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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ayye hayeeee...beida tarjaye (sorry my punjabi not good) yahan toh mujhse bhi zayada matam manaya ja raha hai...chalo abb celebration karte hain
here comes the next part....

EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH

PART 8

Kumud is gone in comma. Esha, Kali & Gungun are shocked. Kali holds Doctor's collar and shouts at him.

KA: Kya bakwas kar rahe ho? Listen doctor if anything happens to my sister I will not leave you.

DOC: I'm sorry. But this is truth.

Esha & Gungun holds her, in meanwhile Vishu & Garv also comes there and are shocked to know that Kumud is gone in comma.
Kali is getting out of control but Garv & everyone else explains her, Kali cries too much.

(THESE SCENES ARE WITHOUT DIALOUGUES)
Everyone at home is quite sitting in their rooms and are very sad looking at Kumud photos.

Kali is at balcony and crying, Garv comes kali hold hid hand and cries. Garv put his other hand on her head.

Esha is in hospital taking care of Kumud and is crying.

Gungun is in her room, is very sad and having flashbacks of her and Kumud as child.

6 MONTHS LATER
Showing very faded scenes of girl & a guy, having fun laughing, chatting. As scenes get little clear it shows that it is Kumud & Karan sitting under the tree and are very happy, Karan playing guitar Kumud listening, talking, climbing rocks, having fun at beach.
Then a clear vision of party night Karan talking to Kumud "I love you, jaan don't worry I'm coming", BANG, LOUD CRASH, Kumud's cell falling, Kumud running, Accident, car burning, voice saying "this guy is dead", Kumud saying "aisa nahi ho sakta", KUMUD RECOGNISING KARAN'S UNIVERSITY CARD, Things falling from Kumud's hand. Karan's body, car burning, "AISA NAHI HO SAKTA" Karan is dead, Karan's body, things falling, Suddenly a voice shouts "NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!" a girl gets up.
THE END


Plllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz comment...

APS & GULLI are not only who likes suspence

I like suspence but to keep others in suspence not to remain myself in suspence.. 😆
Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
Kumud in coma?so sad.is that kumud who got up?if so,i'm happy that she is out of coma
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
not understand perfectly but its good! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
Day Dreamer, aap to comment ki maharani ho, aur mein suspense ki.

Kya baat hai, part 8 mein hi kahani 6 mahine aage bad chuke!!!! Arre wah!!!!!!!!!!!!

Let me guess: KUMUD WAKES UP FROM HER COMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BRILLIANT!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!! TOO GOOD!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
thank god tumne itni jaldi Kumud ko coma se bahar laya...bechari ko tadapne ka moka hi nahi mila
good job cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: karan_ranveer

thank god tumne itni jaldi Kumud ko coma se bahar laya...bechari ko tadapne ka moka hi nahi mila
good job cont soon

toh kya karon meri story aggay kaise badegi?....

keep reading...

more twist & turns to come...

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Posted: 19 years ago
#77

EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH

PART 9

A girl gets up, its KUMUD. (yeah she's out of comma, warna meri story ka kya hota? 😉 ) Kumud regain Conscious. Nurse sees her and call DR, in meanwhile E & KA also comes and are shocked & happy to see her conciuos. Doctor checks her and tells Esha that she's fine now. Kumud says KARAN...Esha & Kali are shocked. E goes to right and Kali goes to left side and sit next toher, Kumud hugs Esha and cries her heart out. 😭 😭 ...She cries too much...Kali also cries and hugs her. Esha consoles both of them... Esha then informs other family members of kumud they are all r happy and come to see her...

AFTER 2 DAYS they bring kumud home, everyone takes full care of her, but she becomes "ZINDA LASH" 😭 😭 wothout KARAN. She's no more like old kumud, now she don't luaghs, go to parties, no dicos, nothing without KARAN. Days r passing like this, but kumud's time is stopped. everyone is so worried coz of her. 3 months passes like this.

1 Day Esha goes to her friend'ss home. She havn't been to her for ages. sHe tells her about Kumud and how she's become zinda lash. Swati (Esha's friend) tells her to take KUMUD to somewhere far away from here, this place.
Swati: if she'll stay here she's not gonig to improve a bit, she'll always remeber KARAn. Take her to somewhere else.
E: but she'll never agree,.
Swati: then make her, do 1 thing u take ur family to holiday then she'll never refuses.
ESha is thinking.
THE END
PLZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT...

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
good idea....go to some holidays!! that's way life change... 😛 😛

good thought dreamer... 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I think when Kumud goes to holiday she will see Kshitj there thiinking that KARAN. That what i think but we have to wait nad see. Neway contiune soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH

PART 10

Esha comes home and is thinking while informs her thst aryaman called and asusual he was asking that whe nwe r coming. Hearing this smile spreads across Esha's face nad she tells him about Swati's idea. Vishu also likes it and they deicides to go to India. 😉 😉


IN EVENING
Everyone gathers around in hall.

G: What happened dad? why u called all of us here?

Ka: what happened Badi maa? is everything is wrong?

E: no beta, nothing is wrong actually ME & VISHU decided that we all are going on family holidays.

KIDS R SHOCKTED

ALL: WHAT????!!!!!!!!!!

V: Don't be shocked, as u konw all konw from last 2 yrs we havn't been to any family holiday coz of too much work here, so we decided to go this year.

GU: KOOL DAD!!! 😃 but where r we goning this year dad?

E: INDIA 😉

KIDS: WHAT??!!!

Ka: but why india badi maa?

E: coz ur dad's best friend ARYAMAN lives there wid his family.

V: and after Abhay&Kkusum's accident we never went ot INDIA. But aryaman is really insisting so we thought to go and visit him and it will be our family holiday.

GU: bytheway dad, who is exavtly in his family? 😉 😆 (andaza toh lagana pade ga na 😉 )

V: his wife SAKSHI, 2 sons older one KSHITIJ and younger 1 NAKUL.

GU: WOWWWWWWW...

Kali pockes her 😆 😉 Esha & vishu looks at her

GU: I mean it's going to be fun.

Ka: yeah...

K: BUT....

Gu: oh pleaseeeeeee DI no ifs & buts

Ka: Yeah Di, and tihnk he's papa's best friend. If u don't go I'll not go either.

Gu: me too...

V: alright then I'll call off the whole trip..
every1's mouth r drop open.. 😆

Ka & gu looks at kumud

K; no bade papa, actually I'm ready to go.

All r like yes...

E: ok then I'll call Aryaman and inform him that we're all comimng.

V: and I'll get tickets sorted.

Kumud goes to her room.

GU+KA+G: YES!!!!INDIA HERE WE COME...

THE END

PLEASE READ...

HAVE A NICE DAY..

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago

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