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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#971

Thrilling update!!!!!
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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#972

amazing ud dhanvi...

sorry for not commenting earlier...

bt luved the whole ud...especially veer n chandni's scene...

thank god chandni is safe...

i can imagine veers reaction when he get to know abt insect bite...

eagerly waiting for the next ud ...

ud soon

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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#973

god...!!! kya update tha...
superb...
chandni seriously bht brave thi jo vahan se bhaag aayi agr mere jaisi koi hoti to vhi heart attack se mr jati...
n veer... god whisky k allawa bhi kuch pee liya kro...
n dat insect bite...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
mindblowing update...
thnx 4 d pm...
luv

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#974

di...dat was total thrillr!!! 😃

wat is happng???😕

itne saare ghosts Veer n Chand ko haunt kar rahe hai??

dere is pakka sum past janam ligic...wid d King n Queen...

but kya??

aapko hamein aise torture karne mein bohut maza aa raha hain na di...😉

Chandni's xprnc...terrbl...super scarry...n wierd...

she ws SO scard...d entr princ charmng!!!😃

wt ws Veer doin dere?? not dat i mind his cumng 2 her..😉

Veer scares her...n savs her...😳

cum on Chand u tell Veer...he has also witnessd ghosts...😆

but it IS wierd...

Kaka-Manohar romanc is 2 gud!!!😃

Kamini aunty is hillarious!!

insect bit...ko evil sign!! 😆

well Veer's reactn aftr her callng d Luv bite an insect bite was hillarious!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣

srsly!! n den he goes..."really" in a shckd tone!!! 🤣

Veer ure 2 much!! 😎

poor Chand kaise logon ke saath fas gayi hai!! 😆

n now she wil wear a salwar suit!! wow luv her in dat!! gorgeous!! 😃

luvd it di...!!⭐️

do continue soon...

luv u...🤗

ure gr8!!!👏 👏 ⭐️

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#975

Awesome update

again that evil spirit

I hope she escapes everytime from its clutches

God! This veer is just 2 much.

He actually did all those naughty things standing in her house.

Bechari chandni! Ek taraf kua,i.e granny, toh dusri taraf khai,i.e Veer

waise veer ki toh sitti pitti gul hone wali hain Chandni ko salwar suit me dekhkar.

update soon

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Shraddhamurat

@Shraddhamurat

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#976

Dhanvi i love this ff of urs like hell...
Ur description of each and every scene is simply too awsum...
I cn imagine Veer N Chandani in the characters
Chandni is being halluciniated by this bhootni...plz jaldi se bhagao ise
Well Veer came to knw that smthng ist troubling Chandni...
Veer unhooked her bra in one go dat too in her t-shrt...what type of guy he is...leaves no stone un turned to irritate Chandni wid his mischiveous acts...
Poor Chandni wants to go upstairs bt no body lets her
at last grandma lets her go to chnge in salwar suit...

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#977

🤣awww so sweet update di

so funny update😆

in first scene i scared ki kya hoga chand ke sath that evil spirit 😡chodungi nhi mein use😲

thank god ki chand ko kuch nhi hua 😃...she is a strong girl😛...

but yeh veer kahan se tapak pada🤢yeh veer bhi na kahin bhi pohach jata h...but accha h😃apni chandni ke sath hi rehta h hmesha😛such a lovely guy he is😃

oh she missing veer😆juth bola usne omg chand ko kitne juth bolne padte h is veer ke liye😃

i loved that kamini n shama scene also...really kamini need a doctor 😉

veer is too much granny ke saamne bhi usne chand ko kitna pareshaan kiya n that insect bite scene o god that is became my fav scene😆

granny ko to yeh bhi nhi pta ki wo insect unke pass bethkar juice pee rha h🤣

lovely scene...muahhh

well i loved veer line ...if he died then who loves her like that😆really our veer is antique n unique piece ...uski tarah koi or chand ko pyaar nhi kar sakta...

n manohar he is my fav omg...😆he is so funny😆

di ud soon

thanks for update aaj meri gud gud wali morning hui

love u😳

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#978

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

I am sure chand is gonna look awesomr in her salwar kameez and I agree with rashu that we indian girls look fab in indian outfits.

thnx di ...fr supporting..

den dhanvi, plz bring ur chand once in saari plz.😳

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disha

@disha15

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#979

Loved it! ❤️

Thank god Veer came,oderwiSe she wud have to walk god knows how much more 🤔 and also,we got some veer-ni(veer-chandni 😎 ) scenes ☺️

I hope she tells him whats been troubling her 😒

Veer unbucking her bra 🤣 Expert you see 😎

Loved the update dhanvi di!

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Swati Agrawal

@swati_prithvi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#980

firstly thank u so much for d UD... plz itna intzar mat karwaya karo na.. Chandni saw that ghost..my God.. she was so scared... Bt Veer always cum on ri8 time..wenever she needs him.. I think Chandni ko Veer ko batana chahiye tha.. & Veer is so caring..undrstnds her so nicely..

Bt What Veer did wen they reached home...

awww Veer..Naughty guy...very bad..

bt I like him..

Waiting for d nxt UD..