MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71]

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mrk_1
wow nice start yaar //but it was short..waiting for the next one

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
superb update

Originally posted by: Vidushi89
Hey...awesome work...loved it...

Originally posted by: goldenball
Nice one...

Originally posted by: shah10
amazing

Thanks a lot guys😊

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mechantefille
OMGoodnesss...Jazz- why so short... but yeah I loved it...it almost sounds like poetry...=)

Thank you so much...almost poetry...wow...

Umm...short...well...😳😆

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sush1
this is cheating. what a short update.

interesting do continue

Lolz...yeah it's the max I can do at a time...😳

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Anemari
Read bot d parts just now...interesting...can u pls add me to ur pm list??

Will do😊

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Jazz, I didn't know you wrote?! OMG! I loved it! Please add me to your PM list! I can't wait to read more! lol Going to read part 2...

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel
Good work!!

THIS... is the MSK i fell in love with... and THIS was the MSK who was different from the other 'boss-secy' romance bosses!! 😍😍

When is the next one??? 😳😳

Thanx ustaad😃

I wish MSK had always retained this disinterest and detachment, with Geet being his sole undoing.

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Loved part 2! The classic bump-fall-and-catch of Maan and Geet (sigh). Maan knows Geet's name, but Geet is,well, Geet.

I know something that will keep your interest... Starts with an N and rhymes with Sharon... 😉.

Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: sangi1588
Wow... Loved the update Jazz...it was so perfect..the characterization of both the characters...Love your style sakhi 😉

Thank you hai jee🤗

Hope I do justice to what I have started.

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: sneha0504
loved their collide and fall meet... how many ever times I read or see them meet like this.. it still gives me the goosebumps.. lovely update!!!!!!

They had to meet like this...if you leave at them...they would rather run in opposite directions😆 Specially this Geet I am writing about😆

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: LuvScooby
Jazzy...your writing is pure poetry😳 It flows so wonderfully.
I just love that he finds solace in her eyes, they are indeed his oasis.

Poetry😳 You know mine😉😆

Your comment is no less btw..."they are indeed his oasis" ...wow!