~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Super hot update yaar. 😳😳😳😳😳😳

You mixed the whole update very well. 👏👏👏👏👏👏

First VK's romance than you turned towards Anu and Arjun taking help of Shalabh and finally to Abhay. 😊😊😊😊😊😊

But i wonder what he knew and where did he rush all of a sudden?

Start was awesome where Vardaan and Kajal were romancing u made me blush. 😳😳😳😳😳😳

But Vardaan got irritated when Kajal thanked him and he disappeared.😲😲😲😲😲😲 Where did he go and why? 😕😕😕😕😕😕 Kajal is so much worried about him.

After all she doesn't know anyone here. 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Shalabh to apne hi chakkar me laga hua hai na aakhir us ko Mugdha k pass jo rehna hai isi bahane. 😆😆😆😆😆

Ab shak ho raha hai Arjun ko us par aur Sunny bhi mujhe lagta hai jaldi hi bata dega.😉😉😉😉😉😉

baap re kitna attitude dikha raha hai Arjun Anu ka call nahi le raha hai. 😕😕😕😕😕😕

Not fair...Shalabh bhi chahta hai ki vo phone uthaye par itne asanise kahan maane waale hain ye log.

great part and continue soon.

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Hey dear

a big

to you on opening of

Edited by varshita - 14 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Great update,👏 super hot too.😳 Vardaan and Kajal k scene kafi hot and passionate the with good use of that song.😳 Arjun ko sahi shak ho raha hai ab Shalabh pe ki aakhir vo itna interest kyoun le raha hai is matter me 😆 aur Sunny ne bhi aag me ghee ka kaam kiya na.😉 Ab batao ki matter kya hai? 😆 Kitna smart hai ye ladka jo us ne Anu ko phone kar k sab bata bhi diya.😛 Ab to Arjun ko bhaav khaana hi hai na itne asaani se kaise baat maan lega vo ki sun ne lage Anu ki.😉 Par ye Vardaan kahan chala gaya achanak?😲 Kajal ko manana hi tha to aise chod kar jaane ki kya jaroorat thi? 😭
pls jaldi se aage update karo.

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Drishu i agree with your anger completely.😊 😊 I have seen people like bad story fics too much and comment their a lot with much of talking there and here is this fic that only a few people comment here or press like button. I like her fiction and i do comment regularly.😃 😃 I don't know about others but only a few people write here sensibly.😉 😉 I am unhappy too but we can't do anything. 😕 😕 If she decides not to write any fic in future it is obvious because of poor response of people.😭 😭

Par ye baat baaki k log kyoun nahi samajhte hain? Pata nahi kyoun mujhe lagta hai kehne k liye RP RP log kehte hain bus kuch logon ko chod kar baaki ko ya to pata nahi hai is fic k baare me ya to time nahi un k pass ye fic padhne ka. 😡 😡 😡

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arpita25

@arpita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Great vow yaar superb, hot and passionate with a lot good scenes. 😳
I loved them and this time the naughtiness between Shalabh an Sunny were so cute with confused Arjun.😆 He is just trying to find out that who is she jis k liye aaj kal bahut kuch chupa raha hai vo.😕 Aur aakhir matter kya hai jo itna interest le raha hai vo Arjun aur Anu k jhagde me.😆 Ab gussa to dikhana hi tha to phone kaise uthayega vo.😉 Par ab Kajal ko chod kar Vardaan gaya kahan,😕 bechari ka ro ro k bura haal hai pls bring him back.
update kar na jaldi