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Posted: 13 years ago
mulakat
part 8

For both of them time is running so slow. They are eagerly waiting to meet each other. Both wanted to talk so much.

At 6 pm

A car stops at main gate. Maan come out of car. He saw his geet waiting for him in a red color salwar suit. Looking gorgeous, her flicks teasing her cheeks, eyes searching for someone. When those pair of eyes saw maan, they twinkle with joy. Both walk towards each other. When they are few steps apart from each other, they stop

hi

Hi

Chale

Haan chaliye.

Maan opens door for her. She sits in the car. Maan sit at driver sit. He starts to drive the car. Silence is lingering between them. Finally geet speak wo call nahi answer kar payi iss ke liye sorry

TuhiChale Tmne pahle hi sorry bola tha phir se bolne ki jarurat nahi. I can under stand you were busy.

Aur tumhe pata bhi nahi tha wo mera number hai.

Thank you for understanding

Are ab bas bhi karo sorry and thank you, puri shyam issi mein gujarni hain kya

Maan feels conscious at his own statement.

Ji nahi geet said bluntly and then feel embraced.

Both feel relief with this light conversation. After some time

Dadima ne mujhe tumhari pasand ki ring lane ki jimeddari di hai.

Papaji ne bhi mujhe kaha hai ki main aap ki pasand ki ring aap ke liye le loon.

Waise engagement 11/11/11 ki hai aur shadi 15 din baad. To tayari abhi se shuru kani padegi na.

Geet shied. To change the topic she asked maan

Aap ko mera number kanha se mila

Tumne to mujhe phone kiya nahi iss liye maine hi tumhara number dhoond liya.

Mere paas aap ka number nahi tha. Aap ka number sirf papaji ke paas tha. Issliye main chahkar bhi aap ko phone nahi kar payi.

Maan is obliged with her eagerness. Main bhi to tumse baat kar na chahta tha. Issi liye to tumhe phone kiya tha.

Geet is also obliged with his frakness.

In this conversation they reached to shop. Maan half heartedly lo hum pohanch gaye.

They both come out of car. They walked in the biggest jewellory shop of city, as a couple for first time. They reached the counter. Sales girl greeted them how can I help you?

We would like to see engagement rings in pair. She smiled and said surely

She then shows latest collection of rings in pair. When they go through it, some are liked by maan but not by geet. Some are liked by geet but not by maan. Sales girl finally brought last few sets.

They see it and pointed at same pair and said at once


ye wali

Ye wali

They both look at each other and smiled. Sales girl said aap dono ki pasand to ek hi hai. Aap log size check kar ligiye.

Maan take ring and asked geet for her hand. She shyly gives her hand. Maan slowly slips ring ring in her finger which fit correctly. Both smiled. Then maan give his ring to her. She also slips it in his finger.

These sizes are perfectly fine

To kya ye pack kar doon.

Surely. Pack it separately and make it fast.

They give rings to her and she went to pack the rings.

They paid for rings, took packets and walked out of shop.

When they reached car, maan again opened door for geet. Both sit at places and maan starts to drive. After few min maan asked coffee

Ok

We will have coffee then I will drop you home.

Ji jaroor.

Maan arranged all important meetings of 3 days for today only as he wants to be totally free for next 3 days. But he kept 2 hrs free for this most important meeting. He gets a call from adi. He picks it up haan adi bolo

Sir wo client are reached and waiting for you.

Maine tumhe kaha tha na mujhe koi disturbance nahi chahiye.

Haan sir par wo log ek baar aap se milna chahte hai. Sir, important deal hai. Agar aap aaja te to accha hoga.

He don't want to shout in front of geet so he agreed to go and cut the call.

Geet mujhe jana padega. Important client hai.

It's ok maan aap jayiye. Coffee agli bar pi lenge.

Haan waise bhi main agle 3 dino ke liye free hoon. Issiliye ye sab meetings aaj rakhani padi.

Chalo main tumhe ghar chod deta hoon.

Thick hai maan.

They drive to her home silently. As they reached aap andar nahi aayenge.

Nahi geet agli baar. Abhi late ho raha hai.

Geet smiled and come out of car. She is going when maan said main call karunga

Ok bye and don't stress.

Maan smiled at her concern and said definitely.

Geet go into the home while maan drive to office.

Geet showed maan's ring to every one in the home. They liked it. She then talked to everyone about preparations, while every one teased geet fully. Raji already booked parlour appointment for her tomorrow. She goes to her room very late. She wanted to talk to maan but don't know he is still free or not. So she decided to wait for him to call. While waiting she sleeped unknowingly.

Here maan's meeting extended upto 11 pm. He is also getting restless to talk to geet. But he doesn't have an option. He reached home very late. He takes his phone to call geet but saw time and changed his mind. He messaged her Good night. Then he also sleeps.

Geet's eyes open when she heard mobile beep. She opens the message, it was from maan.

She smiled and replied good night as she also doesn't want to disturb him.

Next day

Both get covered with people and not get a single chance to talk or massage. Geet's half day went in the parlour. While maan is covered with guest and his sister. At the night geet's room is fully occupied with her cousins. They were busy in discussing plans for tomorrow that how to trap their jijaji. She is helplessly sitting in between them. They took her phone away so that she can't talk to maan. At night geet get her phone. She messaged maan how was your day.

Total mess. Saas leni ki bhi phoorsat nahi thi.

To thick hai. Take rest.

You too. Eagerly waiting for tomorrow.

Me too.


so how was it

i am choosing third pair

as it got 2 votes

waiting for comments

previous----part 7

next----part 9

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome
waiting for their engagement

Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update. Loved the way they were hesitating and getting to know each other. Also the anticipation was rightly portrayed.
just something for info...please don't mind
the rings you showed are usually not used as guy-gal pair accrosing to western traditions. The ring with solitaire is engagement ring and the band is wedding band which is slipped by the groom over the engagemnt ring. Both rings are worn in the same finger. Engagement ring inside and band outside.
Men have a seperate wedding band which is little thicker than the girl's wedding band.
I got the whole set as a gift on my first anniv when I was in US😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update dear... they are so sweet😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update next part soon eagerly waiting for maaneet conversation also
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear...and rings are too good...i liked them so much...

continue soon...and thaks for pm...
waise dono ne shop me hi engagemet kar li...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058

awesome part dear...and rings are too good...i liked them so much...

continue soon...and thaks for pm...
waise dono ne shop me hi engagemet kar li...



they just checked the size 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...
the rings r so beautiful
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pritm



they just checked the size 😉



i know but they slipped the ring into each other fingers...so i hv said it...

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