MAANEET IF - KAISA YE PYAAR HAI - Page 4

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Part 9

In hoshiyarpur

Daarji: parjyiji, aap kuch der aaram kr lijiye, fir dophar ke khane pe milte h

Daarji left the place

Mahinder: ab daarji ko kaise manayenge

Daadi: don't worry

Hm h na, itna to pta chl gya h, ki zkhm abhi tk nhi bre

Khte h wqt ke sath hr zkhm bhr jata h, pr zzkhm tbhi brte h ,

Jb shi samay pe dwa mil jati h

Ase hi zkhm the sayad daarji ke dil mein, apni beti solachna ko leke'''''''''''''''''''''''''''..😲

In afternoon

Sb the wha fir bhi khamoshi thi, koi kuch kh hi nhi paa rha tha

Daadi: sb chup kyun hai

Aur sunaiye,

Mahinder, tumhara kaam kaisa chl rha h

Mahinder: rb dim hr h, sb kuch chnga h ji

Daadi: aur jb se hm aaye h, rajinder dekh ahi nhi

Taayji: wo kaam se bahar gye huye h

Kl tk aa jayenge

Daadi; hmmm

In khurana construction

Maan pareshan tha , daadi se baat na hone pr

Maan again call daadi

Finally daadi pick up the call

Maan ko ab jake chn aaya

Maan: daadi,aap kah ho, aap janti ho na, mein kitna pareshan ho jata hu

Daadi: bte , hm bilkul thik h, is wqt hm handa hawali mein h

Maan: daadi maa, pr aap to , apne frnd ke kisi ke relation me shaadi me gyi tha na

Daadi: ha bte, fir socha, jb yha tk aaye h, to sbse milke chle

Maan: daadimaa, apka phone switch off kyun aa rha tha

Daadi: bte uski battery low thi, isliye switch off ho gya hoga

Maan: mein kitna gbra gya tha daadimaa,

Aap janti h na aap mere liye kya mayne rkhti h

Daadi: bte hm bilkul thik h, ab aap phone rkhenge to hm chn se khana bhi kha payenge

Maan: sorry daadimaa

Mujhe pata nhi tha

Daadi: itk ok bte

Ab aap bhi kuch kha lijiye, hme pata h , apne aaj subh se kuch nhi khaya hoga

Hmne shi kha na

Maan: wo daadi

Daadi: kya

Maan: ha daadi, bye daadi maa

Daadi: take care

Maan: hmmm

Maan cut the call

In hoshiyarpur

At dining table

Taayji: kya hua maan putr ko

Daadi: kuch nhi, kl raat se hm usse phone krna bhul gye, isliye pareshan ho gya

Rano: aapse bhut pyaar jo krta h

Daadi: ha wo to h

Mahinder: chachiji: abhi bhi maan bte mein utna hi gussa hai,, jitna phle tha, yha kuch km huya

Daadi: puchiye mt, uska gussa to phle se bhi jyada bd gay h

Pr ab unhe uspe control krna bhi aa gya h

Aur nhi to hm h na

Geet: pr daadi. Aapke aage to wo bhi km pdta h

Daadi: u r right beta

Unke gusse ko shant phle do jane kr skte the, aura b ek

Rano: kaun kaun

Daadi: bachpan mein maan aur geet ki kitni bnti thi,

Wo ek hmari sunte the yha geet ki

Aur ab sirf hamari

Kafi time ho gya h na, unhe aap sbse mile huye

Daarji: ha ye to hai,

Aap baki sb ko bhi sath leke aati

Daadi: phle hmara yha aane ka koi plan nhi tha,

Fir socha itna time ho gya h to aap sb se milte huye chle

Taayji: ye aapne bilkul chnga socha ji

Everyone left the table and goes into her room

In daadi room

Mahinder: chachiji, ab kya kre

Daadi: hme daarji se saaf saaf khan hoga

Jo solachna ne kiya wo geet kbhi nhi krengi

Mante hai, bhaisahab ne uspe viswaas krke usse shr pdne diya,

Jane diya, usse beti nhi, beta ki trh smjha, aur usne ghar ki prampara ke khilaf jake kisi aur se shaadi krli

Ek baar bhi mood ken hi dekha

Ghar walo ka kya haal hoga

Pr ab ye sb soch ker kya fayda

Jb uski khushi ussi mein thi to kya kr skte the

Mahinder fall down on knees

(itne samay se chupaya huya tha pr aab aur na chupa ska)

Mahinder: chachiji, usne shaadi nhi ki

Daadi: phle aap khde huye

Aur rona bnd kriye

Bte to wok ha h

Hme bataiye na

(itne samay ke baad ghar mein is bare mein baat huyi thi)

Mahinder: wo ab nhi rhi'

Daadi: kya

Bhaisahab ko pata h

Mahinder: nhi, ye baat bs mujhe aur veerji ko pta hai

Daadi: aapko kaise pta chla, ye sb

Mahinder: jis ldke se who pyaar krti thi, khud usne hme phone kiya tha

Daadi: ho skta hai , wo jhoot kh rha ho

Mahinder: hm wha gye the, usne khud hi aapni jaan le li

Kash daarji ne usse ek mauka diya hota, kash uske pyaar ko smjha hota,..

Ha chahiji, manta hu usne daarji ke viswaas ko chot puchai thi,

Pr wo daarji ki marji ki khilaf jake usse shaadi nhio kr payi

Manta hu, daarji ne usse beti nhi, beta smjha tha, pr ek mauka to de skte the na

(daarji ye sb sun lete hai)

Daadi: bhaisahab aap

Mahinder turn backward and see'''.

Daarji kuch kh nhi pate

Mahinder: daarji aap baithye,

Daarji, mein aapko btana chahta tha , pr pr kbhi himmat nhi huyi, khne ki,

Daarji please kuch toh khiye na

Daadi: bhaisahab , kuch boliye na

Dekhiye jo ho chukka hai, usse hm ab nhi bdl skte,

Daarji: prjayiji, kya kahu''''''''

Ab to fesla lena hai'''''''.

Precap: daarji ka fesla

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Kaisa ye pyaar hai

Part 10

Daadi: bhaisahab aap

Mahinder turn backward and see'''.

Daarji kuch kh nhi pate

Mahinder: daarji aap baithye,

Daarji, mein aapko btana chahta tha , pr pr kbhi himmat nhi huyi, khne ki,

Daarji please kuch toh khiye na

Daadi: bhaisahab , kuch boliye na

Dekhiye jo ho chukka hai, usse hm ab nhi bdl skte,

Daarji: prjayiji, kya kahu''''''''

Ab to fesla lena hai'''''''.😲

Kyi baar , apno ko kho dene ka darr hme unse door jane nhi deta,

Hm hm unhe hamesha bandan me bande rkhna chahte hai

Ya phir kl ki trh aaj bhi kuch asa na ho jaye

Asa hi darr tha sayad daarji ko , kho dene ka darr

Jo unhe geet ke liye tha,

Khi wo apni beti ki trh apni poti ko na kho de

Pr halat aur uski ichhayon ko uske dil ko smjh kr unhone ek fesla liya

😃

In morning

Taayji: kya baat hai, subh subh daarji ne sbko yha kyun bulaya hai

Brij: maa , mujhe kya pata

Taayji: mujhe kya pata , ye koi jwab huya

Daarji enter in the hall

Daarji: jo puchna hai mujhse pucho

Taayji: ji , mein toh avvyi hi puch rhi thi

Daarji: geet putr mere pass aa, idher aa

Geet come close towards daarji

Daarji: main eek fesla liya hai, geet ko leke, aur mujhe lagta hai,

Aap sb usme mera sath denge

Geet putr tujhe koi atraaz

Geet: nhi daarji, apne koi fasla liya h,

Usme meri balai hi hogi

Daarji: geet aage pdna chahti hai''''''.

Wo bhi''''.delhi jake'''''''''

Usse mujhe atraaz'''''''''..

Atraaz tha'''''.

Ab nhi hai

Geet delhi jake aage pd skti hai

(Geet mummers thanks babaji, aapne meri sunli)

Daarji: ab to khush h na putr

Geet: hmmm

And give side hug to daarji

Thanks daarji

Daarji: ab ja , aur apni packing start krde

Raaji: uski koi jaroort nhi hai, already pack hai sara saman

Daarji: kya?

Geet:nhi , wo to faltu saman daal rhi thi suitcase mein

All persons laugh including geet

Yhi to h na hmari geet

Chotti chotti baateion mein khusiyan dund lene wali

Brij: thanks daarji

Geet chl tyaari krte hai

Raaji: mein bhi aati hu

(Taayji mummers gyi bash pani mein)

Rano: apne kuch kha prjayji

Taayji: nhi, chl kitchen me bhut kaam hai

Daadi: ye apne bilkul shi fesla liya bhaisahab

Daarji: hanji

Prjayji fesla toh lena hi tha

Aur jis feslo mein bacho ki khushi ho, whi sabse shi fasla hota hai , na

Daadi: ha

Acha ab mujhe bhi ijajat dijiye

Daarji: itni jldi

Mahinder: kl hi toh aap aayi thi chachiji

Aur aaj jane ki baat kr rhe ho aap

Daadi: hm Punjab kisi ki shaadi mein aayi the, fir socha aap sb se bi mil ke chle

Ab hamara kaam bhi ho gya hai

Daarji: kya mtlb prjayji

Daadi: kuch nhi

Drasal, ab wo sb yani hmari frnd aur unke pota aur bahu Amritsar jar he hai, toh socha hm bhi sath chlte hai, aur darshan kr aate hai

Fir na kb yha aana hoye

Mahinder: ye bhi hai

Daarji: thik hai, prjayji

Jaisa aapki marzi

Daadi: acha ab hm chlte hai

Daarji: mahinder aapko chod aata hai

Jha aapko jana hai'

Daadi: kya kh rhe hai aap

Driver hai na

Hm chle jayenge

Aur ha jb geet delhi aayer to hme btana mt buliye ga

Rano enter in the hall

Rano: chahiji, , nasta to kr lijiye

Daadi: nhi, abhi hme bilkul bukh nhi hai

Hme ijajt dijiye

Geet come and hug the daadi

Daadi: ab aap se delhi me mulaqat hogi

Geet: hmmm

Hanji daadi

Bye

Daadi: bye beta

Daadi left the place

Precap: maan ka rishta

Pr kis se?

Part 11

Geet come and hug the daadi

Daadi: ab aap se delhi me mulaqat hogi

Geet: hmmm

Hanji daadi

Bye

Daadi: bye beta

Daadi left the place

In khurana mension

Maan room

Daadi calls maan

Daadi: bte, aap kaise hai

Maan: daadi, mein thik hu

Aap kaisi hai

Daadi:hm, bilkul fit n fine

Maan: daadi maa aap wapas kb aa rhi hai

Daadi: bte yhi btane ke liye phine kiya tha

Hme km se km 2 din aur lage ge

Maan: daadi , aap do din ka khke gyi thi, ab already 3 din ho gye

Asa , hoshiyar pur mein kya hai,

2 din jo aur lagage

Daadi:( mumers) jaroor kuch hua hai, tbhi ye itne upset hai

Maan: sorry daadi maa

Kuch khiye na itna time kyun lag rha hai

Daadi: bte aapka rishta pakka krne mein time to lagega na

Ase hi koi bhi ladki psand thode kr lenge

Maan: rishta????????

Aur wo bhi mera

Daadi: ha bte

Maan: daadi, apko pata hai na, mujhe……

Daadi: ha hme pta hai, aap ne already kisi kp psand kr rkha hai, jise aaj tk hmse milaya tk nhi

Maan: daadi maa, is bar pkka mila dunga

Fir daadi maa, ye sb kyat ha

Daadi: bte hm to mjak kr rhe the

Kya bte aap bhi na

Acha suniye hm Amritsar jar he hai, or ha kisi aur cheez ka gussa kisi aur pe niklana bnd kariye

Maan: hmmm, thik h daadi maa

I miss u

Daadi: miss u 2 beta

Tace care

Daadi cut the call

In afternoon

In canteen

Dev (mummers): ye naintara bhi na kitna wait karati hai mujhe

Meera: hmmm, pyaar kiya hai to bhugto

Dev: tumhe kaise pata mein kya soch rha hu

Meera: secret hai, kbhi furst mein btayungi

Meera jane lagti hai

Dev catch the hand and said

Yaar tumhe hr baat kaise pata chl jati hai

meera(dev dil ki baatein pta chl hi jati hai, kash tum bhi smjh pate)

meera: khan a, baad mein btayungi, mujhe class mein jana hai, lecture start hone wala hai

meera wha se chli jati hai

dev: ab mujhe akele wait krna padega

oh god

ye naintara bhi na

in evening

in hoshiyarpur

In room

rano(mahinder se): akele kudi wha kaise rhengi

hey babaji mere putr ka khyal rkhna

mahinder: akeli kaha hogi, chachiji bhi to hogi na

rano: toh kya hmari kudi unke sath rhengi

mahinder: chachiji ne kha to tha

rano: nhi

mahinder: pr kyun?????

Rano: aap smjhne ki koshish kijiye, man wo apne hi hai, pr ladki ka sawal hai

Aur aap hai ki…………..

Kuch smjhte nhi………

Aap smjh rhe h na, mein kya khan cha rhi hu

Mahinder: thik h

Mein daarji se baat krta hu

Mahinder left the room

In daarji room

Mahinder: daarji, wo mujhe aapse kuch baat krni hai

Daarji: kho na putr

Kya baat hai

Mahinder: ji wo, geet delhi jake kha rhengi

Daarji: kha rhengi mtlb

Mahinder: daarji,

Mahider tell the whole talk between his or his wife

wo rano ki gal sunke manu bhi yhi lgta hai, geet ko chachiji ke ghar mein nhi rhna chaiye

bachpan ki baat aur thi, abn bache bde ho gyer hai

daarji: hmmm

fir geet

(brij ye sb sun leta hai)

Brij enter in the hall

Brij: sorry daarji, maine aap dono ki baatein sunli

Mahinder: koi na putr

Brij: ek idea hai mere pass

Daarji: fir intzaar kiska hai, bol

Brij: ji wo, geet ki bachpan ki dost pinki'

Wo bhi toh wha rhti hai, ,kyun na hm unse baat karein

Geet ko company bhi mil jayengi, aur wow ha aaram se rh bhi skti hai

Kya hua

Idea psand nhi aaya

Daarji: ye thik rhenga

Mahider:toh, mein aaj hi unse baat krta hu

Pr daarji chachiji ko kya khenge

Daarji: uska bhi sochte hai

Pr phle ye kaam kr lete hai

Mahinder : hmmm

Mahinder and brij left the place

Precap: first meeting

Aur kiski

Hmare maaneet ki

Part 12

Brij: ji wo, geet ki bachpan ki dost pinki'

Wo bhi toh wha rhti hai, ,kyun na hm unse baat karein

Geet ko company bhi mil jayengi, aur wow ha aaram se rh bhi skti hai

Kya hua

Idea psand nhi aaya

Daarji: ye thik rhenga

Mahider:toh, mein aaj hi unse baat krta hu

Pr daarji chachiji ko kya khenge

Daarji: uska bhi sochte hai

Pr phle ye kaam kr lete hai

Mahinder : hmmm

Mahinder and brij left the place

In morning

In hoshiyrpur

Geet room

Rano darwaze pe hi khdi thi , dekh rhi thi, aapni beti ko, geet ko

Rano enter in the room

Rano uske baalon ko shlete huye khti hai

Kl mujhse door chli jayengi

Mahinder enter

Kitni pyaari lg rhi hai hmari gudiya

Sote huye toh aur bhi pyaari lagti hai

Mahinder'; usse sone de, fir bta nhi, kitne dino ke baad milna huye

Rano: asa kyun kh rhe hai, hm apni beti se milne wha jayenge

Mahinder: ha, tu emotional na ho, jayenge

Pr daily to ja nhi skte na

Mahine me ek aad baar hi jana hoga na

Rano: ha , wo to hai ji

Mahinder: iski packing ek baar check kr liyo

Khi kuch bhul na jaye

Rano: hmm

In afternoon

At bus stand

Geet ko chodne puri family aayi

Taayji: apna dhyan rkhiyo kudi, wha rano nhi hogi

Tujhe chooti chooti baatein yaad dilane ke liye

Rano: putrji, daily phone kriyo

Geet: ha maa, aap sb tension na lo

Aapki geet ko apna dhyan rkhna aata hai

Raaji: wo hme pata hai

Geet: dekha , abhi bhi mujhse ld rhi hai, ye nhi ki

Raaji hug the geet

Raaji: di I miss u

Geet: I miss u 2

My chipkali

Raaji: diii

Geet: chlo, ab rona bnd karo

Mein koi hamesha ke liye thode ja rhi ho

Taayji: khbrdar asa dobara socha bhi

Geet hug the taayji then rano

Mahinder: putrji apna dhyan rkhna , koi bhi jaroort ho turant phone krna

Geet: hanji

Brij: aap sb tension na lo, mujhe bhi to almost delhi tk jana hai

Daarji: chlo ab jayo bhi

Aur apna khyal rkhna

Geet sbko hug krke bus mein chd jati hai

Geet: byee

(And bye hoshiyarpur)

In khurana construction

(Maan as usually kya kr rha hoga

Work ya kisi ko'''''''..)

Maan: adi tumne khud check kyun nhi kiya

Adi: sirrr, wo mujhe laga unhone sb

Maan: kisi aur ke baroshe chodne wale mujhe bilkul psand nhi hai

Adi: sorry sir , nxt time asa nhi hoga

Maan: hmmm

Daadi calls maan

Maan: hanji daadimaa

Daadi: bte , aap ek kaam kriye hamara

Maan: khiye na daadimaa

Daadi: aap kl subh 9 to 9:30 tk bus stand puch jana

Maan: kyun daadimaa

Daadi: hme lene nhi ayenge kya

Maan: acha

Kya ? daadimaa

Pr bus stand kyun

Daadi: bte wo hamari car khrab ho gyi thi

Aur bte baki ke sb bus se aa rhe the, isliye hamne socha hm bhi bus se aa jate hai

Maan: daadimaa, , bus mein aane ki kya jaroort thi

Car thodi der mein thik ho jati na

Daadi: toh aap chahte the hm wha akele wait khade hoke wait kare

Pta nhi kitna time lagta

Maan: nhi daadimaa, pr wo

Daadi: toh aap aa rhe hai na

Maan: ha daadi maa, mein thik time pe puch jayunga'

In morning

At bus stand

Time 9:00 o'clock

Maan as usual bilkul time pe puch jata hai

And what a coincidence

Both bus'Amritsar to delhi, hosiyarpur to delhi

Also reach at the same time

Geet: finally geet tu delhi puch hi gyi

Passenger: bhnji, ab neeche bi uter jiaye, auro ki bhi utarna hai

Geet: utr rhi hu, wait karo

Ye pinki kha rh gyi babaji

At another side

At ticket counter

Tc: aap ko kaha ki ticket du'

Maan: mujhe khi ki ticket nhi chahiye

Tc: fir yha kyun khde ho,

Bina baat ki beed laga rkhi hai

Maan: mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai

Tc: jldi puchiyo, aur log bhi wait kr rhe hai

Maan: ye Amritsar se delhi aane wali bus kb ayengi

Tc: wo toh aa chuki hai, jake check kriye whi khdi hai

Maan: thanks

Bhaisahab , ye Amritsar se jo bus aayi hai, wok ha kis side khdi hai

Person: wo do bus chodke jo bus hai, wo abhi Amritsar se aayi hai

Maan: thanks

Geet : he babaji , ye pinki khi dikh kyun nhi rhi hai,

Mein usse itni beed mein kha dundu

Maan came at one side and geet to opposite side

Dono hi pareshan the, ek dusre ko notice nhi krte aur aapas mein takra jate hain, aur geet ke hath se bag maan ke foot pe gir jata hai

Precap: 1^st fighting

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