SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) RTMC FF 39 on 148 - Page 100

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Awesome update

again that evil spirit
I hope she escapes everytime from its clutches
God! This veer is just 2 much.
He actually did all those naughty things standing in her house.
Bechari chandni! Ek taraf kua,i.e granny, toh dusri taraf khai,i.e Veer
waise veer ki toh sitti pitti gul hone wali hain Chandni ko salwar suit me dekhkar.
update soon

thanka a lot for the wonderful comments... will surely update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shraddhamurat

Dhanvi i love this ff of urs like hell...
Ur description of each and every scene is simply too awsum...
I cn imagine Veer N Chandani in the characters
Chandni is being halluciniated by this bhootni...plz jaldi se bhagao ise
Well Veer came to knw that smthng ist troubling Chandni...
Veer unhooked her bra in one go dat too in her t-shrt...what type of guy he is...leaves no stone un turned to irritate Chandni wid his mischiveous acts...
Poor Chandni wants to go upstairs bt no body lets her
at last grandma lets her go to chnge in salwar suit...

thanks a lot for appreciating dear...this comment means a lot...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tejjo

🤣awww so sweet update di


so funny update😆

in first scene i scared ki kya hoga chand ke sath that evil spirit 😡chodungi nhi mein use😲

thank god ki chand ko kuch nhi hua 😃...she is a strong girl😛...


but yeh veer kahan se tapak pada🤢yeh veer bhi na kahin bhi pohach jata h...but accha h😃apni chandni ke sath hi rehta h hmesha😛such a lovely guy he is😃

oh she missing veer😆juth bola usne omg chand ko kitne juth bolne padte h is veer ke liye😃

i loved that kamini n shama scene also...really kamini need a doctor 😉

veer is too much granny ke saamne bhi usne chand ko kitna pareshaan kiya n that insect bite scene o god that is became my fav scene😆

granny ko to yeh bhi nhi pta ki wo insect unke pass bethkar juice pee rha h🤣

lovely scene...muahhh

well i loved veer line ...if he died then who loves her like that😆really our veer is antique n unique piece ...uski tarah koi or chand ko pyaar nhi kar sakta...


n manohar he is my fav omg...😆he is so funny😆

di ud soon
thanks for update aaj meri gud gud wali morning hui

love u😳

thanks a lot darling for the lovely comments..😊...will try and update soon... luv u 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: disha15

Loved it! ❤️

Thank god Veer came,oderwiSe she wud have to walk god knows how much more 🤔 and also,we got some veer-ni(veer-chandni 😎 ) scenes ☺️

I hope she tells him whats been troubling her 😒

Veer unbucking her bra 🤣 Expert you see 😎

Loved the update dhanvi di!

thanks a lot sweetie... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

firstly thank u so much for d UD... plz itna intzar mat karwaya karo na.. Chandni saw that ghost..my God.. she was so scared... Bt Veer always cum on ri8 time..wenever she needs him.. I think Chandni ko Veer ko batana chahiye tha.. & Veer is so caring..undrstnds her so nicely..

Bt What Veer did wen they reached home...
awww Veer..Naughty guy...very bad..
bt I like him..
Waiting for d nxt UD..

thank you so much for your lovely comments...much appreciated...will try and update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzzi

wow that was really thrilling and hilarious too...😆

chand saw the ghost poor girl kitna darr gayi thi...but veer was their see this is called true love...chand ko veer ki zarurat thi and veer is infront of her...
and man mana padega veer ne kis cheez main experties hasil ki hai...and kamini told him about that mark...loved chand's expression...super great...veer use tease karne ka koi bhi single chance nahi chodata...
continue soon...
luv u...😊

hey sweetie...thank you so much for the wonderful comments...you know i am missing your songs... loved your comments... will update soon... luv u 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aseema

hey..hi..dr

i must say u write sooo good... i just love it..

thanks a lot dear...😊

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