mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi MAANEET ss COMPLETED - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it.jaldi se in dono ki shaadi kara do yaar😉.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

hey dear i guess not only me but many more r their waiting for the update love u r work dear awesome i love to read u r update daily before i go to sleep ...

i just love u r ff ...😊




i am too much happy that you like my ff
and waiting for it 🤗

thank you so much 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
i am so sorry for the late comments i've been held up due to an excessive amount of hmwk😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
mulakat
part 10


Maan texted geet give me a call when you will be free when he reached home. Geet saw massage when he reached home. She waited till everyone sleep. Then she sneaks to terrace. She texted maan so gaye kya? She immediately gets call from maan. She is happy that he is also waiting to talk. She answers the call. Both don't speak for sometime.





Geet geet feels something in her heart. An unknown sensation run through her body as she is first time listening him on phone. She gets lost in his voice but soon composed




Haan maan

Soyi nahi

Aap bhi to nahi soye

Aaj neend hi nahi aa rahi, tumse baat karne ka bada man tha

Main bhi aap se baat karma chahti thi

To bolo

Aaj aap ko gussa to nahi aaya lucky veerji pe

Maan laughed geet aisi baate abhi nahi karenge to kab karenge. Waise bhi mujhe accha laga ki tumhare gharwaalone mujhe apna maan liya. Aur dadi bhi apni honewali bahu ke gungaan gate nahi thak rahi thi.

Aur aap

Hum to pehle se hi aap pe phida the aur aaj to puri tarah se aap ke diwane ho gaye

Maan aap bhi na ' she shied

Mujhe tumhara sharmana accha laga

She gets conscious par aap ko kaise pata chala ki main '

Tumhari aawaz se They both smiled. Geet feel conscious so she tried to change topic,

Aap ko aaj ki tayariyan kaisi lagi

Tumse nazar hat ti to sab pe dhayan deta na? tum etni sundar lag rahi thi ki, tum se nazar hat hi nahi rahi thi. Waise meri kya sab ki nazare tum par hi thi.

Sab ki nazare mujh par nahi, aap par thi. Ghar mein sabhi aap ki hi baate kar rahe hain

Someone is jealous

Not at all. Actually proud off ki mujhe aap jaisa life partner milnewaala hai

I am glad that you are happy

Again silence lingers between them.

Tumhe neend to nahi aa rahi?

Ji nahi aap se baat kar ke accha lag raha hai

Haan kab se baat karne ki koshish kar rahe the par chance hi nahi mil raha tha. Chalo batao tumhe kya accha lagta hai?

Mujhe films dekhana bahut pasand hai wo bhi shahrukh khan ki. Maine aaj tak uski ek bhi film miss nahi ki. Aap ko films pasand hai

Jyada nahi. Lekin agar saath mein koi ho to film dekhane mein maza aata hai

They continued to talk. They talked about liking, disliking, family members and what not. They got lost in talking and lost track of time. At last geet's phone give up

OK I will keep the phone. Now go and have some sleep good night.

It is not good night, soon going to be morning like after an hour

That mean we talk for whole night

Haan. Now go and have some sleep. We will talk later.

OK bye

Bye

Geet look at sky for some time and breathe some fresh air. She texted maan and went downstair in her room. She feels asleep about thinking of conversation they just have. Maan is also trying to sleep, when he get text massage. He opened it

Aap ke aane se jindagi ko naya ehsaas mil gaya

Aap ke aane se jindagi ka har pal khushnuma ho gaya

Aap ke aane se khushiyone hamare ghar ka raasta dhoond liya

Aap ke aane se rab se mangi hue har dua kabool ho gayi ye yakin ho gaya

Ab ye khushiyaan hamesha badti hi rahe ye ek hi khawaish hai

He instantly wants to call geet. But thought she made his night so he has to make her morning. He simply reply

Main tumhari har khawaish ko haqikat bana ne ki koshish karunga

Geet read massage, smiled and drift to sleep.

Next morning maan texted

Apni KHAMOSH zindagi main bolana mujhko, Apni HASEEN khuwab ki TASVEER banana mujhko, Main jo PUCHOoN tumhara HAAL-e-DIL, To apni har DHADKAN ki AAWAZ sunana mujhko

Geet read massage with sleepy eyes. By reading masaage she jumped on bed and re read it. She feels her dhadkan is never beated so fast in her life. How clearly maan write about his feelings. He made my day.

Meri khamosh zindagi ko uski dhadkan ki aawaz mil gayi

Maan is more than hapy with her reply.

so here it goes

hope i have done good in

maaneet convo

waiting for comment

previous----- part 9

next ----part 11

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
r

edited

loved the update... their phone conversation was so sweet...😊
Edited by Maaneet4eve - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

amezing loved it maaneet conversation is fabulous n the shayri andaaz is also good overall whole update is just awsome eagerly waiting for more maaneet conversation update next part soon

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the sweet phone convo between maaneet
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Posted: 13 years ago

Aap ke aane se jindagi ko naya ehsaas mil gaya

Aap ke aane se jindagi ka har pal khushnuma ho gaya

Aap ke aane se khushiyone hamare ghar ka raasta dhoond liya

Aap ke aane se rab se mangi hue har dua kabool ho gayi ye yakin ho gaya

Ab ye khushiyaan hamesha badti hi rahe ye ek hi khawaish hai

and

Apni KHAMOSH zindagi main bolana mujhko, Apni HASEEN khuwab ki TASVEER banana mujhko, Main jo PUCHOoN tumhara HAAL-e-DIL, To apni har DHADKAN ki AAWAZ sunana mujhko


luvd it a lot dear...

u r just awesum!!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Aap ke aane se jindagi ko naya ehsaas mil gaya

Aap ke aane se jindagi ka har pal khushnuma ho gaya

Aap ke aane se khushiyone hamare ghar ka raasta dhoond liya

Aap ke aane se rab se mangi hue har dua kabool ho gayi ye yakin ho gaya

Ab ye khushiyaan hamesha badti hi rahe ye ek hi khawaish hai

and

Apni KHAMOSH zindagi main bolana mujhko, Apni HASEEN khuwab ki TASVEER banana mujhko, Main jo PUCHOoN tumhara HAAL-e-DIL, To apni har DHADKAN ki AAWAZ sunana mujhko


luvd it a lot dear...

u r just awesum!!




thank you yaar
you liked it i am so happy
i am bit curious whether it will be liked or not

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update and I liked the shayari of maan and the reply of geet. continue soon.

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