mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi MAANEET ss COMPLETED

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mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi







part 1


Geet is walking on road numb. Situation from which she is going through is freaking her out. She wants to go away from this pain, she want to die as a ray of hope is lost. Fate is taking kind of revenge from her. What she had done to go through this pain? She is screaming but nobody is there to listen her painful scream. Looking like god also closed his ears. He also doesn't want to listen her pain. All her strength has long gone. She is living life like robot as she can't end her life for sake of her family. She can't go away, run away from her plight because that can give only immense pain to her family.


Geet is getting constant rejections in alliances of marriage. She somehow manage till date but today when boy's side say no after giving long hopes, she shattered. Not for herself but for her family, she feels disgusted. How peoples can behave? Her family is supporting her in every way. But this blow they also can't handle properly.

They are looking for alliance from long time. Her sister Rajji's age is also marriage age. They can't delay her marriage as she falls in love with a boy from different community. For family's name they have to get Rajji also marry as soon as possible. But it is only possible after Geet's marriage.

Friends are strong part of her life. Now all her friends are also married, well settled, everyone becomes mama too.

She somewhere envies them. She was topper through out school, college. And now she is no where near any of them. She has been long forgotten by everyone including her friends.

Life always took her test. When she completed her 18 (eligibility age to say mature) she had major accident on next day of her birthday.

When time comes to build carrier, here also her bad luck followed. After struggling for two years she got a job. Now most important part of life marriage - when you get life partner, person whom you say dream man.

In this situation also she is going through humiliation, irritation, longing, craving and unbearable pain. The most important thing is reason for pain and bad condition in family. Reason for removing smile from everyone's face.

Now she can't take it anymore. She has to take some decision. She has to do something.

Tears are non stop running from her eyes. Thinking continuously about situation she lost every hope of her life.

Why all this with me? What I had done to deserve such pain and humiliation? Why I am reason behind all pain and tears of all? Why ..why' why' me'''.

She wanted to scream and ask her god ye sab uske hi naseeb mein kyun.

She lost track of time, place. She is walking on empty road aimlessly. A car is coming towards her with full speed with continuously honk inking. But she is unable to hear. Car stops near an inch away from her. With sudden noise of breaks she realized what is happening. But she stood there frozen as reality is striking her. Second time in her life she come across this situation. She shut her eyes remembering of first time.

A pair of black shoes comes out of the car. He is continuously yelling

Dikhata nahi kya? Agar kuch ho jya ta to police mujhe he pakdle te.

He come near her yelling but at the moment he saw her face with tightly shut eyes and no fear, he is amused.






plz tell me how it is
if you like do press like
if readers like it then only i will write next part
it is about mulakat which changes both of them lives
mulakat is decided by naseeb at right time
naseeb se jyada aur waqt se pahele kuch nahi milta
aur jo naseeb me ho ta hain wo koi nahi chin sakta
so tell me how it is?
waiting for comment.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is smaazing i want to read more.. but why rejection???😭
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wonderful Dear ...
nice start
but why Geet is being rejected...
Any reason?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tellyme

wonderful Dear ...

nice start
but why Geet is being rejected...
Any reason?????




no specific reasons
want to write about a girl with all good qualities
then also fell to get any special gift from god uptil now

she is ordinary girl looking not exactly beutiful
but a lively girl
thank you for your comment
Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm...different concept..

plz continue soon.can u plz pm me?
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add me and send me the pm dear
ossum prolouge
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thank you to all for comment

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wow do continue soon yaar... add me to the pm list..
geet faced continued rejection ?? any reason behind this >
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for reading



for liking




for comments
i am really happy that you all like it
it is going to be small ff
as i am a reader and not writer
but can't stop myself from writing ff
and love you all for reading this
my try
😊 😊 😊
😊
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mulakat
part 2




He is coming from a party. In the party almost every girl was trying to impress him as he is most eligible bachelor, a charmer. But he is not at all interested in any girl because those girls are attracted towards his money and fame. He want life partner who will love him from heart and accept him as he is, with all his qualities and weaknesses. He was totally irritated with party so he decided to go for long drive. He goes for long drive when he feels alone.

While driving he is getting restless so he increased speed of car. But suddenly he saw a girl walking alone on road at odd hour of night. He horned but she didn't move. Then he used emergency break to stop car. Then he come out of car and saw the girl.

He feels his restlessness comes to an end. The face he is searching for is come in front of him. He is waiting to this site from ages. He feels joy in his heart.

He calls her softly

Suno tumhe lagi to nahi?

His voice breaks her trance. She slowly opened her eyes. She is memorized with what she is watching. It is not her to check out guys. But something unknown yet sweet feeling strike her heart.

Seeing her silence he speak again

Tum thik to ho na?

This time she recognizes words and situation also. The concern in his voice makes her happy somewhere. She immediately said

Haan main thik hoon. Muze kuch nahi hua

He replied

Shukar hain warna sab log mujhe kahete ki maine jaan bujhkar accident kiya.

Waise ek baat batao ke tum akeli etni raat ko soon saan sadak par kar kya rahi ho?

Wo meri bus choot gayi thi aur etni raat to taxi bhi nahi mil rahi thi, is liye main paidal hi ghar ja rahi thi.

Etni raat ko akele jaana thik nahi hain. Chalo I will drop you.

She immediately said

nahi main khood chli jaungi. Apko taklif karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.

Somewhere she wanted to with him but he is totally stranger and she can't take risk to go home with him.

On the other side he is also stubborn and don't want to leave her in this condition.

He said

tum mere saath akele chalne se dar rahi ho kya?

She keep quite.

Reading her silence he said ek baat batao agar tumhe taxi mil jati to tum chali jati na. to tum mujhe taxiwaala samjh lo. Chaho to tum mujhe taxi ke paise de dena. But I can't leave you here alone. It is not safe place. And there is no chance of taxi to come.

His logic is also correct. She likes his concern. She wants to fall for this concern and care. But life gave her so much pain that she don't want any emotion come to her and that to for stranger.

She thinks for a second and said OK you drop me to the main road of my area.

He smiled at her answer and said as u wish.

He wants to add jaan after that but he controlled himself.

He already falled for her at first sight.

He opened car door for her and said now come on tumhare gharwale rah dekh rahe honge.

She quietly come & sit. He closed door and come on driving seat & start to drive quietly. He is stealing glances from her. She also saw him from corner of eyes. After some time he broke silence where is your home? Give me address.

With his question she saw out off window. Then she asked him to drop her at next corner.

He stopped car at next corner. Then she said main yanha se chali jaungi, mera ghar paas me he hain. Thank you for dropping me.

Pleasure is mine.

She smiled sweetly at his answer. She then come out of car and started to walk towards home.



plz tell me how it is

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