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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Part 13

Geet: he babaji, yha ke log kya andhe hai, dikhayi nhi deta kya

Tumhe samne se ladki aa rhi hai

Maan: phle apna bag uthaiye

Ek to aapka dhyan khi aur tha, aur ulta aap mujhe suna rhi hai

Geet: ye lo, khud ki galti hai, aur mujhe kh rhe hai

Maan: meri galati hai

Geet: ha

Nhi toh meri galati hai

Maan: aur kya , ek toh apne apna bag mere par peg her diya

Sorry khne ke bjaye

Geet: sorry aur tumhe

My foot

Maan: just shutup

Geet: tumne mujhe shutup kha

Maan: ha

Tbhi maan ka phone bjne lagta hai

Maan: ha daadimaa

Daadi: bte aap kaha hai

Hm kbse aapka intzaar kr rhe hai

Maan: daadimaa, mein abhia aaya

Maan left the place

Geet: oh hello, puri baat to sunte huye ja

Dr gya sayad mujhse

Ye pinki kha rh gyi

Pinki: ye geet bi na klha rh gyi

Geet: oh hello

Hey pinki

Pinki: geet

Oye geet tu idher hai, mein tujhe wha dund rhi thi

Pink and geet hug each other

Geet: pinki, tu to waise ki waise hai

Pinki: pata hai

Oye ab chl, papa tera intzaar kr rhe hai

Geet : chl

At other side

Daadi: bte , aap kaha rh gye the

Maan: wo daadi,

Mujhe bus nhi mili thi

Daadi: bte kya hua

Maan: kuch nhi daadimaa

Daadi; bte, aap batana nhi chahte to

Thik hai

Maan: nhi daadimaa, asa nhi hai

Wo ek pagal ladki se tkra gya tha

Daadi: pagal ladki

Maan: khudki galati hai, sorry khne ki bjaye mujhe sunayi jar hi hai

Daadi: bte aur aapne sun liya

Daadi mummers ye to kisi chamatkar se kam nhi hai

Maan: daadimaa, kya hua

Daadi: kuch nhi

Maan: chle ab

Daadi: ha

In pinki house

Pinki's dad: geet putr tu aa gyi

Kaisi hai

Geet: uncle, aapke samne hu

Bilkul fit and fine

Uncle: jake thodi der aaram krlo

Thk gyi hogi

Pinki: hmmm

Uncle: maine geet ko kaha hai

Tujhe office nhi jana

Geet: office

Oye pink tune bataya nhi tune kaam krna start kr diya hai

Pinki: ha, wo na, socha kuch kaam sham hi kr lu

Papa wo maine adi sir se puch ke aaj ke liye leave lio hai

Uncle : thik hai

In pinki room

Pinki: oye geet aaj se ye hm dono ka room

Thik hai

Geet: ha

Pinki: tu chahe to guest room mein bhi rh skti hai

Pr wo mein clean krna bhul gyi

Mein kl kra dungi

To aaj ke liye mere sath hi kaamchlana padega

Geet: oye thik h na, hm bhut saari baatein karenge

Pinki: chl tu abh fresh hole

Mein tere liye khane ko kuch lati hu

Fir evening mein bahar chalenge

Geet: evening mein kyun

Abhi chlte hai na

Waise bhi kl mujhe college jana hai

Pink: pr tu thk gyi hogi

Geet: nhi

Pinki: ok, as u wish

In khurana mension

Daadi: bte ab aap kaha jar he hai

Maan: office daadimaa

Daadi: abhi to aaye hai

Thodi der aaram kr lijiye

Maan: daadimaa mein bilkul thi hu

Nakul

Nakul: ji sir

Maan: daadimaa ka khyal rakhna

Nakul: hmmm

Yes sir

Khurana construction

Maan enter in company

Maan: adi,come to mya cabin

Adi: yes sir

In maan 's cabin

Adi: may I coming sir

Maan: hmmm

Adi wo noida wali project ki file kaha hai

Adi: sir wo to pinki ke pass hai'

Maan: to jao usse leke aayo

Adi: sirrr, wo pinki aaj leave pe hai

Maan: abhi call karo, aur usse office bulayo

Urgently

Adi: yes sir

Precap: guess it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
nice part plz update soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
awesome ... superb ...

loved d parts 8 , 9 , 10 , 11 , 12 , n 13 ...

thnx 4 d updates ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
hey why no update today😭 plz update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
kya karu tum sb comment nhi karte
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

kya karu tum sb comment nhi karte


hum to pad te comment karte hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Part 14

Khurana construction

Maan enter in company

Maan: adi,come to mya cabin

Adi: yes sir

In maan 's cabin

Adi: may I coming sir

Maan: hmmm

Adi wo noida wali project ki file kaha hai

Adi: sir wo to pinki ke pass hai'

Maan: to jao usse leke aayo

Adi: sirrr, wo pinki aaj leave pe hai

Maan: abhi call karo, aur usse office bulayo

Urgently

Adi: yes sir

Pinki: geet jldi kr

Pinki phone ringing

Geet: chle ab

Pinki: adi sir ka phone

Ab wo mujhe kyun phone kr rhe hai

Geet: tu uthayengio nhi to pata kaise chlega

Pinki: hello sir

Adi: jldi se office aayo

Pinki : pr kyun

Adi: tumhare pass jo noida project ki file hai, wo abhi maan sir ko chahiye

Pinki: hey rabba, ab mein kya karu

Adi:hehehe, office aayo, right now

Pinki: sir, mein abhi aati hu

Geet: kya hua

Pinki: oye geet abhi hme office jana padega

Geet: pr kyun

Pinki: oye file deni hai

Time pen hi puche to dd ka gussa

Usse to rb hi bachaye

Geet: dd, ab ye kya hai

Pinki: tu chl ab

In khurana constructions

Maan cabin

Maan: adi ab tk file kyun nhi aayi hai

Adi: sir, maine phone kr diya hai, bs wo aati hi hogi

Sasha enter in the cabin

Sasha: MK, ye gurgaon wali prject ki file tyaar hai

Maan: hmmm

Sasha: MK, jo meeting phle yha hone wali thi ab wo bahar

Maan: sasha, saaf saaf kaho

Kya khan chahti ho

Sasha: MK, wo client ka call aaya tha, wo chahte hai, meeting khi bahar ho

Maine unse kaha end time pe kaise kh skte hai

Wo request kr rhe the

Unhe meeting ke trunt baad flight leni hai

Isliye

Maan: ok, koi baat nhi

Meeting kitni der mein hai

Sasha: after one an hour

Maan: hmmm

Sasha leaves

Maan : adi, jb tk mein wapas aayu mujhe file apni table pe chahiye

adi: yes sir

maan also leave the cabin

adi: thank god bach gye, ye pinki kha rh gyi

PARKING AREA

Pinki: geet tu yhi wait kr, bs mein aati hu

Geet: mein bhi chlti hu na

Pinki: tu ruk, mein bs jldi se ye file deke aayi

Geet: hmmm

Maan enter in parking area

geet(self talk): he babaji, ye kha rh gyi

geet tu bhi na, abhi to gyi hai, thoda to time lagta hai

Geet apni hi khyalo mein khoyi hu khudse baat krte huye, ulti chle jar hi thi means backward direction

at other side

Maan also come forward, he did not notice the someone walk backward

Oops firse takkar

Geet will fall and maan held the geet from waist

Dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho jate hai

Kuchj pal ke liye

Asa lagta hai, bs isi pal ka intzaar tha

Sayad inhi aankhon me doobne ka intzaar tha

Mahi mein mahi mahi ve………………………………………………….

……………………………………………

Note: small update ke liye sorry

Phle de hi nhi rhi thi

Fir bad mein laga small hi shi pr de duti hu

I hope u enjoy it

Do comments

Aur rha precap

Wo aap pe chodti hu

1. Maan kaha hai ye janana hai ya nhi

2. Nhi to ase hi aage story chlti rhengi

3. Ya meri marzi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#49

Part 15

PARKING AREA


Pinki: geet tu yhi wait kr, bs mein aati hu

Geet: mein bhi chlti hu na

Pinki: tu ruk, mein bs jldi se ye file deke aayi

Geet: hmmm

Maan enter in parking area

geet(self talk): he babaji, ye kha rh gyi

geet tu bhi na, abhi to gyi hai, thoda to time lagta hai

Geet apni hi khyalo mein khoyi hu khudse baat krte huye,

ulti

chle jar hi thi means backward direction

at other side

Maan also come forward, he did not notice the someone

walk backward

Oops firse takkar

Geet will fall and maan held the geet from waist

Dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho jate hai

Kuchj pal ke liye

Asa lagta hai, bs isi pal ka intzaar tha

Sayad inhi aankhon me doobne ka intzaar tha

Mahi mein mahi mahi ve'''''''''''''''''''.

'''''''''''''''''

Dono ko ehsaas huye and they come back again in present

Geet: dekhke nhi chl skte, jb dekho takrate rhte ho

Maan: tum ulti chl rhi thi.

People sedhe chlte hai naki ulte

Geet: oh ho

To tumne mujhe dekha, iska mtlb janbuzkar takraye

Hey babaji, yha ke ladke kitne bakar hai, jha ldki dekhi nhi

chedna suru

Maan: mein tumhe ched rha hu

Maan come step forward

Geet take steps backward

Geet: ha, aur nhi to kya, bus stand se mera picha kr rhe ho

Aur ab yha tk puch gye

Maan: bs, bhut ho gya , tum yha khde hoke, mujh pe hi chila

rhi ho

Geet: to tumhari jagah hai

Maan isse phle kuch khta, uska phone phirse''.😉

Sasha: mk, wo meeting 15 mins late ho gy hai

Maan: hmmm

Mujhe abhi time lagega

Maan left the place and reach to the car

In car

Maan mummers acha hua meeting 15 minutes late ho gyi , nhi toh is ladki ki wajah se maan singh khurana phli baar kisi meetin me late puchta

Geet still standing in parking area and wait 4 pinki

Hey babaji, ye sb kya hai, mein jha jati hu ye mujhe kyun mil jata hai

Pinki: chle geet, sorry yaar

Wo kaam aa gya tha

Geet: itk ok, pinki

Toh hm kha jar he hai

Pinki: hmmm

Geet: bol na

Pinki: geet ,chl tujhe sbse phle golgappe khilati hu'

Geet : golgappe, wow

Abhi se pani aa gya mooh me

Jldi chl na'

At night

9:00 p.m

Uncle: ye koi time hai, ghar aane ka

Pinki: papa wo mein geet ko

Uncle: geet aaj hi yha aayi hai, aur tu uspe

Geet: uncle wo saari meri hi galati hai, maine socha jitni jyada jgh mein jaan sku utna hi acha hoga mere liye

Isliye maine hi jidd ki thodi der aur gumte hai

Sorry uncle

Promise next time asa nhi hoga

Uncle: pr next time asa nhi hona chahiye

Tum abhi abhi aayi ho

Sb kuch jaan jayongi

Chlo tum dono dinner kr lo

In present

Ye sb pal yaad karke geet khilkhilake hs pdti hai

Uski hassi us waqt ghqr mein gunj rhi thi, itne dino ke baad geet dilse hassi thi

Asa laga ptzad ke baad savan aa gya ho

Daadi aur meera apne room se bahar aa jate hai

Daadi: meera , geet kitni pyaari lg rhi h na

Itne dino ke baad inhe muskrate huye dekha hai

Meera: ha daadimaa

Bs baghwan inki muskurahat yuhi bnake rkhe

Daadi: abhi tk aap dono yhi baithe hai

Geet: wo daadimaa

Mein aur veerji purani baatein krne lage to waqt ka pata hi nhi chla

Daadi: wo to hm, apke chehre ki hassi dekhke hio smjh gye

the bte

Chlo koi baat nhi, brij bte jake fresh ho jaiye

Bs dinner tyaar hai

Meera: geet tbtk tum bhi rest krlo

Abhi dinner lgvati hu

Geet: hmmm

Precap: maan kha hai, iska jwab nxt mein mil jayega

And khti mitthi nok zhok between maaneet

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
Woww.. just luved it..
waiting for next part..
Mujhe jana hai maan hai kahan..
Plz jaldi update karo naa..
n thanks for PM..😊

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