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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3

AT HOSPITAL

Doctor ' Mrs khurana , report mein to sb normal h, apko to koi takleef nhi h na,

Geet ' no doctor

Doctor: that's good

Geet ' mein abhi ati hu

Doc: kya hua geet

Geet: kuch nhi, mujhe yha kuch thik nhi lg rha h,

Meera: kya hua geet

Doc: meera asa ho jata h, geet thik h

( geet left the room)

Meera : doc, koi complication to nhi h na

Doctor: no meera, tum waise hi jyada fikr kr rhi ho,

Sb thik h.

Meera : kya hm geet ko sb kuch ab bta skte h, kya?

Doctor: abhi to nhi, abhi geet ko kmjori h, aur use stress dena thik nhi rahega

Meera: to fir

Doc: thoda intzaar kijiye, jaise uski tabiyat mein thoda sudhar aur hoga tb

Aap use bta skte h, pr use tb bi dheere dheere yad dilane ki koshish krna.

(Geet bahar meera ka wai kr rhi hoti h)

Meera: chle geet

Geet: meera tumne bhut time lga diya

Meera: wo mein doc se tumhari medicine ki prescription smjh ri thi

Isliye der lg gyi

To ab chle

Geet: hmmm

At khurana mension

(Daadi kya hua abhi tk nhi aaye dono, sb kuch thik to hoga na)

Daadi: geet beta aap aa gye,

Doc ne kya kaha, sb thik to h na

Geet: ha daadi

Daadi : beta aap sb hme jara detail mein btaye,

Geet: daadi maa, sb thik h, aap chaho to meera se puchlo

Meera ; ha daadi sb kuch thik h, koi bhi gbrane wali baat nhi h

Geet: daadi mein apne room mein jati hu,

Daadi: ha beta, aap jaiye aap thk gyi hongi.

Meera: mein tumhare liye juice leke aati hu

(Geet apne room mein chli jati h)

In khurana construction

Adi : sir , client aapka wait kr rhe h,

Dev: tum chlo mein aata hu

In khurana mension

At hall

Daadi: meera ab bataiye

Meera: daadi , abhi hm geet ko kuch nhi pta skte

Doc ne kaha h geet abhi week h

Daadi: thil ha beta

Meera : mein geet ko juice deke ati hu

In maaneet room

GEET apne room mein aati hi, doctor ne kya kaha sbse phle maan ko btati h,

(geet maan ki photo se baat kr rhi h)

Maan hmara baby bilkul thik h, doctor ne kaha h mein apna pura khayal rkhu

Maan: to geet tum apn akhyal kyun nhi rkhti

Geet: maan aap aa gye, aap kaha the,

Jaye mein aapse baat nhi krti,

Maan: meri mishti mujhse itna naraz h,

Geet: ha

Maan: pr mujhe apni geet ko manna aata h,

(Maan geet ko piche se hug krta h)

Geet: maan chodiye na

Koi aa jayega

Maan: aane do, meine apni biwi ko pkda h ,na ki kisi aur ki biwi ko

Geet: maan

Maan: mein to bs mjak kr rha tha

Sorry jaan😕

Geet: thik h, pr'''''''''''''''''''.

Precap: brij come to delhi

Part 4

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey i jst came across ur ff...its awesome...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4

Maan hmara baby bilkul thik h, doctor ne kaha h mein apna pura khayal rkhu

Maan: to geet tum apn akhyal kyun nhi rkhti

Geet: maan aap aa gye, aap kaha the,

Jaye mein aapse baat nhi krti,

Maan: meri mishti mujhse itna naraz h,

Geet: ha

Maan: pr mujhe apni geet ko manna aata h,

(Maan geet ko piche se hug krta h, and he rub his cheek to her chick)

Geet: maan chodiye na

Koi aa jayega

Maan: aane do, meine apni biwi ko pkda h ,na ki kisi aur ki biwi ko

(Geet turn the face forward to the maan)

Geet: maan, khbrdar ,kbhi kisi aur ko ase pkda bi

Nhi to mujhse bura koi aur nhi hoga,

Maan: mein to bs mjak kr rha tha

Sorry jaan,😔

Waise meri mishti mujhe lake bda possessive h😊

Geet: maan aap nhi h kya? (Geet man se ye sawal ke roop mein puchti h)

Maan: hmmm, to fir

Geet: to fir?

Maan: abhi bhi naraz ho,

Geet: nhi, thik h, pr'''''''''''''''''''.😕

Maan ''''''' maan ''''' aap kha ho, plz mjak bnd kriye aur bahar aaiye na

Meera : geet'''.. geet utho

Geet: meera maan kaha h, wo abhi mujhse baat kr rhe the aur

achanak kaha gye, bolo na meera

meera: geet relax

geet phle pani piyo

meera: geet tum koi spna dekh rhi thi , maan abhi nhi aye h

geet: kya

meera : ha geet

geet: meera

meera: geet tum phle juice piyo , tumhe medicine bhi leni h

geet apne liye na shi apne baby ke liye

(geet juice pi leti h)

Nakul: geet mam wo aapke

Geet : kya hua nakul

Nakul: wo aapke brij veerji aye h

Geet : kya ( ye sunke geet khush ho jati h)

Unse kho mein abhi aati hu

In hall

Brij: namestay daadi maa

Daadi: jete rhi bte

Aap khde kyun h, baithye na,

Aur ye kya aap itna sb kuch le aaye

Brij: daadi maa jyada kaha h, bs thoda hi to h, aur waise bhi ye to

shagun ka saman h

daadi: beta aur sb kaise h ghar mein

brij: babji ki kripa se sb aache h

aur daadi,

(tbhi geet aa jati h)

Geet hug the brij veerji

Brij: kaisi h hmari gudiya

Geet : mein thik hu veerji, aur aap kaise h

Brij: tere samne hu, bdiya

Brij: daadi maa ,mujhe to yakin nhi ho rha h

Daadi: kis cheez ka beta

Brij : hmari gudiya khud maa banane wali h

Kyun gudiya

Geet: veerji

(Tbhi meera aati h)

Meera: nakul dhyan se rkho

Nakul: hanji

Brij : namestay meera ji

Meera: namestay

Daadi: bte aap dono baat kriye, hmare back me pain h

Hm jake aaram krte h

Geet : daadi mein bi aati hu,

Meera : tum baitho, mein daadi ke sath jati hu

Geet: hmmm

Brij: geet , bake ke sb kaha h

Geet: dev to office gye h, annie college

Brij: aur maan jija ji

Geet: wo office ke kaam se bahar gye h

Brij: oh ho, tbhi hmari gudiya ki hassi adhuri si lg rhi h

Geet ydi unhe jaroori kaam na hota to, kya wo tujhe chodke jate

Kya, bol na gudiya

Geet: nhi veerji, bilkul nhi

(Geet hug the veerji)

Brij: acha ye sb chod, aur chl haasde

Nhi to jb jeeje ji aayenge to hme hi daatenge, hmne tera khyal kyun nhi

Rkha

Geet: ha

Brij: acha teri tyaari kaisi chl rhi h

Geet: veerji kis cheez ki

Brij: gudiya , tera dhyan kaha h , tere exam aane wale h

Geet: haa

Brij: fir kya hua gudiya

Geet : kuch nhi veerji

Brij: gudiya ye to tera sapna tha na, tune kitni mehnat ki thi,

Delhi ke is college mein admission ke liye, aur mujhe bhi to mnaya tha,

Yaad h na

Geet: hmmm

Precap: hoshiyarpur se delhi tk ki journey

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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interesting concept ...

awesome ... loved it ...

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continue soon ...

maan kahan hai ... hope jo mujhe feeling aa rahi hai .. waisa nahi ho ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 5

Brij: fir kya hua gudiya

Geet : kuch nhi veerji

Brij: gudiya ye to tera sapna tha na, tune kitni mehnat ki thi,

Delhi ke is college mein admission ke liye, aur mujhe bhi to mnaya tha,

Yaad h na

Geet: hmmm

(FLASHBACK)

IN HOSHIYARPUR

Geet ka aaj final year ka result aane wala h, she is so nervous and happy.

Rano(geet mom): beta nasta to krle

Raaji (geet younger sister): didi to aaj kuch nhi khane wali

Geet: mama

Rano: wo shi to kh rhi h, mein hi pagal hu jo tere aage piche gum rhi hu

Brij: kyun pareshan kr rhe h sb meri gudiya ko

Geet : veerji

Taayji (brij ki mom aur geet ki taayji ): oh ho, teri gudiya koi sharif nhi h,

Dekh kbse bechari rano ko pareshan kr rhi h,

Result iska aa rha h ya hmara

Geet : bs kro sb

Geet thoda aage chli jati h

Hey babaji, plz abki baar kuch chamatkar krdo , taki mujhe scholarship mil jaye, aur mein yha se door jake delhi mein pd sku

Raaji: sapne to dekho inke, delhi janah inhe, darji ghar se bahar to shi se jane nhi dete, yha se bahar akele jane denge

Geet: raaji tu chupkr nhi to maar khayengi mujhse

Raaji: oh ho di , kya galat kha meine

Geet: aa mein btati hu tujhe

(Geet raaji ke piche use marne ke liye dodti h

Pr taayji rok leti h)

Tayji: kyun ne kudhiye, kya galat kha raaji ne

Brij: bs karo sb, phle result to aane do, baki ki baad mein sochenge

Thik h

Geet: veerji mein college hoke aati hu

At afternoon

Geet sad face ke sath ghar mein enter krti h

Rano use puchti h, pr no reply

Rano: putrji, kya hua, sb thik to h na, tussi chinta na kr, koi tujhpe gussa nhi karega

Taayji: meine to phle kha tha khudi ko ghar ka kaam sikhayo

Raaji: kya hua didi aap fail ho gyi

Oh ho so sad,

Ab delhi jana ke spne pe pani fir gya

Rano: bs kr, dikhta nhi, wo udaas h

Itna sb kuch sunane ke baad geet apni hassi rok nhi pati aur zhor zhor se hsne lgti h

Taayji: lgta h, kudi ke dimag wich khuch gdbd ho gyi h,

Geet putr hota h, asa ho jata h,

Geet: kaisa taayji

Raaji: taayji, lgta h di ka sapna tut gya h, isliye wo bhki bhki baatein kr rhi h,

Taayji: ha ni kudiye, tu thik kh rhi h

Geet: taayji mera koi spna nhi tuta

Aur tu chipkali chup kr

Raaji: dekha maa, di ne mujhe chipkali kha

Rano: sb chup

Geet bol kya baat h

Geet hug the rano

Geet : maa, mein pass ho gyi

Aur mujhe 50% scholarship bhi mili h

Aur delhi ke best COLLEGE mein aage pdne ka mauka

(Darji whi se jaare he hote h, aur geet ki baat sunke ruk jate h)

Darji; bs jitna pd liya utna thik h, ab ghar ke kaam kaaj sikho, aage jake whi kaam aayenge,

Itna pda diya whi bhut h, aur iske jldi se hath pile karo,

Geet: daarji,

Rano geet ke shoulder pe hath rkhke , usse chup rhne ke liye khti h

Geet ruth ke aapne room mein chli jati h, aur room lock kr leti h,

Darji also left the place

Precap: kya geet aage pdne ke liye delhi jaa payengi?

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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nice
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interesting concept ...

awesome ... loved it ...

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interesting..cont soon..add me in ur pm list..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey all of u
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