Ik humsafar Ka saath*KUMUD & KSHITIJ FanF - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51

Hi guys....POETRY.....
WEll today's poetry is also written by me...Yeah my original. It's called "BHOOL" (mistake)....


~~~~~BHOOL~~~~~

Yeh kaisi bhool hui humse
Ek pal mein apne howe beganey
Yeh kaisi bhool jiski koi maufi nahi
Yah kaisi bhool jiski koi saza nahi
Humari chahat sirf thi unki khushiyan
Humari yeh chahat humare apno ke liye
Saza kyon ban gayi
Humari yeh chahat humare liye
Bhool kyon ban gayi....


Written by: Day_dreamer

HOPE U'LL LIKE IT

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ COMMENT

HAVE A GOOD DAY....


Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
Day dreamerji,

naya fan-fic
badhiya hai
nayi poem
badiya hai
unusual story
kya baat hai...badhiya hai...lage raho!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
Arre Wah! Is Fanfic ka kya kehena!!!!! Simply BRILLIANT!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! TOO GUD!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
WOW WOW WOW dat was FANTASTIC! continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
great parts...just caught up....plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue soon....cant wait to see wat happens next 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
cool..all the way..from ficiton to poem...simply superab!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57

EK HUMSAFAR KA SAATH
PART 6

Kumud cell rings, she picks it up its KARAN. Kumud asks him where is he? Everyone is waiting for him. He tells her he's reaching in 15mins.
Karan: Jaan don't worry I'll be there soon.
She asks him which road on he is now. BANGGGGGG
When Kumud hears loud crash. She calls Karan name but phone disconnects. Then Kumud Shouts KARAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! Mobile drops from Kumud's hand. Everyone stops and looks at her. V, E, G, GU & KA comes running to Kumud and asks her what happened. Kumud stands there like statue. Tears rolling down to her cheeks. Kali shakes Kumud and asks her what happened.
E: KUMUD KUCH TOH BOLOU?
Kumud just say 'KARAN'
V: Karan??!! kya howa usey?
Kumud looks at Vishu at then starts running everyone (v, e, g, gu & ka) runs behind her. Kumud reaches to the road where accident has occurred. She sees smoke coming, when she comes near then she sees a car burning. She couldn't believe what she's seeing. When someone from behind says "THIS GUY IS DEAD". Kumud is shocked and turns around.

THE END

pllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz commment.

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58

Well Today's peotry is from a film...SAJAN....I just know 3 lines, but it's really fantadtic...I really love it...HERE IT IS:

Idhar kashti thi Udhar ashiyanaa thi

Puhunch rahi thi kinare pe kashti

Ussi waqt iis tofan ko bhi anna tha.

Hope u like it...If anyone else want to post poetry here..U r most welcome...

HAVE A GOOD DAY....


Edited by Day_Dreamer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Very emotional.I hope its not karan
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
itni jaldi mar dala!!!!!!!!!
abhi Kshitij Oberoi ki entry...yeah
cont soon

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