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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
bs itne se comment not fair
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#52


Part 16


At dinning table



Daadi: dev bte itne late , chliye dinner kr lijiye

Dev: bs abhi aaya daadimaa

Brij: hey dev

Dev: hey, sorry wo maine note nhi kiya

Brij: its ok

Dev: bs mein abhi aata hu

After dinner sb aapne room me chle jate hai

In daadi room

Meera: daadimaa hm brij veerji ko to sch bta skte hai na

Daadi: nhi, aap to janti hai na meera , ydi brij ko pta chelega

to geet ke mayke me sbko pta chl jayega, aur sb geet se

milne aayenge, ydi s baa gye khe geet ko shk na ho jaye

kuch gdbd hai


Aur meera kya peta wo geet kea age jhoot kh bhi payenge

ya

nhi

Dev: meera daadimaa bilkul shi kh rhi hai

Jb geet bro ke accident ki baat brdast nhi kr payi

To wo ye kaise sun payengi bro is missing

Kisiko nhi pata wo kaha hai

Meera: dev , tum kuch krte kyun nhi

Kbhi na kbhi geet ko btana padega

Tb hum usse kya jwab denge


Daadi: hume to kuch smjh nhi aa rha hai

Hr subh geet isi aas se uthti hai aaj maan wapas aa jyenge

Pr kb tk jhoot khenge hm unse

Dev: daadimaa police koshish kr rhi hai na

Don't worry bro jldi aa jayenge aur hume geet ko kuch btana

bhi nhi padega



In maaneet room



Geet kisi ka number baar baar try kr rhi thi, pr no. nhi milta

hai

Who phone dairy dundne ke liye drawer check krti hai, tbhi

usse wha pen milta hai

Flashback

Pinki house

At morning

In pinki room


Pinki: oye geet, itni jldbazi kyun mcha rhi hai


Geet: tune time nhi dekha kya mujhe college jane mein late

ho rha hai

Jake form submit krana hai

Principal se baat krnhi hai

Tb jakes hi mayne mein mera admission hoga

Pinki: oye tujhe ye sb phle krna chahiye tha


Geet: phle kb krti , abhi aayi hu na

To abhi krungi

Tu chinta na kr, phone pe baat kit hi veerji ne

Aur mere wha ke principal ne bhi saari baat kit hi

Unhone mujhe form aur marksheet submit krane ko kha hai

Acha ab mein chlti hu

Pinki: best of luck

Geet thanks yaar


Geet( self talk): hey babaji, aaj mera college ka phla din

haisb kuch acha jaye

Geet left the place

At the road

Geet: taxiii

Taxi were not stop

Geet : lgta hai tujhe aaj taxi bhi nhi milinge

Lift hi leni padegi

Oh geet tujhe koi lift bhi nhi de rha hai

Apne hoshiyarpur mein to koi bhi lift dene ko tyaar ho jata

tha

Aur yha sb hi khadus hai

Hey babaji kuch karo


At other side

Maan (to driver): south x chalo

Driver': ji sir


After this maan opened his laptop checked his mail and took

the file from other side and checks it


Suddenly his car stops with a jerk and one girl come front in

to the car

Maan: what happened?

Driver: sir ek ladki car ke samne aake khdi ho gyi hai

Maan: what?

Usse phle maan kuch kh pata ,

She ran and open the side door of the car and sit in the car.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Loved ur FF... Pls add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Its really nice.. 👏
do continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
awesome ... superb ...

loved d parts 15 n 16 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
wow..amazing ,
so maan is missing n nobody knows where he is??
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
heyyy
i jus started reading ur ff
its awesomee
aww feel sad for geet
& i hav sent u buddy request
will u accept it & alwayz pm me da next part plz :)
continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Part 17

At the road

Geet: taxiii

Taxi were not stop

Geet : lgta hai tujhe aaj taxi bhi nahi milinge

Lift hi leni padegi

Oh geet tujhe koi lift bhi nhi de rha hai

Apne hoshiyarpur mein to koi bhi lift dene ko tyaar ho jata

tha

Aur yha sb hi khadus hai

Hey babaji kuch karo

At other side

Maan (to driver): south x chalo

Driver': ji sir

After this maan opened his laptop checked his mail and took

the file from other side and checks it

Suddenly his car stops with a jerk and one girl come front in

to the car

Maan: what happened?

Driver: sir ek ladki car ke samne aake khdi ho gyi hai

Maan: what?

Usse phle maan kuch kh pata ,

She ran and open the side door of the car and sit in the car.

Lady: driver jldi north campus chalo

(Ye nhi janana wo ladki kaun hai )

Hey babaji mein bs time pe puch jau

Maan turned left

Aap hai kaun

His eyes meet to her eyes it was magical

Us waqt maan uske chehre ko dekhta hi nhi hai


Dekhta bhi kaise uski aankhon mein itni ghrayi thi, uski

nazren hi nhi ht rhi thi

Maahi mein maahi veee………………………………………

………………………………………..

,……………………………..

Geet mummers : oh babaji, ye to whi hai aapko inke alawa

aur koi milta nhi hai kya, ab mein kya karu

Making baby face

Geet is waqt tu late ho rhi hai

Aur kaam ke samay kisi dust ki madad bhi leni pdi to koi

baat

nhi

At other side

Maan kept looking at her lost as if he has never seen

anything so beautiful,

So angelic , geet waved her hand infront of his eyes

Geet again mummers he babaji ye mujhe ase kyun dekh rhe

hai

Ab mein kya karu

Koi baat nhi geet dekhne de

Isse to baad mein dekh lenge

Geet to driver: jldi chlao, mujhe north campus jana hai

Driver: pr sir

Geet: tumhare sir ne kuch kha

Nhi na, to car thodi fast chlao

I am late for college

Driver: yes mam

Driver drive to her college suddenly his car stop again

Maan came back from his dreams

Maan mummers tu ye kya soche jar ha tha

Aur ye to whi ladki hai, tu iske liye kaise , oh god, I am gone

mad wo bhi is pagal ladki ki wajah se

Maan: tum meri car mein kya kr rhi ho

Get out

Geet mummer's babaji inhone geet handa ko get out kha

Abhi btaati hu

Geet: ek to pichle itne samay se mujhe gurre jar he the aur

ab

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Maan see towards the driver

Aur tum

Driver: yes sir

Maan: tumne car kyun roki

Driver: sir mam ne jha kaha tha jane ke liye

Wo jgh aa gyi hai'

Maan: ye car meri hai, aur tum driver mere ho ya iske

Maine tumhe south x chalne ko kaha tha

Maan didn't notice where he laid stand

Driver: sir wo madam ne kaha

Maan : tum

Geet : us bechare pr gussa kyun ho rhe ho

Thanks driver bhaiya

Driver: welcome ji

Geet mummers and see the maan at corner her eyes

Socha tha babaji aaj is dust insaan ko bhi thanks kh dungi

Pr geet ab to bilkul nhi

Maan: ab jao yha se

Geet leave the place

Maan mummers ek to bina jaan pechan ke meri car mein

aake baith gyi

Upr se thanks tk nhi kaha

Maan said to driver: ab yhi rhna hai kya?

chlo

driver: yes sir

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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
nice part continue soon waiting for more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Woww.. just luved it..
good going..
Eagerly waiting for next..
n thanks for PM..

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