mulakat jo zindagi ban gayi MAANEET ss COMPLETED - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome love it

the message written by geet was fabulous
n maan message wa also gr8
how they both expressed their feeling by smsing


continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part dear...
loved it...continue soon and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update...
eagerly waiting for next to know...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
there phone conversation was sweet & cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 d pm ...

awesome ... superb ...

loved every bit of it ... finally , dono ki baat ho hi gayee ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesme convo
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Posted: 13 years ago
mulakat
part 11


As shadi is after 15 days, important people stayed back with young gang while others left. They get busy in discussion for arrangements of wedding. Young gang is busy with playing video games and roaming around. Like this 3-4 days went.

Maan and geet are having massage chat in day and whole night talking. They both feel good as they are opening to each others. They started to know each others. A new bond which formed is started to become stronger. The excitement while talking to each other, take them to new world. They are missing to meet. Both wanted to meet. Maan texed geet

Uss din ki coffee aaj ho jaye

So you want me to come for coffee date

Who said date? I asked for only coffee. Geet is pissed of with his answer.

I don't drink coffee

OK then give me company for coffee. I will pick you up.

No need I can come by myself. She knows maan is teasing her. She also wants to meet him so she agree but with attitude

Then at 5 pm in **** cafe

OK

Maan smiled at her cute anger. He knows he made her angry and he is going to make up for it at their coffee date.

Maan is waiting for geet at caf. He has made special arrangements for her. He wanted to make their date special. He gets a call from geet. He wonders why she is calling when she has to be here. He answers call

kya geet tum abhi tak pahunchi nahi.

Maan he can sense tnsion in her voice.

Kya hua geet tum thick to hona.

Maan wo meri gadi kharab ho gayi hai

Tum wahi ruko main aata hoon

Ji accha

Maan went to pick up geet. He reached there, he see geet playing with some children. They all made a circle by tieing hands.they are running, singing a song. Maan is memorized with geet's smiley face. He gets lost in her. The children brock circle and start to run.

Geet also runs. She is running forward by looking at back side. Suddenly she bumped into maan. She is about to fall due to sudden collision but maan caught her. Geet's eyes were first close, she slowly open eyes. Her eyes meet with maan's. She shied and lowers her eyes. She smiled, maan also smiled.


When they heard giggles of children, they streghtten themselves. Both look at opposite sides. Geet notted her dupatta

aap kab aaye

Bas abhi aaya

Wo gadi kharab ho gayi thi aur yanha se jagah door thi, iss liye maine aap ko phone kiya.

Accha kiya. Yanha koi garaj bhi nahi hai. Ab chale

Hmm

Geet say bye to children. They walk some distance

Main driver ko kahke gadi ghar bhijwa dunga.

Lekin aapko taqlif

Maan cut her iss mein taqlif ki kya baat hai geet. Ab chalo chup chap.

Geet is about to sit in car, she sees golgappe on road side.

Golgappe she speaks and looked at maan. Maan see excitement on her face

Tumhe khane hai?

Geet don't know what to say. She wanted to eat but not sure of maan's reaction. So she speaks NO and nodded her head in yes.

Chalo she is unwillingly sitting in the car when

Car mein nahi golgappe khane

Geet with excitement

sachhi

Mucchi

They both come to eat golgappe.

Bhaiya 2 plate dena aur acche banana. Man gives plates and started to serve. Geet is ravilishing every single golgappa. Maan is unable to eat due to spice. When geet see maan, she immediately asks bhaiya, ek mitha banayiye.

Bhaiya give it to geet. Without waiting she feed it to maan

ye mithawaala khayiye, aap ka tikha kam ho jayega. When she keeps it in maan's mouth she realizes what she is doing.


She slowly removes her hand and shied. She is unable to look back to maan. Maan is also stunted by this sudden contact. When he sees her shying, he feels teasing her

Tum kitna tikha khati ho, sabhi tikhi chije hi pasand hai kya tumhe

With this geet faught back maan aisa nahi hai. main golgappe aur ice crme bina ruke kha sati hoon. Mujhe dono bahut pasand hai.

Maan smiled at her and then he paid. They get into car.

Thank you maan golgappe ke liye.

Tumhe accha lagan a to bas

Ab kanha ja rahe hai

Thoda sabar rakho, geet

so how is golgappa treat

do comment

previous ----part 10

next-----part 12

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

superb update n golgappa treat is just too good loved it eagerly waiting for maan's surprise wt he is going to do update soon

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago

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