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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all for your lovely comments! I really appreciate it! :)

IMPORTANT NOTE REGARDING THIS FF: Please take your time and read this. Thank you..
Over the past days errr months, I have seen a tons of decrease of my fans in this FF. I am really sad but I guess whatever goes up must come down. So I have decided to end this FF VERY SOON! Don't know when or how! But I guess I will. I have this weird feeling that this FF is turning out to be a boring one or maybe I am just stretching it too much just like some writers do in dramas. So I am gonna end this FF VERY SOON! AND I might start a new FF depending on your likes and support. I don't know who shall I write on: Maan Geet AUR Arnav Khushi! So please suggest me that should i write a new FF and who shall it be on? And don't worry, I won't make that FF boring and STRETCHY! Please do reply! Thank you and Enjoy it! XD ?(BTW Arnav and Khushi are my new passion as well as Maan and Geet.. These two couples shall never leave my heart!) XD

Part 38:
Everyone gulped once and entered the tunnel. Geet behind everyone trying to be strong but from the inside she was hell scared.
"K-kya Udhay tum ainvayi dar rahay ho?! Oh please! Darna bilkul nahin main hoon na!"
"H-haan Geet tum hi ho."
Udhay then leaves Yash's hand and goes to hold Geet's! Everyone laughs at both of them because they know Geet is as much scared as Udhay.
"Geet, tu bhi na!"
They kept on walking till they encountered a creepy and a haunted house. It was a small and of course a creepy haunted house. They all went inside and looked here and there.
"Welcome guys to Bhoot Bangla! This house was built in 1864. Here lived a happily family of 4. Mother, father, a daughter name Payal, and another daughter name Choti. One time, the Mother and the daughters encountered some goons in their house while the daughters father was not home. The goons killed them all and ran away. When the father came home, he was shattered to see his family's dead bodies in his kitchen. He couldn't take it in so he got an heart attack and died at the spot. (In a spooky voise Arjun said) Ab sunne ko milta hai ke un do baitiyon ki rooh (ghost) isi ghar ke ird gird ghoomta rehta hai. When ever some one says I killed you, They will haunt you till they kill you."
Everyone creeped out except of Mayank. Arjun himself creeped himself out, listening to his own made up story. Udhay, who was standing right next to the kitchen counter, bumped in to a plate, which fell on the ground and broke in two peaces. Everyone screamed their head off. Udhay fell down at the spot and fainted. Well you know he is a scaredy cat. Everyone hid behind the sofa located in the living room. When they found Udhay not with them Nupur instantly started thinking.
"AAA.. Udhay bhai! woh us ko lay gayi! Udhay bhai wapis aa jao! Please!! Please!!"
"Nupur chill yaar! Idher hi ho ga! Us say le ja ker bhoot ne apna din kharab kerna hai!"
"Woh raha. Oh God woh neechay giray huway hain."
Yash and Mayank went to get Udhay.. They splashed some water on his face.
"UDHAY!"
"Yeh nahin uthnay wala. Is ko utha ker le jaatay hain."
Mayank holds on to his legs while Yash holds on to his arms. He was extremely heavy.
"Pata nahin kya thoosta rehta hai.."
They took him in the living room and placed it on the sofa. Meera splashed some water on his face. And Arjun shook him very hard. When Udhay woke up he started screaming.
"AAA BHOOOTTT!!! BACHAO! Daikho tumhay mujhay maar ke kuch nahin milay ga. Please mujhay chod do! Please!!"
"UDHAY!"
Udhay came back in his senses. Geet starts sensing some noises on the top floor. She just wanted to go check. Geet secretly went up. She wanted to prove others and herself that she is not scared of bhoots. She wanted to go alone. So this was the right time. Geet went on the top floor.
Over to the gang:
"Guys chalo yahan se. We have to leave immediately. This place is a dangerous place."
"Where is this Geet?"
"I think she left already. Remember she was scared too. I think more than Udhay. So she just left.Ab tak to gari main bhi pohonch gayi ho gi." Said Yash
"Are you sure?" Asked Mayank.
"Haan baba. Chalo chaltay hain is se pehle aik aur heart attack aa jaye nawab sahab ko!"
They all left assuming Geet has gone! However, unaware Geet kept on going in the room. When she sees no one there, she decides to reunite with her friends. She went downstairs while heart bumping loudly. She sees no one there.
"Aray yeh kahan chalay gaye??? Abhi to idher hi thay!"
"Udhay, Nupur!"
No replies. Geet ran outside and saw nobody.
"Oh no!" She forgot the way she came. She walked the opposite way than she came.
"I think thoda sa aur aagay." She entered a forest. It was getting dark and she didnt have her phone with her. There she encountered to men. Maybe they can help.
"Aray suniye bhai sahab! I need helppp..."
Geet shocked to see the two guys who tried to ruin her and his brother's life. She wanted to strangle them but she couldn't of course. One of the guy, in a gunda getup and same with the other one. They exchanged looks. They both smiled at each other and looked at geet from top to bottom.. Geet knew better. She took off running. But of course they were stronger than her. They caught her before she could go any further. Geet screamed her head off. One guy covered her mouth. and they both picked her up and took off. They went in the same "haunted" house. They found some rope and tied her against the chair.
"Barso baad itna acha mouka mila hai tere bhai se badla laine ka to hum kaisay jaane dai saktay hain!"
Geet screamed!!
"Chod do mujhay! Please!"
"Aray tumhay humse darne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai! Just chill maar! Hum tumhay chod daingay jab tak hamara kaam nahin khatam hota!"
Geet cried. She now knew that she will loose everything in her life. Even her MAAN!

Kaisa raha?????? Do reply! :D


Precap: Chalo guys start dreaming of the next part. What now? XD

Ok guys hope you liked it. Do comment and like this post! :) ~Sara~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
loved loved it
thanks for pm
cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome but scary now what will happen to geet wonder where is maan ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved d update dear!!!!
OMG!!!!! wat will happen nw...poor Geet!!!!!
w8ing 4 d nxt part...
plzzz continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

omg geet is in danger

ab kaun bachayega usse

nd ye uday toh bada darpok nikla

zara si awaz sunkar faint

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Posted: 13 years ago

plz dont let anything happen to geet...plz someone save her...


lovely update...


loved it...


thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all for your lovely comments! I really appreciate it! :)

IMPORTANT NOTE REGARDING THIS FF: Please take your time and read this. Thank you..
Over the past days errr months, I have seen a tons of decrease of my fans in this FF. I am really sad but I guess whatever goes up must come down. So I have decided to end this FF VERY SOON! Don't know when or how! But I guess I will. I have this weird feeling that this FF is turning out to be a boring one or maybe I am just stretching it too much just like some writers do in dramas. So I am gonna end this FF VERY SOON! AND I might start a new FF depending on your likes and support. I don't know who shall I write on: Maan Geet AUR Arnav Khushi! So please suggest me that should i write a new FF and who shall it be on? And don't worry, I won't make that FF boring and STRETCHY! Please do reply! Thank you and Enjoy it! XD ?(BTW Arnav and Khushi are my new passion as well as Maan and Geet.. These two couples shall never leave my heart!) XD

Part 39:
Geet cried. She now knew that she will loose everything in her life. Even her MAAN! By now Geet was terrified. She didn't know what these goons will do to her. Maybe kill her, or injure badly. Geet was tied against a chair while the two men were standing against a further wall whispering to each other their plans. Geet tried very hard to hear their whispers through her sobs. All she could make out was, "Agar plan fail phir is ladki ko is dunya ko alvida kerna padhay ga!" Geet started crying more and more.
While over to Geet's friends, they now reached the car and found Geet no where. "Where is Geet?"
After looking for her here and there, Mayank finally concluded that Geet peechay reh gayi hai.
"Let's go. Us ghar se doondh ker aatay hain."
"But Udhay bhaiya. Is tarha kero ke aap saaray mard (men) jao aur hum ladkiyan peechain ruktay hain Udhay bhaiya ke paas." Everyone nodded. All of the girls made sure the door was locked while all of the men disappeared in the woods.
"Yeh pata nahin Geet kahan reh gayi hai. Abhi to hamare saath thi but then where did she disappeared?" Said Yash.
"Let's see kahan hai!" Said Mayank. When they reached the house, the two goons saw a gang od men coming in. "Yeh loug koun hain? Aur yahan kya ker rahay hain? Ladki chupao!" They both pick up Geet and forcefully pushes her in a closet along with them two. Geet tried to scream but she couldn't because of one of the goons hand were on her mouth. Mayank came first in the house followed by Yash and Arjun. "Saaray phail jao. I'll go upstairs, Mayank tum is floor pe daikho and Yash tum neechay basement main chalay jao." They all seperated. They kept on calling Geet's name but no one replied. Yash went upstairs in to a room where Geet was hidden. "GEET!" No reply! "Geet!" Still no reply! Yash was about to leave the room when he heard something bumping in to a wall in the walking closet. "Wahan pe koun hai. Kahin Geet to nahin." Yash walks up to the closet (all in slow motion :P) Right when he is about to open the door to find Geet gasping along with the two goons, Mayank yells from the bottom stairs. "YASH! ARJUN! Neechay aao quickly!"
Yash leaves the room in a hurry without glancing back at the door once. "Kya huwa Mayank?" When Yash reached the bottom floor. "Woh abhi Nupur ka message aaya hai ke Udhay ki tabhiyat bhot kharab ho rahi hai, he is seeing things. Humain abhi jana ho ga."
"Per Geet?" Asked Arjun. "Bhool gaye, she has a phone to usay call ker lain gain. Un ladkiyon main se kisi ko driving nahin aati. Aur waisay bhi shaam ho rahi hai, is jungle main rehna sahi nahin hai. Agar is ghar main nahin hai then that means ke woh yahan se chali gayi hai. Ab tak to jungle se bahir nikal gayi ho gi aur apnay Bhaiya ko call ker chali gayi ho gi.":
"Hmmm. OK then chal!" And then they leave the house leaving Geet with the obnoxious guys.
Filler and short tha na! Sorry I was really busy. 😭 Next part zaroor acha ho ga, Abhi ke liye apnay lovely comments and likes chod do! PLEASE! :P 😉
Kaisa raha?????? Do reply! :D


Precap: Chalo guys start dreaming of the next part. What now? XD

Ok guys hope you liked it. Do comment and like this post! :) ~Sara~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

oh god

ye saare bhi geet ko akela chodh gaye

me thinking wats gonna happen next???

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear!!!
poor Get in danger... ab usse kaun bachayega...???
W8ing plzzz cont soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

actually m not geeting dat hw come dey left geet dere...disgusting...


nice update...


thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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