MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice start yaar //but it was short..waiting for the next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is cheating. what a short update.

interesting do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Read bot d parts just now...interesting...can u pls add me to ur pm list??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
ypu updated? yayayay!!
you know how much i talk but i always am shut down by your works...i could not talk much after reading them..
okay call me am buttering you but seriously..there's some power in your writing that always make me read it with batted breath...concentration..that i often feel myself so attached with your works..
i liked the characterization of both the lead characters.. both share a common set of ideologies or atleast the way they are leading their life seems similar..with dis interest..both have their set of reasons..
Maan's are however shown..yet to see Geet's.
And the relation between Geet family members captured my attention again..
if we say the child is not interacting much with her/his parents, there's no need that there's no existence of love..
love is however a deep feeling which always confuses me..
but all i know is for every person there will be something that holds the major importance sometimes the mere existence of their life and for Geet i can already see it's her dreams..
what her dreams are..yet to be revealed.
It is not any usual bump and fall..it is realistic...seriously!
And his reactions too..
am glad that his wish, which was to look into her eyes was fulfilled too soon..
but there's again o dialogues or atleast no POV of Geet which is again building the anticipation.
Damn u r too good!
now i've to again wonder what's next..
UPDATE SOON or else am gonna chew you off!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMGoodnesss...Jazz- why so short... but yeah I loved it...it almost sounds like poetry...=)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Good work!!

THIS... is the MSK i fell in love with... and THIS was the MSK who was different from the other 'boss-secy' romance bosses!! 😍😍

When is the next one??? 😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Wow... Loved the update Jazz...it was so perfect..the characterization of both the characters...Love your style sakhi 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved their collide and fall meet... how many ever times I read or see them meet like this.. it still gives me the goosebumps.. lovely update!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jazzy...your writing is pure poetry😳 It flows so wonderfully.
I just love that he finds solace in her eyes, they are indeed his oasis.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow quite interseting..but like seriously can we longer updates..and hola can we know who is who and what..i am like thorougly confused...hehe

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