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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part-6

Geet : maa, mein pass ho gyi

Aur mujhe 50% scholarship bhi mili h

Aur delhi ke best COLLEGE mein aage pdne ka mauka

(Darji whi se jaare he hote h, aur geet ki baat sunke ruk jate h)

Darji; bs jitna pd liya utna thik h, ab ghar ke kaam kaaj sikho, aage jake whi kaam aayenge,

Itna pda diya whi bhut h, aur iske jldi se hath pile karo,

Geet: daarji,

Rano geet ke shoulder pe hath rkhke , usse chup rhne ke liye khti h

Geet ruth ke aapne room mein chli jati h, aur room lock kr leti h,

Darji also left the place

In evening

Dophar se sham ho gyi geet abhi tk room se bahar nhi aayi

Rano: geet beta bahar to aa

Taayji: tu fikr na kr brij ko aane de wohi isse smjayenga



Brij and mahinder enter in handa hawali


Mahinder( geet dad): kya hua sb itna pareshan kyun h

Brij: kya hua geet ka result kaisa aaya

Taayji: whi to pareshani h

Mahinder: kya mtlb baabiji

Rano: geet ne khud ko room me bnd kr liya h

Brij: pr kyun

Rano: wo aage pdne ke liye delhi jana chahti h, aur darji ne kaha h, koi ldka dundo aur hath pile karo kudi ke

Brij: mein baat krta hu gudiya se

Geet room

(Ke bahar)


Brij: gudiya darwaza khol

Geet: mujhe kisi se baat nhi karni, veerji

Brij: apne veerji se bhi nhi

(Geet give no reply)

Brij: acha apne veerji ko result to bta kaisa aaya

Gudiya ab veerji tujhse naraz ho jayenge

After few minutes geet open the door, brij enter in geet room

Brij (in angry voice)😡: gudiya ye sb kya lga rkha h,

Geet: wo veerji (tears fall down)

Brij: gudiya sorry, apne veerji ko maaf krde,

(Brij hug the geet)

Tujhe pta h na mein teri aankhon mein aansoo nhi dekh skta

Acha ab bta kya hua h,

Gudiya ab chup bi kr

Maine sorry kha na

Geet: sorry veerji

Glti meri h

Brij : ye sb chod aur bta kya hua h , meri gudiya ko

Geet tell the whole incidence in front of veerji

Geet: veerji,ab aap hi bataiye, mein abhi aage pdna chahti hu, shaadi nhi krni mujhe

Brij: gudiya daarji abki baar nhi maanege

Geet: veerji, aap mnayenge to maan jayenge, plz veerji

Aap apni gudiya ke liye itna bhi nhi kr skte

Brij: gudiya , tu smjhne ki koshish kr

Geet: veerji, aap bhi smjhiye na

Brij: gudiya wo to tujhe college bi bejna nhi chahte the

Aur ab delhi, bilkul nhi

Geet: veerji mere liye

In hall

Rano: kya hua brij ne abhi tk geet se baat to kr li hogi na

Taayji: ha , kr li hogi, tu fikr na kr

Mujhe to chinta ab is baat se h , brij geet se baat kr rha hoga ya geet usse,

Rano: kya mtlb

Taayji: kuch nhi

Tu fikr na kr

Rano(mahinder se): aap jake baat kriye na, geet se

Mahinder: hmmm

Geet room

Mahinder enter in the room😉

Geet : veerji please

Mahinder, : geet beta, abki baar daarji nhi manege

Tu smjhne ki koshish kr

Geet: veerji

Brij: gudiya , chotte papa bilkul shi kh rhe h

Geet: kisi ko meri fikr nhi h,

And turn the face

(Naughty andaaz mein khti h😉 geet ho bilkul pyaar nhi krte

Aap meri itni se baat nhi maan skte

Hey babaji, mein chahti thi, meri shaadi hone se phle mein apni saari khwaishe puri kr lo, fir toh meri kl shaadi ho jayengi, wham era pati meri baat sunega bi yha nhi, ab mein kya kru baabaji, aap hi kuch kriye

(Aur zhoot mooth ka rona shuru)

Mahinder (geet ki shoulder pe hath rkhke turn krta h)( geet make sad baby face) : beta a bro mt

Brij: ha gudiya, hm dono baat krenge, kyun choote papaji

Mahinder: ha hm bilkul baat krenge

Don't cry please😭

Geet : hmmm

Both left the room

Geet mummers😊: ab to tu apni packing start krde geet, smjh kaam ho gya, thanku babaji, please papaji aur veerji ki mdad krna

Mahinder aur brij yhi soch rhe the geet se kh to diya pr daarji se kaun khenga

😕

Precap: kya daarji maanage

Aur maaneet ki first meeting

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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loved it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks all of you

nxt update abhi chahiye ya nhi

plz do comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
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def i want an update now dear😛
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Part 7


In hall

(mahinder and brij pareshan hai, daarji ufff)

Brij : hmne kh to diya , geet s, pr darji se kaise khenge

Mahinder: pta nhi, pr geet ki icha h to

Taayji: ab kaunsi icha jag gyi tumhari ladli ki

Mahindr: wo babiji, wo

Rano: khiuye na, kya ka h geet ne

Brij: wo aage pdne ke liye delhi jan chahti h



( darji enter In the hall)



Daarji: kaun delhi jana chahta h

No answer…………………………

Mein tum sb se kuch puch rha hu

Kaun delhi jan chahta h

Tayji: wo darji…….. geet

Darji: kyun

Brij: wo daarji , geet aage pdna chahti h , delhi jana chahti h

Mahinder: plz daarji, wo aage pdna chahti h

Taayji: tum sb ne kudi ko bigad diya h

Brij: plz maa

Daarji please

Darji turn and give stern look

Daarji: bs bhut ho gya , geetv age nbhi padege



( geet itni tezawaaz sunke bahar aa jati h, aur daarji ko sbpe gussa hote huye dekhti h)


Mahinder : geet ki shaadi se phle ye aakhri khwaish h

Hm uske liye itna to kr skte h na

😡

Daarji: bhut puri kr di uski khwaishe





😭

(Geet ki aankhon se aansu bhne lgte h)


Geet come front to daarji

Geet: darji , ydi aap nhi chahtre to thik h , mein khi na jayungi, pr meri wjh se aap bakiyo pe gussa mt kriye

Daarji please , mere liye aapki khushi se bdkr khuch nhi h


Brij: gudiya

Geet : ha veerji, ab aap sb jaisa chahenge , waise hoga

Mein shadi ke liye tyaar hu

( geet left the place and go into her room)

Daarji: iski shadi ke liya munda dundo

Brij: (kuch khan chahta tha , pr mahinder rok deta h)

Chote papaji, apne mujhe khne kyun nhi diya

Mahinder: daarji is waqt kisike nhi sunege

Rano: to fir hm kya geet ki shaadi

Mahinder: nhi, geet pdna chahti h na., to wo jaroor padegi

Brij: pr kaise

Mahinder: daarji, ko ab bs ek insaan smjh skta h

Taayji: kaun?????????????????????????????????

Delhi

Khurana mension

In kitchen

Nakul: ye sb kya kr rhe ho, jldi jldi hath chlao, ydi chotte sahib aa gye office se, aur unka diner ready nhi mila time pe, to hm sb ki khr nhi

Ab to hme bachane ke liye yha daadima bhi nhi h


Sahdev bhagte bhagte kitchen me aata h


Nakul: kya hua

Sahdev : wo , wo

Nakul: kya hua

Kuch bol

Sahdev: chotte sahib ki car a gyi h

Nakul: aaj to mein gya , aaj to mujhe bachane ke liye koi nhi h

Maan enter in khurana mension

Maan: nakul

Nakulll

Nakul : ji sahab

Maan ( angry voice): itna time lgta h aane mein, kha the tum

Nakul: sahib wo mein

Maan: ye sb chodo, daadi ka phone aaya kya

Koi msg fir

Nakul, sir wo

Maan: kuch bolege bi ya nhi, mein wo mein wok rte rhenge

Nakul ( mummers)

(kuch khne kha dete h, kisi aur ka gusas mujh pe nikal rhe h)

Maan: nakul, tumne abhi kuch kha

Nakul: nhi sir,


😆

Maine to kuch nhi kha

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part..nw who will get geet permision to go to delhi..waiting 4 the meeting of maaneet..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

Part 8

Maan: hmmm, dinner lagao , mein abhi aata hu

Nakul: aaj to gye

Maan: kya

Nakul: mein khana lgata hu,

Both left the place

IN MAAN ROOM

Daadi ka phone kyun nhi lg rha h ,daadi to Punjab jake sb kuch bhul hi jate h

In HOSHIYARPUR


MAHINDER ( rano se): tum fikr mt karo kl tk sb thik ho jayenga

Rano: hmmm

In morning

Daarji: aaj kya koi aane wala hai

Taayji: ha daarji , wo delhi se

Someone enter in handa hawali

Daadimaa: namestay bhaisahab

Daarji: aap yha,

Aayee na prjayiji

Aap phle hi bta dete to brij aapko lene aa jata

Daadimaa: hmne btaya tha , aur hme brij bte hi leke aaye h

Kyun mahinder

Mahinder: haanji

Daarji: tum sb ne mujhe kyun nhi bataya'

Daadi: hmne hi mna kiya tha'

Daarji: pr kyun , mujhe pta hota toh

Daadi; aap yuhi chinta kr rhe h,

Ab aap sb hme yuhi khda rkhenge, ya baithne ko bhi khenge

Rano: aaye na

All people enter in hall

Daadi: baaki ke sb kaise h, raaji aur geet kha h

Rano: chachiji, pani

Daadi: hmmm

Rano: raaji to school gyi h, aur geet apne room mein h, bulake lati hu

Taayji: mein bhi aati hu

Daadimaa: bhaisahab ye sb kya h,

Daarji: kya prjayiji

Daadi: aap geet ko delhi kyun nhi aane de rhe h, wo aage pdna chahti h, toh kya galat h

Daarji: mahinderrr

Daadi: uske taraf kya dekh rhe h

Daarji: aap to sb janti h na

Tbhi daarji brij ko wha se jane ke liye khte h

Brij jake dekho , geet kha rh gyi

Brij: hmmm

Brij left the palace

Daadi: jo kuch hua, usme kisi ki galati nhi thi, aur na hi sulochana ki, hmi hi smjh nhi paaye uske mann ki halat ko

Mahinder: daarji, mein janta hu, aapko yhi drrr h na , khi geet seher jake galat sanget mein na pd jaye, wo apni zindagi khrab na krle

Daarji, wo sb smjhti h, wo asa kuch nhi kregi, jo is ghar ki prampara ke khilaf ho, aur wha chachiji bhi to hogi na

Daadi: aur kya mein bhi to hogi na

Aap chahe to wo hmare sath rh skti h,

Mere liye jaise maan , waise hi geet

Geet enter in the hall

Rano: geet dekho tumse milne kaun aaya h

Daadi turn back

Geet: daadimaa aap,

Geet hug the daadi

Daadi: ye kya haal bna rkha h, beta,

Hmara phool itna murjhaya hua kyun h

Hmmm, hm smjh gye

Chliye jldi se apni packing start kr dijiye, aap hmare sath delhi jar hi h,

Brij: shi me daadi maa

Daadi: aur kya hm jhoot khenge

Aap bilkul fikr mt kriye wha ki saari formality maan pura kr denga

(Geet look daarji)

: geet bte aap fikr mt kriye, aapke daarji maan gye h

Geet: nhi daadi , mera ab khi jane ka mann nhi h, mein yhi rhna chahti hu, apno ke sath

(geet daarji ki ankhi baat smjh gyi thi, ki won hi chahte ki wo jaye,)

Geet left the place and go to her room

In khurana mension

Maan: nakul

Nakul: ji sir

Maan: dev kha h

Nakul: sir, wo to kl raat se ghar hi nhi aaye h

Maan: aur tum mujhe ab bta rhe ho

Nakul: sir, aapne pucha hi ab h

Maan: nakulll

Nakul: sorry sir

Maan: jayooo

Nakul left the place

And mummers phle to khud hi khte no disturb, aur fir khte h, btaya kyun nhi, he bhagwan inka kya hoga

Maan: tum yha khde hoke kisse baat kr rhe ho

Nakul: kisi se nhi

And go to kitchen

In college

Dev: hey naintara, tum itni jldi aa gyi aaj

Naintara: mein jldi nhi aayi, tum late ho

Dev: oh ho

Naintara: hme tumhari trh hr kaam late krne ki aadat nhi h

Dev phone ringing

Dev: oh no bro, khi unhe pta to nhi chla

Unhe pta chla to meri khr nhi

Naintara: phone to uthayo

Dev: hmmm

Hey bro, itni subh, hme yaad kaise kiya

Maan: kl raat ko tum kha the dev

Dev: aur bro kha hoga, ghar pet ha , apne room me

Maan: reallyyy

Dev: ofcourse bro, aap bi na

Maan: iska mtlb nakul jhoot bol rha h

Dev mummers ye nakul bhi na

Maan: dev sch sch batao , kl raat tum kha the

Dev: wo bro, kl rtaat ko mere frnd ke ghar party thi, raat kafi ho gyi thi isliye whi ruk gya

Maan: to phle jhoot bolne ki kya jaroort thi,

Dev : wo bro, mujhe laga aap gussa kronge

Maan: aura b kya lgta h , ab nhi krunga

Dev: sorry bro

Maan: aur is wqt kha ho

Dev: college mein bro, aapne time nhi dekha kya bro

Maan: dev

Dev: sorry bro, really mein mein college mein hu, yakin nhi to mein aapki baat krayu

(naintara ishare se usse baat krane ko mna kr deti h)

Meera se

Maan: koi jaroort nhi h

Dev: bye bro, have a gud day

Maan cut the call and go

(kha jayenga bhi, as usual)

Khurana constructions

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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