SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 36

really amzing n superb part di..

loved it..

waiting for wats coming next..

thnx for the pm...

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

😳res .

will edit very soon!

di i read it!

loved it like hell!

i wil edit this comment very soon!

i wanna give long, alas! again!

so plz, sry for delay!

don't lke this comment now!

pplz.

~~**edited**~~

Late night...just these words r enough for me to create the ambience around me hot, n prepare ma self for a veer chand romantic scene!😍

There wasn't a single sign of sleep in her eyes...she strolled back and forth towards her bed... "why this night seems so deserted like my heart".....she cud nt kiss him, dat thng is consuming her!

She stood at the window while the stars in the sky seemed tantalizing her...cool breeze from outside blowed her face...she closed her eyes " you are a stranger who has plundered my heart..."......yes, now veer owns ur heart chand!

Veer woke up in the middle of the night... be witchery was perturbing him "i am sure something is happening to you as well".yes u r absolutely rite dude! he got up from his bed and ambled downstairs...he wasn't amazed to see the lights on...she was awake...

he konw her more than herself! just so perfect for ma chand!...now i m sure he loves her, its nothing lust here!.

As he opened the door a little she immediately turned behind to scan at the door... "Veer" '.his sudden reaction astounded her...der gayi bechari!, voh bhi inne handsome insaan se!..., veer is so sweet yaar!...

He admired at her while coming closer... her hands tightly squeezed the window frames, her body marked with jittering movements... she didn't obstructed... "the scented breezes have called me here" from were the hell u wrote this killing lines di, chee!, really mindblasting!⭐️..just amazing..👏..he said while keeping his gaze constant at her'..

with dreamy eyes she looked at him... "you shouldn't have come here"...she is still scared of him!...veer u need to do smthng to free her frm this transparent shield!.she needs u!

Veer crossed his arms and leaned his head against the wall and gazed at the beauty whose victim he had become way back... "Chandni...you have come here by mistake".....this is best mistake god can commit, if u call it a mistake veer!...😳...moreover, its pre-planned!.😉

Chandni glanced confusedly at his statement "mistake...i don't know what you mean?"......yes, smtimes veer confuses me too!😆

His hand grazed her hand that was clutched strongly against the window frame... "there can't be another one in the whole universe"......yes, chand is unique,😳 veer is unique, rtmc are unique...😳...evn di si unique!...🤗...and i m the only piece in world, dat every one knows.🤣

Chandni smiled a little and was about to turn the other side when he touched her soft fingers with his hand... "the land of fairies from heaven are missing its queen"......oh ho!, kithe si layye tussi ye dialogue! dil cheer ditta! jhappi palo jii! (english for u- frm wer did u bring dis dialogue! it penetrated the heart! hav a sweetie warm hug frm ma side!)

She didn't look at him... his hand slowly entangled her hand...it was gentle...he slowly pulled her towards himself...with the passing night they stood in front of each other with a little distance that was difficult to remove...finally she managed to look into his deep eyes...her dreamy eyes made him come more closer to her...sooperbo description di!

He touched her silk tresses with his hand...then slowly stroked her cheeks with his fingers...Chandni closed her eyes... he looked at her pink lips that seemed to be the most beautiful thing he had ever seen... and veer, don't be surprised if i tell u those lips are urs!, claim them soon and love them sweetly! don't be rude to them okay?

He wanted to feel her lips...her eyes were shut tightly...as he came forward to kiss her... she immediately opened her eyes and realized what she was doing.....gals comes to their consciousness soon!...i noe the, u did it to tease veer n me both!.with cold hands she picked up a stole and wrapped it around her nervous body...though she didn't say anything to him, it was clear from her face that she wanted him to stay... he walked outside without saying anything to her...oops!...-----

Even though he left hours back...she was still sitting silently on the bed...there was something strange about him...how could she every time let him come closer to her....he is meant to be like this dear!

Why does she forget everything with his touch... she was unsure of what to do...her life had come to a point where she had to make a decision or she must leave this place and go back to her normal life and never see him again... it wasn't easy, even the thought of it seemed pricking her sharply...plz don't do dat!

Veer didn't planned anything...it was very unusual for him to approach a girl in this manner...something was killing him...some thoughts were prevailing his mind...

"remember, she has such a beauty, that you won't be able to stand it. The moment you will touch her, keep in mind you will burn...".he still remember those words said by the lady!

he drank the whole bottle in one go..wen d hell will he stop this thing, but good news is, atleast he has reduced it!.but still the thoughts were wandering...

"when beauty is revealed, that time is incomparable...one loses sense of oneself, even the one in command of his senses loses them."..this is wat happening wid both here, nt just veer!

nothing helped...he wanted to ask her...he was tired of himself...he was clueless about his feelings for her...it seemed someone was dragging him towards her and at the same time someone was pulling him away from her..poor veer! khich kar rah gya h! hell stretched!.the night seemed to be longer for both of them...

manohar! u are just outstanding dude..🤣...really ur brain roxxx...🤪...

u noe ur cerebrum really deserve to be displayed as antiques in a museum ...🤣

only ur brain cn work this unique n impossible!

"we need a girl with pure heart, mind and body...no dirty girls...to marry the royal heir, and save his life... that can come on the front page with Veer's photograph"

god, i fear he can really cause kaka a heart arrest!..god plz save kaka!😭

After few hours...

Chandni stepped out of her room...she was hungry...she knew Kaka had cooked some food in the afternoon and kept in the fridge...she opened the fridge to warm the food...chand ko bhook lagi h, n mujhe bhi!...i will jus cm n bring somthing... wa8!

okay! i got a orange!...😊...fruits r good for health!.lets start wid story again!

It was warmer in the kitchen...she took off her stole and kept it on the chair next to the huge sofa... she tied her hair with a clip...hmmm...kitchen is comparably warm!

She was about to pour some water in the glass when it spilled on the floor..aww...veer is so much disturbing her that even these simple jobs r not happening to her!.

she wasn't wearing her slippers and her long skirt got little wet as it touched the floor... she lifted the skirt and walked towards the other side of the kitchen to fetch a clean cloth...surprise! even i m wearing a long skirt now!.same pinch chandini, chalo ab jaldi se pani pocho!

After cleaning the floor, she arranged the food on the table... she sat on the chair and was about to eat when she thought about Veer..yeah! hw cud she eat, if veer had nt!. she immediately got up and without thinking she went upstairs and knocked at his door... he was reading a book when she entered the room...😲veer ws reading a book!😲 which book?🤔

"Veer come have your dinner..." with one hand on the door knob and other holding her long skirt...

"coming" Veer quickly glanced at her, then gazed at her from top to bottom...may be she didn't realize she was wearing a spaghetti top, her fair arms and shoulders were glowing making her look more attractive...hey, this is nt similar, i m wearing a tank top, wid female cardigan, no same pinch!

she turned backwards and walked towards the kitchen...

As he walked downstairs...he saw her sitting on the chair, arranging the plates...her cleavage was clearly visible... he made sure not to look at her...else he won't control his feelings...u need to control veer!. CONTROL...

she smiled at him while he sat on the opposite chair... he didn't look at her while eating... she was reading a book... both finished the dinner...good boy!

she took the plate and kept it in the kitchen... Veer wanted some water...

As he walked towards the kitchen...Chandni slipped over her long skirt and was about to fall when Veer hold her waist with both his hands while her hands automatically curled around his neck...yipeeeiii!!!!!!!!!!!!

She gazed in his innocent eyes... he looked the most handsome man she could ever imagine...of course he is!

She closed her eyes for a second and thought " I hope I don't make the mistake...i hope I don't fall in love...how do I hold myself back...please tell me"its not a mistake chand.

For Veer it was like a dream...she looked not less then an angel... "your fragrance clouds my vision and suffuses my being"......god, di u r mindblowing in language!

Chandni couldn't think anything except his face...his touch...his eyes... "Ever since I saw you, what has come over me...what kind of ecstasy is this...i hope I don't get lost"......u r losing to veer

Veer couldn't think about the good or bad consequences " why do you invade my dreams. With your stares and through these long tresses that cover your beautiful face...".....nice dream na!

Chandni was completely unaware of the world around her "i don't know, this storm raging under my breath...why can't I hold myself back anymore..."......don't try to hold

Slowly he pulled her towards himself...she stood still for a second, "Sorry...i slipped over...".....very good long skirt! gr8 job.👏

Veer replied back with a smile "never mind..."😳

She smiled back and walked towards her room...

It was the most difficult thing for her...she was running away from her feelings, her emotions..😡.only this much di!

After standing for few seconds he went back to his room... though there was no sleep in his eyes... he wanted to ask her...he is restless!😳

Chandni's hands were cold...she took a stole and wrapped around her... she sat on her bed...soon she heard the knock on her door...she had bolted the door from inside...she bolted????

Veer was curious to see her...he knocked again...but she didn't open the door...veer can't help himself!

Slowly she leaned against the door "Veer I am sleeping..." she said in a low voice...lair!😡...don't make me and veer wa8. we bth r damn impatient!

Veer wasn't convinced with her answer "i want to ask you something..."....he is so sweet!😭😳

Chandni knew if she opened the door...she would not control her feelings and it would be difficult for her "i will talk to you tomorrow" she said and closed her eyes...don't do dis u veer😡!.he will die!😭, don't avoid him😡! its killing him,😭😭😭

Veer was tempted to see her...he wanted to look at her...he was missing her..those feelings are consuming him! sqeezing him1.there was something that wasn't in his control...he was hoping to get a fleeting glimpse...aww, chand's veer!😭😭😭

After sometime Chandni didn't heard any knocks at the door...she assumed he must have left...she walked towards her bed and kept her stole on the side...aww chand, hw cud u b so rude yaar!

She simply lay on the bed and pulled the blanket over her... she lay on her back and closed her eyes...u can't sleep!...veer is cming .wa8.

After few minutes she heard some noise outside... her window was closed...she looked around...

To her surprise she was horrified to see Veer outside her window gazing at her...his eyes had the yearning, the thirst '..😍.see he came!..🥳...yeh ma champ veer!

She stood up and looked at him... there was silence... he wanted to come in but she was scared to let him in...she was scared of herself... the more he looked at her...the more he wanted to hold her...god, this excitement i can't hide neither hold!

After few minutes... he picked up a huge wooden trunk and banged it on the window... all she could hear was the sound of the window pane glass shattered into pieces, she kept her hands on her ears to avoid the sound...he broke the window!...

issi baat pr song!

oh humdum soniyo ve!,

oh janiya soniyo veh!.

oh janiya sanjh ko khidki se chand aayega!...

hooo,... soniye .

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9geEbZIAJM

He approached the broken window and slid his hand inside to unbolt it...she saw him coming in through the window but didn't say anything...coz she wants it!

with his every step covering the distance between them...her heart beat increased rapidly...ooo...😳

With a fiery urge of passion that drew his body towards Chandni...he came with full force and hold her tiny waist with his strong arms...oh! ma god!😍

He came closer to her lips that didn't say anything...eyes that seemed to be longing for him....her eyes were longing for him too! she wanted to see him too!😍

"How do I conceal my emotions that burn without a fire" he said with a fierce look...god,😍 tremendously terrific dialogue 🤗

She closed her eyes tightly as his hold was strong enough, making her fall for him...with fullpetrified paroxysm of desire he lay his lips on hers...☺️😍❤️

atlast! chand n veer's 1st kiss!🥳

i really waited for this......

party!🥳

party!

amazing, the words- full petrified paroxysm, sooperbo perfecto!👏

di dis ud ws so complete!.

it ws a tsunami of desires n emotions.

loved it like hell!

i really feel like giving a english exams a times wen i comment on ur uds.

i really feel pity abt ma vocabulary!, really fall short of words!

thnx di for such a wonderful ud, and a WONDERFUL story!

shikar just roxxx...

di, u just rulzzz...

u r amazing!

👏

di u r amazing!

lov u!

ud soon!

since u gave me such a wonderful ud!, so even i will try to give u a good ud of egl as soon as possible!

really lov u!

Originally posted by: dhwanimehta23

very nice update!!!!
liked the way veer entered the room breaking window😛😛

Originally posted by: tejjo

very nice update😛

fultooo fatak update

loved it

oops...veer hold his chand in his arms...what a lovely scene

loved it thoroughly😆

and last scene is just awesome...speechless

im eager to read more pls update soon...pls pls

update soon

thanks for pm

luv

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Wonderful update... You never fail to make me feel curious for the next update...
Thanks for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update

veer broke into chandni's room and kissed her

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

Hey Dhanvi 😛

I was realy missing Veer - chandani so much

n u too 😛

thanx dear for doing pm 😊

I have read all updates

n all r superb 👏 👏 👏

hmmm so chandani is falling for veer 😛

n Veer is already love her no doubt

n here chandni too😳

hmm there is some satisfied view for veer 😃

still some hopes , congrats veer 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

glad to know that Chandani's feeling the same what he feels

n now only waiting for her confession

i know Veer everready to confess his love to her

but why Chandni hiding her feeling from him

but it's so easy task n it's so from Veer

no way He never let this happen 😃

ohhh what I have seen , Veer broak window 😲

n come in the Room without her permission

Veer ( u don't have any manners how to enter in Girs bedroom)

but for veer never mind 😛

veer what have u done 🥱

n now what would be her reaction

want to read

can't wait now

update soon

love u ⭐️

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

awesome part!!!!!!! i love chand nd veer... 🤗 🤗 🤗