Ik humsafar Ka saath*KUMUD & KSHITIJ FanF - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yaar, Day_Dreamer, kitna emotional scne likha!!!!!! Part 5 mein hi Kaeran ki chuti ho gayee???? Abb dekhte hai ki Kshitij Oberoi ki entry Kumud ki zindagi mein kaise hoti hai!!!!!! BRILLIANT PART!!!!! But can I request something? Can you please make the parts a little longer???? Please...

Anyways, thjat was seriously AWESOME!!!!!!!!

Leke, jab Kshitij Kumud ki zindagi mein ayega, please make her love him as Kshitih not Karan...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😭 😭 😭 but happy that kshitij comes soon 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH

Part 7

Kumud turns around and sees ward boys bringing body on stretcher. E, V, G, GU & KA also arrive and are shocked to see what is happening. Kali & Gungun both comes by Kumud and tries to talk to Kumud. Vishu asks the police officers and they tell him that Karan is DEAD. Kumud shouts at them and is not ready to believe that KARAN is dead.

K: arre aisa kaise hosakta hai? He promised me ke who mujhe chod ke kabhi nahi jayega. Toh phir who kaise ja sakta hai iss duniya se? KASIE JAA SAKTA HAI WHO MUJHE CHOD KAR? (KUMUD SHOUTS AND CRYING ALSO)

Then police officers bring Karan's belonging and give them to GARV. Also have Karan's University card. Kumud goes to Garv and looks at things, she recognise every single thing and things fall from Kumud's hand. Kumud slowly slowly moves back and keep saying "NO, this can't happen, Karan can't leave me." E, Ka & GU holds her and are crying Kumud scolds them for crying without reason nothing has happened to Karan. Also says this body isn't Karan's. Kumud keep saying NO then she remembers herself talking to Karan on phone at the party, then she shouts "NAHI" and falls on the road and faints.

Esha, Kali & Gungun takes Kumud to hospital and Vishal & Garv go to police station to do some paperwork and claim Karan's body for the last rituals.

In hospital Doctor tells E that coz of shock Kumud might go in comma, she's in ICU. Esha, Gungun & kali stays in hospital, while Garv & Vishal and karan's some friends to his last rituals.

Vishal gives agni to Karan's chitaah and in hospital doctor informs Esha that Kumud is gone in comma.

THE END

P.S: guys when I was writing this part tears came in my eyes. This is not only a story for me...My emotions are in it as well as my imagination....I just don'y write it I feel it...
Hope u guys also feel it.

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
Today's poetry is my own…I've written it yesterday…. It calls "PYAAR"


~~~PYAAR~~~
PYAAR………Yeh aik shabd jane kitne
Ehsaas jagata hai dil mein

Yeh aik shabd jane kitne kitne
Sapne sanjota hai iin ankhon mein

Kahin pyaar kisi ki zarooraat
Toh kahin pyaar kisi ki mooraat

Aik Khubsooraat soch hai pyaar
Aik meetha sa dard hai pyaar

Pyaar ke ikraar mein kya nasha hai
Pyaar ke inkaar mein bhi kya maza hai

Yehi toh hai…………PYAAR
Yaan yehi toh hai……PYAAR

HOPE U'LL LIKE IT.

HAVE A NICE DAY...



Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Kshitij+Khumud

Yaar, Day_Dreamer, kitna emotional scne likha!!!!!! Part 5 mein hi Kaeran ki chuti ho gayee???? Abb dekhte hai ki Kshitij Oberoi ki entry Kumud ki zindagi mein kaise hoti hai!!!!!! BRILLIANT PART!!!!! But can I request something? Can you please make the parts a little longer???? Please...

Anyways, thjat was seriously AWESOME!!!!!!!!

Leke, jab Kshitij Kumud ki zindagi mein ayega, please make her love him as Kshitih not Karan...

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww…..that's so sweet……😳I really care about ur feelings……Don't worry u'll find out soon……so that's why keep reaing my story.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
I'm so sad that karan is dead.but i'm relieved about kshitij's arrival that is expected 2 happen soon.u r a true writer.thats why ur feeling cum out thru ur tears.plz don't put kumud into coma
Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
tears also came in my eyes...such an emotional part...i could visualize each n everything...awesome too good
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer


P.S: guys when I was writing this part tears came in my eyes. This is not only a story for me...My emotions are in it as well as my imagination....I just don'y write it I feel it...
Hope u guys also feel it.

😭

Kitna roliya???? Abb hume rona band kardena chahi hai...jo hua so hua...abhi aage puri zindagi pari hai jisse humhe jina hai.

That was a very emotional part. I also had tears in my eyes, Dreamer. Day Dreamer, shayad hum logo ko iss death ka aapse badaa sadma laga hai kyunki hum readers hain. This fanfic is coming along GREAT!!!!!!! PLZ. CONT. SOON!!!!!!! "Kumud ki zindagi khil jaye!"

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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
AWWW so sad....! Hope dey cum 2gether!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part...but very sad 😭 😭 😭 ....i hope everything turns better soon and kumud comes out of her comma 😭 ...anyways keep up the amazing work....u have a good hand at writing...and ppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon! 😃

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