mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi MAANEET ss COMPLETED - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the surprise...amazing...thanks for pm...continue soon...
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part 13
lovely part...
so this was a surprise to Geet from Maan...
the trip is gonna be exciting...
cont soon...
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thank you so much for comments and liking


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mulakat
part 14

Geet is beyond shock to the situation. Maan is standing in front of her. All others are saying surprise. That mean they all did this for her. But why didn't maan tell her anything. She is dying to talk to him. He is neither giving proper reply to her massage nor taking her calls. Now he is in front of her. She is so happy to see him.

Maan can see how restless she is. Yes she is happy by seeing him. But some thing beyond worry, care for himcan be seen in her eyes.

To lighten the situation maan come forward and side hugged geet

To geet batao tumhe inka surprise kaisa laga?

She blush accha laga

Geet immediately turn to take garland. She again looks both of them.

Ye waala do

With this maan take garland which is liked by both of them. She takes pooja thali also. Maan gives money and take garland in his hand. All are watching them. Finally annie

To bhai bhabhi aap logo ki shopping ho gayi ho to chale

Hmm

They all are walking forward while maan and geet behind. Maan take geet's hand in his

Naraz ho

she shook her head

To

Aap ko pata bhi hai mujh par kya gujri kal se. aap ne nahi thck se massage kiya nahi phone uthaya.

Maan can see pain in her eyes as well as voice

Sorry

He holds his ears. Geet immediately remove his hand from ears

Wo tumhe surprise den eke chakkar main kuch jyada hi ho gaya

Par aap to banglore janewaale the na to kya meeting cancel kar ke yanha aaye hai.

He is feeling conscious to answer her question. She raised her eyebrows

Meri koi meeting nahi thi. Par sab ne mujhe mana kiya tha tumhe batane se

Iss ka matlab

Haan main bhi planning me shamil tha par idea mera nahi tha

Maan aap ko pata hai how much I miss you.

Geet meri bhi halat tumse alag nahi thi

Geet can see sincierity in his eyes. He is also looking as restless as her.

Agar main tumse baat karta to ye chupa nahi pata ki main bhi aanewala hoon. Uss din jab sab ne tumse mujhe call karwaya tha, usse pehale hi sab ne mujhe se baat kar ke ye wada liya tha ki main tumhe kuch nahi bataunga. Par ye sab tumhare hoto ki muskan ke liye tha. Wo muskan jo mujhe samne dekh kar tumhare hoto pe aayi thi.

Geet blushed furiously and hid herself in his embrass

Dubara aisa mat karna

Hmm

Hmm kya

Agar mujhe itna accha hug milta hai to thodi shararat to chalegi na

Geet hit her feast on his chest

Maan aap bhi na

They parted when they heard some voices. Raji and annie are coming towards them.

Aapka ruthna manana ho gaya to chale ab

Raji ye jaroor tera hi idea hoga

Aisa jabardast idea aur kisi ka ho sakta hai kya

Tu rook tujhe main shopping ke time pe batati hoon

Koi baat nahi agar didi ne shopping nahi karwai to jijaji karwa denge

Haan jaroor

Geet looked at maan shocked.

Kya bhai aap aur raji bhabhi ko kitna pareshan kar rahe ho. Bhabhi main aap ke saath hoonWith this annie hugged geet.

They all get directly into main mandir as MSK name is sufficient to send them directly in. they reached insidethe area where only few renowed peoples are allowed. They all are feeling some warmth at this place. Sai baba's murti is looking like real. They are so near to it. Pandit ji give maan and geet chance to do pooja and aarti. After aarti maan give gold shawl to panditji. Panditji cover murti by it. While giving Prasad he ask maan

Aap ne koi mannat mangi thi

Nahi par mujhe bina mange jindagi ka kubsurat tohfa mil gaya. Iss liye ye shagun

Geet is happy with maan's belive. She asked sai baba to give him all he wanted and keep them happy, she thanked them for giving life partner like maan. They one more time bowed in front of saibaba, thanked them for giving them each other (Maan ki geet aur geet ka maan) and ask for blessings for future.

They come out from mandir. They took Prasad in mandir premices. Now it's time to go back to Mumbai. They all arrived at helly pad in shirdi. They go to Mumbai by helicaptor. All gang try to pull leg but it is MSK that they are dealing with. So finally they prefer to sleep and take rest. Because after reaching Mumbai they have lot of things to do. Geet also sleeps on maan's shoulder.


They reached in evening. All goes to respective room to get ready and catch for night life here. Geet tell them that she will not come as she is too tired. Maan skip by making excuse of video conference.

Geet get massage get ready upto 8 pm for dinner

OK

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previous---- part 13

next ------ part 15

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute and romantic update... ab dinner ka kya plan hai😉
Are... me first to comment???? feeling great!!!!
Edited by maanhar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 41 ...

awesome ... superb ...

loved the surprise ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...

'm excited 4 dinner date ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
kaash mera maan bhi mujhe mil jaye jo itne ache surprises de
i lurve maanuuu
kitna sweet hain
n now a dinner
im sure maan has planned something romantic for his geet
maan ki geet

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maanhar

cute and romantic update... ab dinner ka kya plan hai😉

Are... me first to comment???? feeling great!!!!



maaneet angle

part 41 ...

awesome ... superb ...

loved the surprise ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...

'm excited 4 dinner date ...


dinner date is definately going to be tooo special
i am sure you will enjoy it
😊




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Loved the surprise. continue soon.

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