Ik humsafar Ka saath*KUMUD & KSHITIJ FanF - Page 13

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Posted: 19 years ago
its ok get well soon
good luck on your exams 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
get well soon!!!!!!!!!!!
yaar yeh June kab ayega
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Posted: 19 years ago
Since Day_dreamer is not able 2 cont i'm going 2 cont it.But tho the script is mine,its idea is her's only
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Posted: 19 years ago
I'll try 2 do well.But i may not b able 2 reach her level.so plz bear with me
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part-17…Kumud was very dull.She comes 2 the Oberoi house.
Aryaman,saakshi,Garv,kali,Nakul receive her in a grand way.But k's mind is sumwhere else.
Kshitij who was sumwhere inside sees her her.He smiles:what a pretty girl!
He was cool.
Kali:how du u like this place?
K is silent as she was in this world.K feels that Karan is there.K smiles.Suddenly that figure of imagination vanishes.K's eyes r filled up with tears.
Kshitij cums there. K was surprised 2 see him there:karan!
Ks did'nt understand anything:Karan?who's is karan?
K cums near him & touches his face:karan…
Ks:hey,u r mistaken.i'm not karan.
All r upset seeing this. K:don't leave me karan..
K faints.

Dr cums & tests her.
All r outside the room.
Ks:I can't understand why that girl is behaving like this.
Garv:kshitij,that's a story.a tragic luv story.
Ks:what?
G:kumud & karan were gr8 luvers.but unfortunately kumud lost him due 2 a accident.
Ks:that's so sad.but why does she call me karan?is she crack?
G:u won't believe this.but actually u resemble karan.
Ks:what?
G:yes kshitij.u look exactly like karan.
Ks is shocked.

Dr cums.All r behind him. Dr:kumud is ok.but that does'nt mean that she is perfectly alright.only her lover karan can bring her back 2 life.
All r shocked. Kali:but karan is not alive.
G:Dr,can kshitij help kumud?bcoz he looks like karan only.
Dr:really?then kshitij…plz pretend 2 b karan b4 kumud.
Ks:what?
G:plz agree kshitij.this is 2 save a nice girl like kumud.
Ks thinks about how he specially felt 4 kumud at the 1st sight.
Ks:ok,I'll.
Kali:thanks a lot kshitij.
All r happy.

Ks enters K's room.K opens her eyes.k smiles:karan…
K holds his arms:I'm so happy that u r back.but where were u?
Ks gets confused.Esha cums:actually karan had gone abroad 4 an imp matter,I mean 4 his cousin's wedding.
K:cousin's wedding?which cousin?
E:let karan take rest.he has cum after a long journey.
K:ok,but promise me karan that u won't leave me alone & go again.
Ks holds her hand close 2 his chest:promise,I'll b always there with u.
Ks & K smile at each other.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi guyz....as u'll remember I (day_Dreamer) had started a story "ik humsafar ka saath" and due to my courseworks and load of work and coimng exmx I'll be not able to cont. it till end of june, so now this story will be continued by JASMINERAHUL, ideas all be mine but script will be hers...ok So guys plzzz start reading it 2day...thankyou

And my special thanks to Jasmnie...
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part-18…….Kumud is sitting simply. Kshitij cums:kumud,hav ur lunch.
K:I'm not hungry karan.
Ks:u shud'nt tell like that.u've 2 eat sumthing.i'll feed u.
K smiles.Ks takes the plate & feeds her.

Garv-kali cum there& smile. Kali:how sweet!
G:ya really.

Karan cums out.Garv smiles:what yaar?u were feeding kumud like a real lover.really u became her lover?
Ks:hey no.i'm just doing my duty.poor girl.i've 2 save her from this condition.
G:but anyways u both luk gud 2gether.
Ks smiles simply.

Ks enters kumud's room.she was sleeping.when he begins 2 go,K catches his hand:don't go
Ks:u did'nt sleep?
K:u sit here karan.
Ks:u take rest kumud
K:ok,but u've 2 sit here.
Ks:ok
Ks sits on her bed.
K:why r u sitting away from me?sit close 2 me.
Ks:kumud…is that necessary?
K:why not?don't u luv me?tell karan.look at my eyes & tell
Ks looks at her eyes:yes,I luv u kumud.
Ks tells in his mind:I'm sorry,I'd 2 lie.
K:sit close 2 me.
Ks sits close 2 K.K hugs him.Ks was stunned.Ks too hugs her.

Kali tells Garv:I think kumud has sum change bcoz of kshitij.
G:yes.i think he really became her karan.
Ka:what do u mean?
G:yes kali.i feel that kshitij luvs kumud.don't u think that?
Ka smiles. Ks overhears it.He smiles.He looks out.Kumud is going after a butterfly.Ks ooks at K:whats happening 2 me?did my drama become true?did I really start luving kumud?



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Posted: 19 years ago
brilliant!!!! this is soo cool!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part-19…Kshitij goes near kumud:do u like butterflies?
K:ya
Ks:I'l, catch it 4 u
Ks catches a butterfly & gives it 2 kumud.
K:thanks a lot karan
Suddenly that butterfly fly away from her hand.K goes behind it again.her leg slips & she falls on Ks.Both of them look into each others' eyes.K is so shy that she runs away
Ks thinks:Now I'm sure that I luv kumud.otherwise I wud'nt hav felt a special feeling whenever she's with me.
Ks goes behind her & hugs.
Garv-kali pass that way.They r wondered 2 see both of them hugging.
Ks sees them.he becomes dull & moves away from K.K feels sad.
K thinks:why did suddenly karan go away?
Ks stands alone.Garv-kali cum there.
Garv did u go away from kumud?is it bcoz we saw that?
Ks is speechless. Both of them smile.
Kali:don't b upset.we r so happy that u started luving kumud
Ks is surprised.
G:kumud is waiting 4 u.u plz go near her.
Ks smiles & goes near K.K is sad.she stands in the rain.Ks holds her arm.K smiles.
They dance in the rain.

Kshitij-kumud,garv-kumud,Nakul-Gunjun go 4 a party.its full of dance & music.
Kshitij:kumud,wil u dance with me?
K:whats the use of asking me that?how cum I not dance with u in this happy occasion as u r my real happiness?
Ks smiles.they dance.
Garv-kali r dancing 2gether.
G:can I ask u sumthing?
Kali:ya,tell
G:I …I …
K:u r a jolly person.1st time u r seen in this situation.
G:when a person is in luv,its like this kali
K:what?
G:yes,I luv u kali
K jumps with joy:I luv u too
G:really?
K:ya
They do dance with joy
Nakul & Gungun r dancing.
G:nakul,we r always dancing in parties.is it enuf?
N:what else do u want?u want drinks too?
G:how funny!nakul…u r not at all serious 4 anything.
G becomes dull.
N:why r u so stubborn?
G:if u walk like this how can I b cool?
N:then can I say sumthing serious?
G looks at his face. Nakul:I luv u
G is so happy that she can't believe it.N takes her in his arms & carries her around.
Suddenly Gungun becomes conscious.She looks around.She sees nakul dancing with a girl.G becomes sad:so it was a dream..Nakul was'nt with me.he did'nt say that he loves me.
G becomes really upset.G thinks:he's dancing with another girl
G becomes jealous. G:does it mean that he loves that girl?
N looks at G.G turns back as she does'nt want 2 look at him.
Nakul goes near her.But G goes away. N becomes dull:why is gungun avoiding me? She does'nt no how much I luv her.
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Posted: 19 years ago
😉 continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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