen...she was climbing the stairs when he hold her legs and pulled her down... It was difficult for her to get out of his grasp...but she was a strong girl...with all her efforts she managed to kick him and run upstairs in her room... she bolted the door from inside... he banged the door... tears were floating from her eyes...she was scared...


After few minutes... there was silence...she heard her mother downstairs...

she quietly opened the door...


Meenakshi "but what were you doing upstairs??? did you meet your daughter???"


Ragvender "daughter???? where is she???"


Meenakshi called Chandni downstairs...


Chandni was horrified...she quickly hugged her Mother


Meenakshi looked at Chandni "what happened ??? tell me???"


Chandni "mom this man wanted to molest me...i...i..somehow escaped..."


Meenakshi furiously looked at him "how dare you touch my daughter???? she is Chandni...how could you do that?"


Ragvender wasn't feeling guilty "well I got mistaken...i am sorry"


Meenakshi "no, I won't let you escape that easily...i will call the police...i trusted you again...i was wrong...but this time I won't let you go...you will get what you deserve"


Ragvender angrily pulled her and slapped Meenakshi... Chandni was scared...


he pulled Meenakshi towards the room and bolted it from inside... Chandni didn't know what to do...all she could hear was her Mother's screams... she quickly left the house to call her Grandmother, who was at the temple...


After some time...


Her Grandmother came with few police officers... but when she opened the door she found Meenakshi in a terrible condition...




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Chandni opened her eyes...even the thought of Ragvender scared her... she couldn't tolerate

any man touching her... she wanted to cry but the tears stopped at her eyes... she was not the

one who could share her thoughts easily, she was a stranger even to herself...



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"Fortunes don't tell us everything, somethings are always kept with destiny" Bhuvan was reading the

map... Kaka looked at his expressions that did not seem to change...instead there was a smile on

his lips...



Kaka was desperate to know what was written on the old piece of paper... "Bhuvan please throw

some light..."



Bhuvan took off his glasses...and kept the paper on his side "Kaka...we all have our past

lives...but generally no one is bothered to know or they don't feel the need to know..."



Kaka couldn't understand "Bhuvan please elaborate a little"



Bhuvan smiled "Kaka, this map doesn't say much...it only gives a direction to some old place which

is located far east...may be Darjeeling"



Kaka was surprised "Darjeeling!!!!! but what is there ??? why does this map gives direction to

Darjeeling only???"



Bhuvan closed his eyes for few seconds "Some stories fade with time and some stories want us to

remember them...no matter how old, how mysterious they are...this map tells everything that

happened in the royal family about hundred or two hundred years back..."



Kaka was listening carefully... "so will you able to tell what all happened???"



Bhuvan showed the other side of the map that had some old scribbling with a black ink... "can you

see that Kaka...i can read what's written here"




Bhuvan wore his glasses...




"some hundred years ago there was an old palace in Rajasthan...the great King Maharana Pratap

seated on the thrown for his usual assembly in the main hall... he had a beautiful wife Maharani

Satyabhama who was extremely loyal and spiritually powerful...



she loved her husband more than her own life... but she wasn't aware of her husband's illegal

relationship with different women...



One fine day...Satyabhama kept a fast for her husband's long life...she woke up early and went

towards his palace... as she entered his room she was shocked to see him with a different

woman...



that day she gave the curse to the family "you have cheated me, now you will suffer every

minute...no heir in your family will live after 21 years..."



Maharana Pratap was horrified "Satyabhama, please take your words back...i am terribly

ashamed of my acts... I will not repeat it...i promise...you take your curse back...i can't live

without you"



Satyabhama could feel her husband was saying the truth... "its too late, I won't come in your life

again"



Maharana Pratap took off his crown and kept it at her feet "then I will kill myself now...this crown is

at your feet..."



Satyabhama was touched "Maharana ji this curse will not change..."



Maharana Pratap "but why are you cursing the whole generation?? its my mistake, I will pay for it"



Satyabhama looked at him "no Maharana Ji...you have cheated me and this curse is a lesson for

your coming generations..."



Maharana Pratap "you are a Mother of coming generations...you have to think about them...don't

be so harsh"



Satyabhama stood still "Maharana Ji...you broke my trust...i worshipped you...you were my

God...but for the coming generations, I can only say they will survive only on one condition, they

must have relationship with a pure hearted girl who must have done good deeds in her past

life...only then they will live forever"



Satyabhama turned to walk away...



Maharana Pratap touched her feet "Satyabhama I can't live without you...you have to come back

in my life"



Satyabhama "its not that easy Maharana Ji..."



She said and walked towards the terrace of the royal palace and jumped from the highest point and

died...




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Kaka took a deep breath "now what is the solution? I only want to save Veer"



Bhuvan's frown vanished into smile "Kaka, we have a solution but it only gives the direction and

nothing else...as I told you its a place in the far east...but I can't tell anything else..."



Kaka was in a deep thought...



Bhuvan "Kaka... you must leave some things on destiny...we can only pray for him..."




-------



Chandni woke up and started packing her things... she had to leave for Darjeeling...



As she came out of her room...he was standing outside... "come I will drop you" he said with a smile...



Chandni was still furious "aren't you ashamed of what you have done ??? how could you even talk to me??"



Veer smiled while holding the handle of her bag "let me put it in the car"



Chandni refused to leave the handle "no just leave...i will go myself"



Veer touched her hand...she immediately pulled her hand away "these soft hands are not to carry

bags" he said and picked up the bag and walked towards the door...



Chandni was unwilling to go with him... she stood outside for few minutes...he opened the door

for her "sit...otherwise you will get late"



she stared at him...then sadly sat inside... he closed the door...


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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

first of all thanx for updating it so soon...🤗

updating was really amazing...👏

veer...he forced her...he forced her for that...😲...god reall kabhi kabhi veer bhi na uloon(owl) wali harkate(behave)karta hai...😡

whats the need to bee so rude with her...n to force her...when it was really...i mean their is no need to force her...she also feels something for him...😊

but he can't wait...he was so desperate n eager that he did what he shouldn't do...god when he will understood that it's not lust...it is love...some one bang their heads together plz...😡...do me this favour...

n chand's past life...god that was so horrible...😲

her own father...tried to molest her...his own daughter...how can he moron...b**st***d...s@***l@...uski aisi ki taisi...😡

n he didn't leave her mother too...😡...god i really want to took out my sandals n beat him till he became half dead...😡...aise logo k liye jitna bura bola jaye kam hai...😈

n chand has sleepless night...she is just thinking about what veer did with her...chand you also knew what you feel for him...but didn't understand why she always tries to resist it...why she always try to run away from her feelings...i know what ever happened with her was wrong but that doesn't mean that she always run from herself...when she herself believe that he is only man who touched her n her soul too...😍

n veer is feeling guilty for whatever he did...then why you did that...????...dumboo...😡

n kaka...finally he got the truth about the map...so it was related to darjaling...chand's place...good...😛

but your fr8 was true...sometimes we should leave things on destiny...

n whatever he told about history...maharana pratap...

his wife worshipped him...he was god for her...n he broke her trust...he cheated her...😡...god sab aise kiu hote hai...😡

after having such a nice n sweet wife how can he cheat her...??????...he is a king...😡

n after whatever he did...the satyabhama did right thing with him...👏

he deserve it...she really said it true...it will be a lesson for the coming generation...so no one can cheat any girl or their wife in future...👍🏼

n chand she was going back to darjeeling...n veer is going to leave her till her house...really...well i doubted...😆

god he was not ashemed of what he did with her(well we knew that he is feeling guilty for whatever he did)...but chand feels like this...

n when his hand touched her she removed it...itna gussa...no worries soon you will be more desperate to hold the same hand...😉

n he finally made her seat in car...lets see what this journey will bring for them...😍

but u didn't mention about that white dress lady...after that update...i really want to know...who she was...????????...😕

update soon...

luv u...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res...

~~**EDITED**~~
actually i m suffering from clinomania.😭...very serious disease, u noe??????????
very deathly!

di though i m second today in posting ma res, but still i m first to comment.
so my consistency still stays, n ma record is still maintained.

okay ridzzi di,
apni chotti sis ke liye aap itna tho manogi na!...
ridzzi di gar aap nhi manoge tho main...mai...tho mai...
haan! tho main roo dongi, joor joor se, shoor macha kr,
plzz aap maan jao, verna main sachhi main bhot boora roti hoon!
kaan padha deti hoon!

aap maan gaye na!😳

so lets start wid ud.

(okay di, lemme be a bit naughty wid u!!! i love teasing others...i hav commented, nw its ur job to see it, i promise i have commented...sacchi!)

it ws as usual awesome!.⭐️
mindblowing.⭐️

this dialogue is ma most fav of this story,
i will soon make a siggy too using this dialogue for shikar, 😳

"How do I conceal my emotions that burn without a fire"

by good the kiss description was awesome.

but kiss ws incomplete, yes it lacked our chandini's contribution, i need her to kiss veer!.😒

don't worry very soon evn that time will come...i believe!.👍🏼

she was helpless sealed in his arms but she din participate in kiss.

but by god, veer ws so adamant, he din leave her...☺️...

she struggled but he inserted her in him more.

awesome desco(di frm nw dis is short form of description, okay?)

but the part which screwed up ma nuts of brain ws-🤪


After a long time..


😳.ooo...☺️...u mean☺️ ...lllooonnnggg time...


Veer's lips left hers and he walked away to unbolt the door... he turned to look at her before leaving her room...she looked ferociously at him... but he winked at her...🤣


just loved it like hell, sooper cool, damn icy,😎

i just loved veer dis way,👍🏼

but veer u were rude to her,😭 but kya karta usse chand ne itna tempt☺️kr diya tha ki her rejection ws surely intolerable, unbearable.☺️

flashback of chandini is really miserable, i hate raghavender..😡...

tum mere ho main voh s*u*b*g gaurav,🤬 n yahan yeh scrape on world- raghu chaggu!🤬

hw cud he go so cheap.😡

really pathetic.


di, but rayal family flashback is just mindblowing.👏

i m with satyabhama, hw dare his husband be wid other women.😡

satyabhama died.

hw cn he cheat her,😡if his wife worship him, so loyal, what else the f**k he need.🤬

she u moron maharana,😡 tumhari vajah se veer ki life bhi risk pr h,😡but i noe chand will save him, 😳bt still risk tho ha na!.😡

ver will be veer, no one cn change him, at least for few months more...🤔...add few more months,🤔 add two months more,🤔 add 5 months more🤔 add 4 months more, 🤔add 10 months more...🤔...

conclusion it very long way to go to set veer on tract, chandini its a damn difficult task.

all the best to u!👍🏼

god noes hw will u bear him!.😕


the way he took her bag from her hands, was really so cool,😳

as if nothing happened.😕

he is damn shameless.

but chandini don't be surprised if i tell u dat u r falling for this shameless man🤣

god, he is going to leave her to her house, really????😆


awesome ud di.👏

ud soon!😳

lov u🤗

suggestion,- quote it, n color it for easy reading...or evn simpler, select the text😳


Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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here my chota cmnt
vo maharaj jarur veer hi hoga n vo rani chand
pakka
ap to cha gye ji
pta nhi kha ki story kha tk pucha ji 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

res... thanks for wonderful comment sweetie...i have read it...but i will comment later.cant write clearly on a tablet


<font color="#990000" size="6" face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif">~~**EDITED**~~</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">actually i m suffering from clinomania.😭...very serious disease, u noe??????????</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">very deathly!</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">di though i m second today in posting ma res, but still i m first to comment.</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">so myconsistency still stays, n ma record is still maintained.</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">okay</font><font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="6" color="#ff0000"> ridzzi di,</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">apni chotti sis ke liye aap itna tho manogi na!...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">ridzzi di gar aap nhi manoge tho main...mai...tho mai...</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">haan! tho main roo dongi, joor joor se, shoor macha kr,</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">plzz aap maan jao, verna main sachhi main bhot boora roti hoon!</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">kaan padha deti hoon!</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">aap maan gaye na!😳</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">so lets start wid ud.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3" color="#0000ff">(okay di, lemme be a bit naughty wid u!!! i love teasing others...i hav commented, nw its ur job to see it, i promise i have commented...sacchi!)</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">it ws as usual awesome!.⭐️</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">mindblowing.⭐️</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">this dialogue is ma most fav of this story,</font>
<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">i will soon make a siggy too using this dialogue for shikar,😳</font>

<font color="#fff">"How do I conceal my emotions that burn without a fire"</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">by good the kiss description was awesome.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">but kiss ws incomplete, yes it lacked our chandini's contribution, i need her to kiss veer!.😒</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">don't worry very soon evn that time will come...i believe!.👍🏼</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">she was helpless sealed in his arms but she din participate in kiss.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">but by god, veer ws so adamant, he din leave her...☺️...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">she struggled but he inserted her in him more.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">awesome desco(di frm nw dis is short form of description, okay?)</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">but the part which screwed up ma nuts of brain ws-🤪</font>


<font color="#fff" size="2">After a long time..</font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">😳.ooo...☺️...u mean☺️ ...lllooonnnggg time...</font>


<font size="2" color="#fff">Veer's lips left hers and he walked away to unbolt the door... he turned to look at her before leaving her room...she looked ferociously at him... but he winked at her...🤣</font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">just loved it like hell, sooper cool, damn icy,😎</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">i just loved veer dis way,👍🏼</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">but veer u were rude to her,😭 but kya karta usse chand ne itna tempt☺️kr diya tha ki her rejection ws surely intolerable, unbearable.☺️</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">flashback of chandini is really miserable, i hate raghavender..😡...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">tum mere ho main voh s*u*b*g gaurav,🤬 n yahan yeh scrape on world- raghu chaggu!🤬</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">hw cud he go so cheap.😡</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">really pathetic.</font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">di, but rayal family flashback is just mindblowing.👏</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">i m with satyabhama, hw dare his husband be wid other women.😡</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">satyabhama died.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">hw cn he cheat her,😡if his wife worship him, so loyal, what else the f**k he need.🤬</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">she u moron maharana,😡 tumhari vajah se veer ki life bhi risk pr h,😡but i noe chand will save him, 😳bt still risk tho ha na!.😡</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">ver will be veer, no one cn change him, at least for few months more...🤔...add few more months,🤔 add two months more,🤔 add 5 months more🤔 add 4 months more, 🤔add 10 months more...🤔...</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">conclusion it very long way to go to set veer on tract, chandini its a damn difficult task.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">all the best to u!👍🏼</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">god noes hw will u bear him!.😕</font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">the way he took her bag from her hands, was really so cool,😳</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">as if nothing happened.😕</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">he is damn shameless.</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">but chandini don't be surprised if i tell u dat u r falling for this shameless man🤣</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">god, he is going to leave her to her house, really????😆</font>


<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">awesome ud di.👏</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">ud soon!😳</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" color="#fff" size="2">lov u🤗</font>

<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="3">suggestion,- quote it, n color it for easy reading...or evn simpler, select the text😳</font>


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