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Posted: 13 years ago
omggg! What a lovely update

just mindblowing
loved veer and chand kiss scene
but chand is upset from him oh no chand is so cute n sweet
to veer kaise apni feelings ko control karta
wow what a scene

oh that maharaj n maharani are the veer's ancestors n this is the maharani's cursed which will effect veer in future

and only pure hearted girl save him and that is my chand

feel bad to know her past...his father was so wicked

last scene is awesome yr
update soon

thanx 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
di dis is 2nd installment of ma comment on dis ud.
dis one is a bit serious and practical...

((don't laugh di, i cn be serious and practical in life, 😳dis one i m seriously telling dis😳))

okay, so satyabhama fell as a easy prey of maharana's treachery ...
i feel the ''BHOOTANI'' who came under veer's car n lay next to him is satyabhama!.
but satyabhama ws a good, kind hearten lady,...why is her ghost so rude and scary...she is really scary.
well may be the harsh experience made her gi dis way!😭

so one clue is solved......phew!!!

but that crown thing still rests, additionally this map thing also!.

Maharana Pratap took off his crown and kept it at her feet "then I will kill myself now...this crown is

at your feet..."


u hav wriiten dis line,why did maharaja said that he will kill himself.????????????

i feel this crown is the same crown which veer's father ws talking about.


also the map, why this map is directing towards darjeeling only!.???????????

i mean the generations before veer came would also hav been married to pure hearten gals,🤓 of course then only veer came.😆


also since that time ws era of kings and kingdoms, surely there exist 6-7 🤔generations in b/w.

may b this map is magical,😍 which changes itself as the new generation comes.

like for veer's grandpa it would have been different and for veer's father again different, but its the single map, which changes itself...

this is only ma personal thought, i can be wrong...


and regarding that breaking of the crown.

if that crown had to break, it could hav broken even if veer's mom wud hav touched his dad, n or evn wen his grandma touched grandpa!...🤔...


but the crown will break only this time, why???????????//

i feel, chandini is the ultimate angel, who hav came to eradicate dis curse, or another possible reason can be that the curse may be limited to certain generations only.

but first reason is more valid, coz KAMINI talk about it a lot.🤔


but how the hell veer's dad noe that veer is d one who will get the ultimate angel...how did he foretell that the crown will break this time, so dis stands for the second reason i gave ...🤔


or may be, dese both things will together to make it happen, eradication of curse.


and i feel, maharana's soul is embedded in the crown!, coz the dialogue he said ...makes me relate it.😕


and when finally chandini will come in veer's life, the family will be freed from the curse and CROWN will break simultaneously freeing the maharana's soul to peace.🤔


now we r left wid soul of satyabhama,

how will she go to peace?????????

this one also i will find out in uds coming up!!...


((so di, wat u feel, i have brains????????😳?))

((or i m a bad analyzer????))


i just love such story.

dats why read supernatural stories a lot, as u already now,

having experience in this field, i feel i have cracked the mystery till sum extend🤔

but i will keep extending it more n more...

god, i m a real fan of urs, u hav to agree!

shikar roxxx...

lov u di.


ud soon...


before ma detective go to sleep!😆


actually i m a big supernatural freak,

i don't want u to clear ma doubts, plz don't

i will explore all by ma self...and amend ma theory a/cingly


i m a self reliant bachha!😳

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Freethinker

hi Maria...thank you so much for your comments...good to read one after such a long time...i am glad you liked this story 😉

I like this but little worked u know the tension having same with me hope veer lives happily and truly with nandini
Edited by maria_awan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really sad for chandini she suffered so much and that maharaja needed to be punished but rani punished him too hard and poor she had to die , veer needs to learn a lesson how to treat a lady nicely, plz gave him a hard lesson but make them fall nicely in love plz
Edited by maria_awan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

res...


~~**EDITED**~~
actually i m suffering from clinomania.😭...very serious disease, u noe??????????
very deathly!

di though i m second today in posting ma res, but still i m first to comment.
so my consistency still stays, n ma record is still maintained.

okay ridzzi di,
apni chotti sis ke liye aap itna tho manogi na!...
ridzzi di gar aap nhi manoge tho main...mai...tho mai...
haan! tho main roo dongi, joor joor se, shoor macha kr,
plzz aap maan jao, verna main sachhi main bhot boora roti hoon!
kaan padha deti hoon!

aap maan gaye na!😳

so lets start wid ud.

(okay di, lemme be a bit naughty wid u!!! i love teasing others...i hav commented, nw its ur job to see it, i promise i have commented...sacchi!)

it ws as usual awesome!.⭐️
mindblowing.⭐️

this dialogue is ma most fav of this story,
i will soon make a siggy too using this dialogue for shikar, 😳

"How do I conceal my emotions that burn without a fire"

by good the kiss description was awesome.

but kiss ws incomplete, yes it lacked our chandini's contribution, i need her to kiss veer!.😒

don't worry very soon evn that time will come...i believe!.👍🏼

she was helpless sealed in his arms but she din participate in kiss.

but by god, veer ws so adamant, he din leave her...☺️...

she struggled but he inserted her in him more.

awesome desco(di frm nw dis is short form of description, okay?)

but the part which screwed up ma nuts of brain ws-🤪


After a long time..


😳.ooo...☺️...u mean☺️ ...lllooonnnggg time...


Veer's lips left hers and he walked away to unbolt the door... he turned to look at her before leaving her room...she looked ferociously at him... but he winked at her...🤣


just loved it like hell, sooper cool, damn icy,😎

i just loved veer dis way,👍🏼

but veer u were rude to her,😭 but kya karta usse chand ne itna tempt☺️kr diya tha ki her rejection ws surely intolerable, unbearable.☺️

flashback of chandini is really miserable, i hate raghavender..😡...

tum mere ho main voh s*u*b*g gaurav,🤬 n yahan yeh scrape on world- raghu chaggu!🤬

hw cud he go so cheap.😡

really pathetic.


di, but rayal family flashback is just mindblowing.👏

i m with satyabhama, hw dare his husband be wid other women.😡

satyabhama died.

hw cn he cheat her,😡if his wife worship him, so loyal, what else the f**k he need.🤬

she u moron maharana,😡 tumhari vajah se veer ki life bhi risk pr h,😡but i noe chand will save him, 😳bt still risk tho ha na!.😡

ver will be veer, no one cn change him, at least for few months more...🤔...add few more months,🤔 add two months more,🤔 add 5 months more🤔 add 4 months more, 🤔add 10 months more...🤔...

conclusion it very long way to go to set veer on tract, chandini its a damn difficult task.

all the best to u!👍🏼

god noes hw will u bear him!.😕


the way he took her bag from her hands, was really so cool,😳

as if nothing happened.😕

he is damn shameless.

but chandini don't be surprised if i tell u dat u r falling for this shameless man🤣

god, he is going to leave her to her house, really????😆


awesome ud di.👏

ud soon!😳

lov u🤗

suggestion,- quote it, n color it for easy reading...or evn simpler, select the text😳


oh don't cry...i can't see anyone crying infront of me...meraa dil bahut kamzor hai bahut asar padata hai...

ok main apni choti si, pyari si ,golu molu k liye ye baat mann liya...your consistancy is still stays n no one is going to break your record ok...never...😊

woh toh main pehle pahuch gae toh res kar liya...well main pehle comment karu ya last...mujhe toh bas apne fav ud padne main n comment karne main interest hai...koi farak nahi padta last ho ya first...humare liye toh jab jago tabhi savera...😉

n by the way ye CLINOMANIA kaun si disease hai...desire to sleep more...😆

bahut serious disease hai...really i must say...deathly disease...😆

luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

di dis is 2nd installment of ma comment on dis ud.

dis one is a bit serious and practical...

((don't laugh di, i cn be serious and practical in life, 😳dis one i m seriously telling dis😳))

okay, so satyabhama fell as a easy prey of maharana's treachery ...
i feel the ''BHOOTANI'' who came under veer's car n lay next to him is satyabhama!.
but satyabhama ws a good, kind hearten lady,...why is her ghost so rude and scary...she is really scary.
well may be the harshexperiencemade her gi dis way!😭

so one clue is solved......phew!!!

but that crown thing still rests, additionally this map thing also!.

<font color="#000000">Maharana Pratap took off his crown and kept it at her feet "then I will kill myself now...this crown is
</font>

<font color="#000000">at your feet..."</font>

<font color="#000000">
</font>

<font color="#000000">u hav wriiten dis line,why did maharaja said that he will kill himself.????????????</font>

<font color="#000000">i feel this crown is the same crown which veer's father ws talking about.</font>


also the map, why this map is directing towards darjeeling only!.???????????

i mean the generations before veer came would also hav been married to pure hearten gals,🤓 of course then only veer came.😆


also since that time ws era of kings and kingdoms, surely there exist 6-7 🤔generations in b/w.

may b this map is magical,😍 which changes itself as the new generation comes.

<font size="2">like for veer's grandpa it would have been different and for veer's father againdifferent, but its the single map, which changes itself...</font>

this is only ma personal thought, i can be wrong...


and regarding that breaking of the crown.

if that crown had to break, it could hav broken even if veer's mom wud hav touched his dad, n or evn wen his grandma touched grandpa!...🤔...


but the crown will break only this time, why???????????//

i feel, chandini is the ultimate angel, who hav came to eradicate dis curse, or another possible reason can be that the curse may be limited to certain generations only.

but first reason is more valid, coz KAMINI talk about it a lot.🤔


but how the hell veer's dad noe that veer is d one who will get the ultimate angel...how did he foretell that the crown will break this time, so dis stands for the second reason i gave ...🤔


or may be, dese both things will together to make it happen, eradication of curse.


and i feel, maharana's soul is embedded in the crown!, coz the dialogue he said ...makes me relate it.😕


and when finally chandini will come in veer's life, the family will be freed from the curse and CROWN will break simultaneously freeing the maharana's soul to peace.🤔


now we r left wid soul of satyabhama,

how will she go to peace?????????

this one also i will find out in uds coming up!!...


((so di, wat u feel, i have brains????????😳?))

<font size="2">((or i m a badanalyzer????))</font>


<font size="2">i just love such story.</font>

<font size="2">dats why read supernatural stories a lot, as u already now,</font>

<font size="2">havingexperiencein this field, i feel i have cracked the mystery till sum extend🤔</font>

<font size="2">but i will keep extending it more n more...</font>

<font size="2">god, i m a real fan of urs, u hav to agree!</font>

<font size="2">shikar roxxx...</font>

<font size="2">lov u di.</font>


<font size="2">ud soon...</font>


<font size="2">before ma detective go to sleep!😆</font>


<font size="2">actually i m a big supernatural freak,</font>

<font size="2">i don't want u to clear ma doubts, plz don't</font>

<font size="2">i will explore all by ma self...and amend ma theory a/cingly</font>


<font size="2">i m a self reliant bachha!😳</font>


no one is going to laugh...dhanu di u too...don't laugh...rashmi is serious...🤔..serious...🤔...rashmi...🤔...really...🤔...serious...🤔...serious...🤣
apne dimaag ke ghode(horse) kitne daudati(run) hai...my sweet detective golu...😆
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

really amazing n awsum update..

loved it alot..

thxn for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part
njoyed it

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

oh don't cry...i can't see anyone crying infront of me...meraa dil bahut kamzor hai bahut asar padata hai...

ok main apni choti si, pyari si ,golu molu k liye ye baat mann liya...your consistancy is still stays n no one is going to break your record ok...never...😊

woh toh main pehle pahuch gae toh res kar liya...well main pehle comment karu ya last...mujhe toh bas apne fav ud padne main n comment karne main interest hai...koi farak nahi padta last ho ya first...humare liye toh jab jago tabhi savera...😉

n by the way ye CLINOMANIA kaun si disease hai...desire to sleep more...😆

bahut serious disease hai...really i must say...deathly disease...😆

luv u...😊


thnku didi...
me too luv u 1, 2, 3, 4 and much more...🥳

btw, t u also suffering frm clinomania?????😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

no one is going to laugh...dhanu di u too...don't laugh...rashmi is serious...🤔..serious...🤔...rashmi...🤔...really...🤔...serious...🤔...serious...🤣
apne dimaag ke ghode(horse) kitne daudati(run) hai...my sweet detective golu...😆


di aap bhi has rahe ho!😭
ab main roangi.
choti sis hoon tho kya???/
sab chidhate rahenge!

kyun bhai!!

😭😭

well chidhana h na!~
chidhalo.
main nhi roangi
main rondo bacha nhi hoon!

i m a very brave bacha...

badi sisters hoti hi chadhane ke liye h!
ap bhi ussi category main ho!

koi nhi, main nhi roangi...
chidhalo,

mera bhi time aayega😈

aapne mujhe yeh bola-
.my sweet detective golu...😆

di main mutto nhi hoon!
voh tho bas thodi healthy hoon!
kya h na!
haryana main patli ladkiyoon ka kuch kaam nhi h...

khata pithe ghar ki lagana jaruri h, verna haryana ke nhi lagte!😎

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