mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi MAANEET ss COMPLETED - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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till part 3
interesting story...
why is Geet being rejected?
wow Maan is so smitten...
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wow... love at 1st sight...
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mulakat
part 4

Dadi started conversation with geet's family member. Maan is patiently giving answers to all questions asked. They can see maan's irritation on question. Maan is getting really irritated as he is unable to see geet. Finally geet is being called. Maan checked himself.

His gaze freezes when he saw geet in sari. She is looking adorable. Her hairs are open. She is wearing pink coloured sari. He can see tension on her face, which soon gone when their eyes meet (mahii mahii). Both's eyes twinkle with unknown happiness. The trance is broken by dadi's voice

Aaiye geet beta, yanha hamare pass baithiye.

Geet go and sit beside dadi. Maan is not removing his gaze from her. Geet is also watching maan from corner of her eyes. Conversation is now going smooth. But maan's frustration is increasing with each passing minute. He wanted to talk geet alone. His frustration comes to end when geeet's papaji asked geet to show maan their home.

She gets conscious because from conversation she comes to know that he is most eligible bachelor of their community. What he might think of her for last night.

With such state of mind she showed him home. Finally they go to terrace. Both are silent thinking about how to start conversation. Finally maan speak

Kal raat tumhare gharwaalone late hone ke liye kuch kaha to nahi.

Geet feels happy for his concern.

Ji naahi, wo to meri raah dekh rahe the. Lekin mere wajah se aap ko late ho gaya. I am really sorry for that Mr. Khurana.

First thing call me maan and second for last night it's OK geet don't bother to say sorry as I enjoyed the drive with you.

Geet feels butterflies in her stomach with maan's straight forwardness.

I really like you in our first meeting. Main tumhare bare mein hi soch raha tha raat bhar. Subah jab dadima ne mujhe tumhara photo dikhaya to mujhe kuch pal ke liye apni kismet pe yakin hi nahi hua ki meri dua manjoor ho gayi. Issi liye maine dadima se keh kar aaj hi meeting fix kar di. Main tumse mil kar yeh sab batana chahta tha.

With his each word geet is feeling happy, overwhelmed, blushed, each and every feeling is rushing through her. She is feeling on top of the world. She never imagined such thing can happen to her. All this is creating a new joy in her heart, a new feeling which is unknown to her. With his last sentence she feeled blessed that he cares for her.

Now it's her turn to express her feelings.

Maine jab kal aap ko dekha to mujhe bhi kuch mahsoos hua lekin I ignored it because I thought it only happens in films kisi ko dekh kar kuch kuch hona. Par jab aap ko jate waqt thik se bye nahi bol payi tab laga ke I was missing something important. Abhi jab niche aap ko dekha to main khud par yakin nahi kar payi. Aur aap ne jo abhi kaha wo sun kar I really feel blessed by god, my unsaid wish is granted by him.

Maan is listening to geet with full attention. He never thought she will express her feelings so openly.

To aag dono taraf bara bar lagi hai.

He wants to make this moment special. So he takes out a red box from his pocket then he goes down on his knees. He offered her the box


I will try to keep you happy from bottom of my heart. Sari duniya ki khushiya tumhare liye lana chahta hoon. Apni sari zindgi tumhare saat bitana chahta hoon.

Tumhare saat hasna chahta hoon

Tumhare saat khushiyon ke aasu rona chahta hoon

Tumhare saat zindagi ka hare k pal bitana chahta hoon

Tumhare saat zindagi ki har ek khushi jina chahta hoon

Tumhare saat apna naya jivan shuru kar na chahta hoon

Kya tum mera saat dogi

Meri jivan sangini ban kar

WILL YOU MARRY ME?

With this he open box for her which is having a platinum chain with diamond pendant.


For geet this is dream come true. She always thought her dream man proposing her in this style. But she never thought this will ever come true for her in this beautiful manner that to on her birthday which she long forgot to enjoy.

She is having tears in her eyes. She is not in position to think or talk. Her heart is cherishing every second of this. She nodded her head in yes and with tears in her eyes she said

It is my dream proposal. You really make me feel special. I will be most happy and lucky to spend each and every moment of my life with you. Main aap ka her kadam pe saat dungi. Zindagi ka safar hum dono sirf aur sirf haste hue tay karenge.

Main aap se shaadi kar ke aap ki jivan sangini ban kar rahna chahoongi.

Maan's happiness has no boundries. He immediately stands up and takes chain from box. Ask geet

izzajat hai

She blushed and said ab aap haq jata sak te hain

Tum soch rahi hongi ki maine ring ke jagah chain kyun layi? Kyun ki I want to buy ring of your choice. Aur waise bhi ye tumhare janam din ka tohfa hai. HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Maan very elegantly tied chain around geet's neck.


Geet's cheek becomes red due to blushing. His proximity is creating unknown urge in her.

This is my best birthday ever. Bagvaan ne mujhe meri zindagi ka sabse khubsurat aur nayab tohfa diya hai ' aap jaisa jivan saathi.

Suddenly something strikes to her mind. She turned towards maan and said

Lekin aap ko kaise pata ki aaj mera birthday hai?

Maan smiled at her question

Wo kal raat tumhe us ladki ne wish kiya than a, tab maine sun liya tha. Mujhe tumhara birthday khas banana tha iss liye maine tumhe aaj propose kiya.

Geet interrupted maan isska matlab aap

Maan cut her short haan main wahi tha. Tumhe aisehi chodkar kaise chala jata.

Geet felt protected, secure and happy for his concern.

Thank you maan

Maan filled happy by seeing new feeling in her eyes.

Hum to pure ke pure ab aapke hain to thank you kehne ki jaroorat nahi.

Geet smiled full heartedly with blushing on his claim.

They want to freeze this moment forever which is not possible. Everyone is waiting for them downstairs. They have to inform everyone about their decision so they come downstairs.



here is next part

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Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
luvd the proposal of msk..
enki mulakat kab pyar or shaadi mein badli
pata hi nahi chala..

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