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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar dev ne to bhai hone ka farz nibha diya

ab dadi jaldi se aap bhi
gud gud bankar
kudi walo ke ghar jakar
kudi ka haath maan lana
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

yaar dev ne to bhai hone ka farz nibha diya


ab dadi jaldi se aap bhi
gud gud bankar
kudi walo ke ghar jakar
kudi ka haath maan lana


haha.. fingers crossed! XD
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...

loved it...

ho dev ne maan k dil k halat jaanne k liye juice mein alcohol mila diya...not fair...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear what an update i just can't wait for the next one 😍update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you all for your lovely comments! I really appreciate it! :)


BTW guys. I just made up the place in Hosiyarpur cause I don't know much about Hoshiyarpur other than that Geet used to live there with her family and she met Maan there for the first time. XD

Part 37:
Dev told her everything. Then Dadi ma found a perfect spot for herself to hide. She giggled. Dev signaled her from his hand: 5 4 3 2 1.
Maan: "Yeh mujhay kya ho raha hai? Itna acha juice. Yeh apple juice hi hai na? Per...
Dadi Ma giggled.
Dev ran inside acting all innocent.
Dev: BHAI!!!
Maan looked at him and shook his head 4 times because he couldn't focus clearly cause of the juice. Dev noticed that finally the juice has gotten him. But still it's time to test Maan's intelligence after the drink.
"BHAI! Yeh mujhay help chahiye."
Dev was holding a book of accounting. He turned to a random page.
"Bhai. yeh problem mujhay samajh nahi aa raha. zara aap samjha dain gain."
Maan nodded weakly. He keeps shutting his eyes.
"Y-yeh p-problem bhot easy hai. Is ko bas tum..."
Maan shook his head again. Dev, who was standing still and reading Maan's expressions, couldn't help but laugh. Which made Maan glare at him for a second or two. Dadi ma was also giggling. She was still standing outside the door, hiding and watching the whole scene.
Maan tried to concentrate on the problem but he couldn't do anything. He glared at the problem hopingt he problem would be solved by itself. Maan after 5 minutes was totally irritated and he was falling here and there and Dev was saving him from falling.
"Bhai kya huwa? Aap ki tabhiyat to theek hai na?"
"H-haan main theek hoon."
"Bhai yeh le juice pee jiye."
Dev gave him another full glass of juice and maan again drank it. He was fully drunk now. He dropped the book and fell backwards. He landed on his bed.
"Aray bhai. Kya huwa? aaiye baith jaaiye."
Dev helped him get up and made him sit down.
"Bhai..."
"H-haan?."
"Aao game khailtay hain?"
"GAME?!"
"Haan. rapid fire. bhot maza aaye ga. Main jo bhi poochon ga us ka aapnay seedha aur forun jawab daina hai."
"Hmmm..."
"Ok here I go."
"Office."
"Kaam"
"Ok. Memories?"
Maan then have flashbacks of Geet. He smiled thinking about her which was not un noticed by Dev.
"Bhai reply please!"
"Geet Handa."
Hearing the name of Geet, Dadi ma and Dev stared at each other in shock. They were so delighted to hear Geet's name from Maan's mouth. Dev smirked.
Maan paused for a second. He again smiled and started to think about Geet.
"Geet." Maan repeated.
"Cutest smile?"
Geet."
"Love???" Dev was kind of scared to ask that but then he managed and asked.
"Maan grinned.
"Ms. Geet Handa."
Dev was so happy. He hugged Maan.
"Mubarak ho bhai! Mubarak ho. Yahi sun-ne ke liye hamare kaan tars gaye thay."
Dev ran outside to meet Dadi ma. Maan was still smiling imagining Geet. Dadi ma who was hearing the whole conversation was standing against the wall and crying in joy.
"Dadi ma aapne suna!? Bhai ne kya kaha?"
"Haan humne sab suna. Hum bhot khush hain Dev Bete. Hum aap ko bata nahin saktay. Aapnay bhot acha kaam kiya hai. Ab to bas jaldi se Geet is ghar ki bahu ban jaye."
"Wo wo wo Dadi ma, itni door ki planning mat kerain. I don't think so bhai ne abhi Geet ko bataya hai. We have to encourage him first before planning further."
Dadi ma playfully slapped Dev's cheek and left. Dev took out a pill from a packet.
"Yeah ab sonay ki medicine. You need to sleep."
Dev went in and mixed the pill in Maan's juice and forcefully made him drank it. Maan fell asleep.
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In the afternoon Maan finally woke up.. He had a headache.
"UFF mujhay itna dard kyun ho raha hai?"
Dev came in with a glass of milk.
"Bhai!!! I am so happy today."
Dev came and hugged Maan. Maan was totally confused by his behavior. He hugged him back in confusion.
"Kya huwa Dev?"
"Bhai main aap se aik baat keroon to aap mujhay bilkul nahin dantay gain aur na hin maare gain."
"Haan kero."
"Promise?"
"Haan baba promise! bolo?"
"Bhai be honest aap kisi ko pasand kertay hain?
"WHAT?! tumhara dimaagh to nahin kharab ho gaya?"
"Oh come on bhai just admit it. you told me this morning."
Not realizing what Dev had just said. Dev bit his tongue.
"Damn yeh maine kya keh diya." Whispered Dev.
"Kya kya kaha tumne? Maine subha kaha?"
Maan instantly knew Dev did something.
"Shoot kahin maine Geet ke baare mai to nahin.." Maan whispered.
"Ok bhai main ab aap se kuch nahin chupa sakta.."
Dev told everything to Maan. Maan wanted to kill him but he had promised Dev and he never breaks his promises.
"Dev sach bataon agar maine waada na kiya huwa hota to ab tak maine tera katl (murder) ker diya ho ta. Trust me."
Dev grinned.
"OK bhai now tell me do you like Geet Handa."
Maan kind a blushed which was unbelievable for Dev.
"Bhai maine to suna tha sharmana ladkiyon ka department hai aap kab se sharmanay lagay.
Maan glared at Dev.
"Oho bhai. kaash yahan pe Annie hoti to werna bhot maza aata.."
"Annie? Kahan hai woh?"
"Woh Hoshiyarpur gayi huwi hai friends ke saath."
"Hoshiyarpur, per wahan to Geet bhi gayi hai?"
"Oh to Geet Hoshiyarpur main hai? Hmmm.. To no worrys bhai jab woh wapis aa jaye to tab apne dil ki baat bata dijiye ga."
"Ok love guru. Agar aap ki chit chat khatam ho gayi hai to main kuch kaam ker loon?"
"Yeh boss!"
Dev and Maan started laughing. After some time Dev left Maan's room to make his own 'plans'.
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Geet and her crew were in Hoshiyarpur's most famous mela. Geet and her crew had gone on many rides.
"Yaar yeh kya bachon wala mela hai. Humain to kahin aur jana chahiye." Protested Arjun
"Acha to kahan jana pasand kerain gain Badshah Sahab." Said Geet.
"Kahin scary jaga jahan pe dar lagay aur maza bhi." Said Udhay.
"Oh acha to sabse fantastic jaga hai na mere paas." Said Nupur
"Acha kounsi?"
"Aap ka bedroom. Woh scary bhi jaga hai aur wahan pe maza bhi aaye ga aap ki cheezon ko daikh ker." Mocked Nupur.
"Daikho Nupur yeh tum sahi nahin ker rahi ho. Tum to meri sweet si behan ho."
"Oh agar tum dono ka sweet sa bro-sis session khatam ho gaya ho to hum yahan se chalain." Said Mayank.
"Per kahan?" asked Nisha.
"hmmm.. I think I know one place." Said Arjun.
"You came here before?" Asked Annie.
"Yea Twice before. Dad had some work and he dragged me along."
"To phir kis ka intezaar hai? CHALO!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Oh God. Hum pichlay 1 ghantay se gari main baithay huway hain and we have no clue where are we going?"
"Let's announce it now guys that we are officially lost!"
"WHAT?!"
"Arjun main tumhay zinda nahin chodoon gi."
"Just kidding yaar. We'll be there in 5 minutes don't worry."
Everyone were relieved and started laughing.
After 5 minutes:
"Here we are! The most scariest place in Hoshiyarpur.
"Arjun main to mazaak ker raha tha tum to serious ho gaye."
"Abhay chup."
"I've never been to this place before. Mujhay to har cheez ka pata hai but not this one. strange huh?" Announced Geet.
"This place is called: Darawni Bhoot Jaga." Said Arjun.
"Yeh kounsa naam hai?" Asked Udhay.
"Hai to hai tujhay kya kerna hai?" Said Mayank.
"Chalo ander chaltay hain!" Said Meera in excitement.
"Guys main 2 min main aata hoon. tum lok chalo." said Udhay.
"Aray aap kidher ko chalay Shehzada Salim. Aap kay baghair Nisha mar jaye gi." Said Yash.
"Oye! Maar khani hai kya!" Threatened Nisha.
"Aray ab ander bhi chalo. bhot ho gayi nautanki." Said Meera.
Udhay held on to Yash and Nupur held on to Mayank.
Everyone gulped once and entered the tunnel.


Precap: Chalo guys start dreaming of the next part. What now? XD

Ok guys hope you liked it. Do comment and like this post! :) ~Sara~
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...

loved it...

dev ne maan ko achha phansaya...he he he...


thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
Us drink ka bahut acha asar padha...😆😆
Loved devs plan...
ohhh scary jagah... wat will happen next???
Plzzz cont soon!!!!...
W8inggg
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome

dev ne maan ko achha phasaya...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome one
Dev ka dimaag kaam aaya
Good work done by Dev

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanxxx for pm me

and this part is awsome
dev and maan conv. ic nice and dadi too gud

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