MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 3

Originally posted by: sneha0504

wow .. great start!!! Looks like he is already smitten by her!!!! please could you send me a pm when you update!!!! Please continue!!!!

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

Jazzy...meri bheegi bhaagi ladki😆...Such a fab start, you were keeping your talents hidden all this time on GF and now its is revealed 😳

I loved the little movements that you captured when Maan was staring up at her...

Will she ever notice him, if so, how? Ah, the anticipation has built...

Originally posted by: sush1

Your friends are right. You write extremely well. 👏

There is clarity in your thoughts which you are able to project it very well with your lucid words. The flow and the language used is also apt with the story line.

the start is just like the rain; gentle but intriguing. Will she see him from her window? will he come back to see her again? what is her dream?

keep it up and pm me your updates.

Originally posted by: ninand

love the rain in almost as unintentionally-dramatic a way as you Geet. . with an unswerving fascination and utmost devotion..

loved the description.. eager to read more.

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

Awesome start Chhote... WAY TO GO!!! 👏👏👏

Looking forward to all those beautiful complexities of their relationship before they put a name to it...

😃😃

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Ustaad!!😃

I am not sure should be more happy or more scared that you are reading this. I think I am a little of both.😆