~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

awesooome..

superb.

fab...

wonderful...

rocking upd.

loved it.

thanx for the pm.

take care.

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noaccount

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

hey ver!!!

the update was sooo hottt!!!!

terrific...fantastic post!!!!!👏👏👏

❤️❤️❤️ love the sweet fighing between VK!!!❤️❤️❤️

but where is vardaan?????

kajal is sooo worried about him!!!!

hope he'll come back soon!!!😉

plz cont soon

with lots of love

esha!!!

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Nisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Update was very good.

Muskan and Vardaan love each other very much. Vardaan muskaan ko rutha hua nahi dekh sakta and so am sure that he is planning ways...jisse who muskaan ko mana sake

she gets very worried when she does not see him in the room

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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Suhana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Hi Mehak

Congrats for the second thread of Unknown Desire👏👏👏

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Suhana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Hi Mehak

wonderful update as usual and congrats once again..👏👏👏

Vardaan was busy romancing with Kajal..they both were lost in the wonders of love.

Kajal was so happy that she has got some1 like Vardaan in her life..he really understands her well.he knows how to make her really happy.

Vardaan loves to tease her..she was so upset when he took too much time to reveal the names of those who love him the most..😉😆😆

Here Shalabh was trying to patch up between Arjun and Anu ..he was trying hard but Arjun was showing loads of attitude..afterall Anu didn't tell him her plans..Sunny was teasing Shalabh and even Arjun was getting suspicious..

Where has Vardaan gone??? kajal is so very worried for him.

I think he is planning a surprise for Kajal😃

Wat is Abhay's problem??? 😡😡😡..I hope he doesn't create any problem between Kajal and Vardaan.

Pls continue soon

Bye

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Thats great...😃

congrats sweety...👏

TUD...rock deserves second threads...👏

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Nidhi Chandrakar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

congratulations on the new thread Mahak

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Priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

hamesha ki tarah NICE...!!! ab NICE...kaise nahi hoga...iss me apna Raj...Vardaan bann kar jo Raaj karr raha hai...sab ke dil par...

pehla pura part baht romantic tha...!!! ab iss ke bare me jyada nahi likhungi...varna log kya samjhenge...ha ha ha...ke bachhi bigadti ja rahi hai...

vaise dono ka nok-jhonk kafi maza aaya padhne me...!!! aur Kajal ke bina kahe hi vardaan ka sab kuch sunn lena bhi mast tha...!!! haaye...dil ki baat sunn bhi leta hai aur samjh bhi jata hai...

salabh...arjun aur anu ke bich me sab kuch thik karne ki koshish karr raha hai...!!! par arjun toh arjun thaihra...mahabharat ke arjun ki tarah kuch jyada hi bhav kha raha hai...!!! vaise uss ka bhav khana sahi bhi hai...anu ki galati jo hai...!!!

yeh abhay ki prob kya hai...agar uss ne kuch bhi jane...anjane me kajal aur vardaan ke bich kuch bhi gadbad ki na...toh uss ki aisi ki taisi kar dungi...!!! usse meri tarf se warning de dena...huh..

par akhir me vardaan kahan chala gaya...!!! usse jaldi se le kar aa...!!! mujhe kajal ki tension nahi hai yaar...bal ke meri halat kharab ho rahi hai...

chal ab ud jaldi se karr...

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Vow guys great, bahut jyada log hain yahan comment karne k liye aur fic k Ne Thread pe congratulate karne k liye. Mujhe samajh me nahi aata ki itne acchi fic ko itne kam readers kyoun mil rahe hain. This is really frustrating and as a reader i am not happy with the responses you are giving. Yahan bekaar se bekaar fics ko itne saare like aur comment milte hain aur New Thread open hone par barish ho jati hai congratulation ki but ye dekho good guys.

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varshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: desaiprachi07
Vow guys great, bahut jyada log hain yahan comment karne k liye aur fic k Ne Thread pe congratulate karne k liye. Mujhe samajh me nahi aata ki itne acchi fic ko itne kam readers kyoun mil rahe hain. This is really frustrating and as a reader i am not happy with the responses you are giving. Yahan bekaar se bekaar fics ko itne saare like aur comment milte hain aur New Thread open hone par barish ho jati hai congratulation ki but ye dekho good guys.

Hey Drishu i agree with your anger completely.😊 😊 I have seen people like bad story fics too much and comment their a lot with much of talking there and here is this fic that only a few people comment here or press like button. I like her fiction and i do comment regularly.😃 😃 I don't know about others but only a few people write here sensibly.😉 😉 I am unhappy too but we can't do anything. 😕 😕 If she decides not to write any fic in future it is obvious because of poor response of people.😭 😭