Ik humsafar Ka saath*KUMUD & KSHITIJ FanF - Page 9

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EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH

PART 11
Esha calls Aryaman and tells him the goods nes that they r coming. After hearing this A gets over joyed and tells his wife saakshi.
A: SAAKSHI!!!
A woman wearing black sarree turns around she's sakshi.
S: Kya how? you look so happy, what'as the matter?
A: guess who's coming?
S gets shocked 'no, noway, impossible' stil shocked.
A says yes and and hugs her. A asks for kids sakshi says that Kshitij is asusual in office and NAKUL.

There's a road full of people. all r cheering and shouting 'NAKUL, NAKUL'. There is a car and a bike.


Voice: So the race begins, GO!!!!
Car & a bike wizzes off, all of them shouting 'NAKUL' and some r shouting 'ROCKY'. Car is aheading fat but the bike also going fast. now the car & bike is is at same speed. The finishing line is coming bike is coming to finshing line but whizzes, car comes and crosses the finishing line. Everone is happy and exciting.
Voice: So the guys, like every year this year too the winnier is....
ALL R SHOUTING 'NAKUL@
Vioce: Yes, noone other than Nakul Oberoi.
All are clapping. A guy comes out of car and noone other than Nakul.

Nakul's Friend: Wow nakul!!tune toh rocky ki band baja di.
N: Thanx...
Nakul's friend looks behind nakul and says
N's F: Nahi abb nahi, teri band bsjane abb woh agaya hai.
Nakul gets confused, nakul's friend tells him to turn around and gets shocked. He sees a car coming towards him

N: I'm dead duck today.
Nakul's friends tries to hide. Car stops right front of nakul and a guy comes out of car. Nakul gets scared.

THE END
PLEASE COMMENT....

"Humare Nakul ko koun dara sakta hai?"

Dreamer, kya entry hai...Nakul ki!!!!

Arre Wah!!!! I AM SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!! This is such an AWESOME fanfic!!! It is UNDESCRIBEABLE!!! (That's not even a word!lol!!!)

Dreamer ji, tusi kamal kar dekha diya!!!!

EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH

PART 12

Guy comes out of the car. Nakul gets scared.
N: APP!!!
Guy turns around and none other than KSHITIJ.
KS: Yes!!!
N: But ur meeting?!!
KS: I was gonig to meeting but all these people blocked my way. Nakul wat is this?
N: bhaiyya woh....
KS: is this the race...u were talking about?
N: Yeah...while looking down.
KS: so u won...
N: yeah...Still looking down.
Ks: did u thought when papa will know...
N: bhaiyya no please..
Ks: ok, ok..then now let's begin the next race.
N: WHAT!!! (SURPISED)
ks: yeah..let's see if u can defeat me..
N: bhaaiyya I can never defeat u...
Ks: start then..
They both sits in their cars and starts the race.
Kshitij is gonig really fast.



Then they finish the race and Kshitij wins.
N: i told u na, I can't defeat you.
Then they both go home.
Aryaman tells them about Esha & family is coming.
N: WHAT!!!??
A:Nakul no SHETANI..ok...no complaints.
Nakul is like okay and whatever.

Sydney, MEHRA'S HOUSE
Kumud is standing on balcony and remembering Karan. Kali & gungun comes there and all three of them shares eomtional moments.
Then Vishu calls every1 down. every1 comes in hall and asks what happened?
Vishu tells them tickets are arrived, before V can finish his sentence ever1 snatches their tickets (not a v good manners)
V: atleast let me finish my sentence. there is 1 prob
ALL: WHAT NOW!!!
V: 1 ticket is booked after 2 days.
all looks at each other.
V: coz their is no flight till then,
KA: but whos?
K: I guess mine...
Evey1 looks at kumud.
E: if that so we'll go wid KUMUD.
KA: yeah
K: no Badi maa.... plzzzz It's totally ok wid me and also Ive to finish my work.
V: but kumud we can't leave u here alone.
K: i'm not alone Dai maa is here na. Please all of u don't spoil the programme coz of me. and it also matters of 2 days.

GU: but di..
K: p-l-e-a-s-e...
ALL: OK...
V: ok every1 now pack ur stuff...and gets ready for flight.

THE END
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