mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi MAANEET ss COMPLETED - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
superb one but itni ache proposal ke baad kuch beech main mat lana atleast shadi tak to nahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Liked dis ff.
In 1st part Geet's charactr seemed to b similiar to me.
Dont u think proposl bahut jaldi ho gya.kuch to doori rkhni thi yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
hey dear r u updating today or not...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Excellent...just read all the part's ,it's simply awesome...
please continue soon...want to know more😛...
and add me to your PM list please...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: pritm



it is a short story
so i don't want to miss any imp moments
therefore i am trying to make each moment special
anyways aaj kal jamana bahaut fast hain 😉



it's ok dear...like the way maan proposed geet...n the chain..her birthday gift...he choose her b'day for propose her...it was nice...

when will u give next update...???
me waiting desperately...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

mulakat

part 5


Before coming down stairs geet removed chain. Maan look at her. Before he can speak geet said

wo niche sab sawal karenge. Acha nahi lagega.

I can understand. Par bad main tumhe pahnna padega

She smile looking at maan and node her head in yes.

(some thing's must be keep between two 😉 , right)

In the hall every one is busy in talking. Dadi is getting impressed with geet's family. She like the family and geet. As maan is showing interest by himself so dadi is observing every thing. She is happy that geet and her family is like that which she always thinks for maan.

Maan never had family's love except her. Always he had is responsibility of his sister. This family is so closely bonded and ready to shower all their love on their damad. He will get all love and affection from her family.

For geet she already feel spark in maaan's eyes and behaviour. So she will be more than happy to make geet her bahu. She is impatiently waiting for both's decision. At last they have to spend their lives together so it must be their decision. Other things such as family are important. Here family is lovely and respectable in society. So there is no chance of no from dadi.

Geet's family members are her papaji Mohinder Handa, her mama Rano, her brother Lucky and her sister Raji. Papaji feels reveled by seeing maan. Maan is kind of man whom every father wants to make his damad handsome, rich, well qualified, good family background and most important having respect for elders.

Rano like maan's behavior, his talking, he is responsible person. Dadi's nature is too good. She will definitely love geet as her daughter. Geet deserves a happy life for which definitely maan is capable of in each aspect.

Raji and lucky both are younger than her, they will definitely feel proud to say maan as their jiju. By talking family's come close. Both are looking forward for this alliance.

Finally maan and geet entered in the hall. Every one looked at them. There is something special on both's face. Everyone is happy to see them. By looking at them anyone can guess the obvious decision. Before anyone would speak maan said

Hum ek dusare ko pasand hai aur shaadi karma chahte hai.

Everyone is looking at maan surprisingly but at the same time happy for the decision. Dadi is expecting this. Mr. handa and rano are also happy.

Dadi come near geet and kissed her fore head

to mohindarji shadi ki tayari karne ke liye tayar ho jayiye ab geet hamari bahu banewali hai. Dadi gazed maan, he smiled, a blush appear on geet's face.

Mohinder is glad at dadi's word; he said maaji hum bhi to maan jaisa damad pa kar khush hai. Hamari beti ko itna acha sasural mila jis se hamari khushi dugni ho gayi.

Then maan and geet took blessings from everyone. Rano lovingly said to maan hamesha khush rahena bete. Maan feel mother's affection in rano's word.

When every one settled mohinder said maaji hum sagaai aur shadi ka muhoorat niklawa ke aap ko bata denge.

Hum jald se jald geet ko apne ghar le jana chahte hai. Iss liye aap najdik ka hi muhoorat nikaliye.

Dadi don't want to give any chance to maan to delay wedding which maan also don't want.he is eager to marry geet. Geet also want to marry maan early so that her parents can start their search for raji.

After talking for some time dadi and maan are leaving. Maan is saying bye to every one, at same time steeling glances from geet.

Geet blushed; raji shook her haii abhi se ek nazar pe itna shrmana. Geet blushed more and said chup kar. Maan see geet blushing and understand raji is teasing her. He half heartedly go to car. Dadi also bid bye to every one. Finally they drove off. Maan is watching geet in mirror up to turn.

Then geet's family comes in the hall. Everyone is happy and ready to share news with others. Mohinder go to call panditji.

Rano come to geet tu khush to hai na? geet is having tears in her eyes, she node her head in yes. Rano hugged geet. Now she is also having tears in her eyes main tere lite bahut khush hoon.

In the car maan ask dadi aap ko geet kaisi lagi?

Maan hame aap ki pasand bahut pasand aayi. Hum aap dono ke liye bahut khush hai. Geet ka parivaar bhi bahut accha hai. Ab ek baar aap dono ki shadi ho jaye to hum befikar ho jayenge kyun ki aap ko sambhalnewali jo aagayegi, wo bhi itni pyaari.

Maan is happy to hear all this from dadi.

so how is it

hope you all will like thia part

plz hit like if you like it

waiting for comments and like

😍


previous-----part 4

next----part 6




Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
luvd it..
nw geet vl wear d chain na..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
nice one
do continue
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Loved the way Maan declared their liking, ab toh bas shaadi hojaye...

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