Ik humsafar Ka saath*KUMUD & KSHITIJ FanF - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
kya baat hai..saab ko 360 watts ka jatka laga rahi ho...zada mile to sab karan ke jaise mar jaenge...phir unki chittah ko agni kaun lagae ga

too good!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: karan_ranveer

kya baat hai..saab ko 360 watts ka jatka laga rahi ho...zada mile to sab karan ke jaise mar jaenge...phir unki chittah ko agni kaun lagae ga

too good!!!!!!!!

Don't worry Unki chittah ko agni dene ke liye Kumud hai na....😆😆...Issi liye toh maine ussy Sydney mein hi chod diya hai....

AGEY AGEY DEKHO HOTA HAI KYA.....😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
Well guys....SHAYARI LOVERS....I'm back wid new shayari...My own original....Sorry for deley in shayari actually It took me more time to wirite this kavita, than others...Well today's shayari is called "PHIR BHI JANE KAISE"


*****PHIR BHI JANE KAISE*****

Humare hont rahe silay phir bhi jane kasie
Unhon ne humare dil ki baat janli...

Humari ankhein thi har pal jhuki phir bhi jane kaise
Unhon ne humari ankhon mein apni tasveer dekhli...

Humne manaya bohut, samjhaya bohut iss dil ko
Phir bhi jane kaise woh hume unke kareeb le gaya...

Hum rahe khamosh unke sawal par phir bhi jane kaise
Unhon ne humari khamoshi ko humara ikraar maan liya...

Hum toh thay sirf ek zinda lash phir bhi jane kasie
Unke chone se dil mein aik ajab sa ehsaas jaga...

Hum toh jih kar bhi marte thay har pal phir bhi jane kaise
Unki baatein hume ek nayi zindagi jeene par majboor kar rahi thin...

Humare hont rahe silay phir bhi jane kaise
Unhon ne humare dil ki baat janli......


Written by: day_dreamer

Please comment...Hope u'll like it..

HAVE A NICE DAY



Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

fantastic!!! superab!!! write more & more like this!!!👏

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Posted: 19 years ago

EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH

PART 15

Kali's cell ringing, esha asking her who's calling.
KA: KUMUD DI.....
Every1 gets shocked....
V: kali, please don't tell her anything about Kshitij...
KA: BUT!!!!
A: Kali he's right, there's no point telling anything her now...
KA: OK..
Kali picks up the phone with shaking hands.
KA(shaking voice): H....ELLO...
K: Kali, what took u so long?
Ka: woh actaully, I was unpacking my st..uff..
K: ok I jus wanna confirm that u'll are safe, and fine...
KA: yeah di, we're fine...every1 is missing u..
K: yeah, I know also miss all of you..but wait just little more..2 days and then i'll be there. or else i'll get early filght if u say
Kali get shocked and shouts "NO"
Every1 is shocked and kumud too.
K: kali what hapened?
KA: no I mean no need for that u take ur time..
K: aha wahan ja kar apni di ko bhool gayi...
KA: nahi di..woh actaully...
K: I know..ok bye...tc..say hello to every1..
KA: u too take care...BYe
KAli then cuts the phone.. and has tears in her eyes..
Esha sees her and tell her not to worry everytihng will be fine.

AT DINNING TABLE
Kali is keep looking at Kshitij and kshitij notices this and tries to look away. Esha tells aryaman that they should go back, but A refuses. Esha tells aryaman that kumud will never believe. Aryaman says we'll make her. Kshitij then says when kumud wil come I'll go and stay in some other place. But every1 refuses tihs idea too. Vishu then tells that he'll go to sydney and explain Kumud when she'll undersatnd then He'll bring her here. Everyone agrees. Then Aryaman says that he'll also go wid him..All agress.

THE END

PLEASE COMMENT

Also tommorrow's part is going to be dhamaka...So wait for next part I'll post preview for it:

Girl is in AIRPORT, ANONCEMENT IS MADE

"FLIGHT 00266 FOR INDIA IS GOING TO TAKE OFF" GIRL HEARS THE AMONCEMENT AND BOARDS THE FILGHT.

HOPE U LIKE IT.

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏
like ur style to represent the fiction
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: gold111

👏
like ur style to represent the fiction

Thankx soooooooo much......U'll also love the fan-fic..coz biggest twists & turns to come...so keep reading it...

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

Girl is in AIRPORT, ANONCEMENT IS MADE

"FLIGHT 00266 FOR INDIA IS GOING TO TAKE OFF" GIRL HEARS THE AMONCEMENT AND BOARDS THE FILGHT.

dreamer can't wait 4 2morow!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

rite soon.......... love to read ur "dhamaka part!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
Kshitij shud'nt b away from kumud.very nice
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: nightangel

dreamer can't wait 4 2morow!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

rite soon.......... love to read ur "dhamaka part!!!!!

NEITHER CAN I!!!!

"Abb AGyega Mazza!!!!!" b

"Shuro hojayo! Everyone, let's have a party for the "dhamaka!"

Anyone up for Pizza? Drinks?

ENJOY!!!!! Dreamer...especially you!!!!!!! That was BRILLIANT!!!!

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