~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

abhi ud par aate hain...!!! pahle na compl karrni hai...yaar...yeh ud itna chota kyoun tha...

Haan ye to mai bhool hi gayi ki tune complain kyoun nahi ki abhi tak? 😆😆 😆

yeh ud na sachhi me baht cute tha yaar...thoda baht meri tarah...ha ha ha...
accha 😆 😆 😆
kajal ke liye thoda bura laga...!!! apne father ke baare me sunn kar voh kafi chup thi rashte me...aur vardaan ne bhi yeh achhe se notice kiya tha...!!! sachhi...BF ho toh vardan jaisa...kitne achhe se samajh liya uss ne kajal ko...!!! voh rone ka scene na baht achha tha...
Thank u, Vardaan sach me sab k liye ek misal hai us k jaisa boy friend kassh hota mere pass bhi. 😍
😍 😍
arjun ka scene bhi ek damm badhiya tha...!!! salabh...mugdha se milna chahata tha...par arjun ne us par pani pher diya...
Ye Arjun bhi na na to khud kuch karna hai is ko na karne hi dega kuch Shalabh ko.
abhay aur pia ka scene bhi kafi achha tha...dono hi kajal ke liye pareshan the...!!! arey haan...THANX kehna toh bhul hi gayi...!!! tune in dono ko yahan par vampire jo nahi banaya...!!! mujhe kajal ki tension nahi hai yaar...ladkiyon ki tension main nahi leti...par haan...vardan ka tension laga rehta hai...ha ha ha...
Vo to obviously hogi saari ladkiyon ko ladke ki tension varna log tujhe galat samjhenge na 😆 😆 😆
ab se khubshurat scene tha last scene...
Sote hue bhi mujh se door nahi jaana chahte na tum?' Kajal thought.

"Nahi bilkul nahi, kabhi nahi." He replied.

naina ke thoughts...bandh ankhon se bhi vardan jaan leta hai...
Kajal k thoughts na? 😉 😉 😉
yeh mujhe kehna toh nahi chahiye...kyoun ke tu toh ud jaldi karne se rahi...phir bhi yaar...ho sake toh jaldi ud kar dena...
kar doongi aur dekh kar bhi diya 😛 😛 😛



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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22


thank u dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

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Sorry yaar tumhara ye thread khatam ho chuka hai...but I have to reply here only...hehe.
Koi baat nahi darling...thanks a lot for replying 😊 😊 😊

Coming to the part jalddi jaldi...😆 It was definitely very nice.😃 I always love the cute romance of Vardaan and Kajal. But this tym, wid the entry of Abhay...(ahemz😉)...it sumwat gave out a clue to Vardaan abt Kajal's father!!😉 Lets see wat he does wid that.
Sab aa jaayega jaldi hi samajh, Kajal k dad us ka drawback hain 😭 😭 😭 aur jaldi hi vo khud batayegi ki kyoun vo un k baare me baat nahi karna chahti hai.

And well, Abhay wants to knw abt Vardaan...gud that he is a nice frnd to Kajal...and his motive is very noble as well, still I hope that it doesn't create a prob for VK.😳 Other than that, anything is f9...😆
Ek accha dost hone k naate vo ye sab kar raha hai and i am sure kuch bhi gadbad nahi hone waali hai 😉 😉 😉

And here Shalab and Mugdh...are doing pretty f9. Both think that the other might feel bad if came to know abt the feelings and all...😆...hope they'll knw abt each others feelings soon. And no matter wat hook or crook is used...am pretty sure they r gonna win it.😉
Vo sab to apun ki setting hai na,😛 😛 😛 pata nahi dono kab samjhenge ki bina bataye to doosre ko samajh aanewaala hai nahi. 😆 😆 😆

Now lets see if am ryt or wat...moving on to the next part now.😃



Thanks a lot Sumi dear 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: varshita

Coming to the update.
Bahut badhiya tha.👏 Kajal Vardaan se kuch bhi chupana nahi chahti hai par abhi batana bhi nahi chahti. Actually vo apne dard apne hi andar rakhna chahti hai.😭
Thanks 😃 😃 😃 and well said, vo chahti hai sab batana par abhi nahi kuch waqt lagega us ko.

Pehle Vardaan zid kar raha tha par ab vo bhi samajh gaya hai ki bekar ki jid karna sahi nahi hai 😛, jab us ko batana hoga khud bata degi. 😉
Haan kuch baaton ko kabhi kabhi waqt aur halat k hawale kar dena chahiye

Abhay sach me sweetheart hai vo sab kuch karega Vardaan ki reality jaane k liye taaki aur koi dukh na de paaye Kajal ko. 😊
Haan par tere alawa sab ne is POV se nahi socha. 😆 😆 😆

Pia ne call bhi kiya Kajal ko aur baat bhi hue, that is lovely😃. Mugdh and Shalabh ki bhi train chal nikli. 😉
Nikalni hi thi 😳 😳 😳

Arjun naraj hai Anu se ki us ne bataya nahi ki vo aa rahi hai Delhi me.😲 Ye to us ne shopping pe dekha na. 🥱
Baat to hai bhi logical Anu ko batana tio chahiye tha na. 😕 😕 😕

Vow kaafi protective hai Vardaan Kajal ko le kar kaise us ne bacha liya 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 To mam us ko thanks kehne lagi not fair. 😛
Ab kya kiya jaaye sab k saamne dikha rahi hogi ki us ka boss hai 😆 😆 😆

Song is nice and well suited.👏
thanks yaar 😊 😊 😊

Mujhe lagta hai ki Vardaan jaag raha hai tabhi us ne kaha'nahi kabhi nahi" jab Kajal ko bahut pyaar aa raha tha. 😳
Ye to next part me hi pata chalega na 😉 😉 😉

Jaldi se aage likh.



Thanks a lot dear 🤗🤗🤗

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

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Hmm...so Vardaan did inquire Kajal abt her father...but I guess she needs sum tym to gather the courage in herself to say it all to him. 😊 Till then he can surely w8.😃
Yes and it will happen very soon. 😉 😉 😉

But yaha Abhay ko Vardaan me itna kya bura laga yaar??😕 Itna handsum to hai...😆😆 achha achha mujhe pata hai...Abhay ek ladka hai...isliye usse koi fark nahi padta Vardaan kitna cute sweet hot n happening hai...😳...however I just hope uski shakh or watever neg feeling...ye jaldi se dur ho jaye.😳
Sab door ho jaayega jaldi se bus ek baar us ko pata chal jaaye ki vo sahi hai Kajal k liye 😊 😊 😊

Yaha Shalab and Mugdha me zyada kuch nahi hua...bas Arjun ki wajah se bechare ki achhi khasi chance barbaad ho gayi...😆😆
Haan ye Arjun bhi na samajhta nahi hai baat ko.

Now coming to the most beautiful thing on this part!! Of course u knw it hai na?😉 Yupp...its the last VK scene. U gelled it so well wid the song...I have heard the song once or twice only...😆 but lyrics is perfectly gud...😃 but the best was ur narrative. The way u wrote it all...was fab.⭐️⭐️
Thanks dear it is my fav song and i wanted to use it and finally i found the perfect place to use it. 😳 😳 😳

Kajal loves Vardaan more n more every day...coz he compels her to do so. I loved this compulsion in her words.😉 Lovely scene Vartika...😃
Thanks so much, pyaar to ho jaata hai na kiya nahi jaata 😳 😳 😳

And of course...congrats as this thread is finished. 😃😃 Continue wid the new thread Soon. 😃😃
Thanks buddy 😊 😊 😊

Luv,
Sumi. 😳



Thanks a lot Sumi for wishes.

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Part 40:-

She became surprised for a while, and she tried to move away but he pulled her to him, "kabhi jaanee nahi doonga tumhe apne se door."She just smiled at him and put her head on his chest.


Usi boondun mein tu hai, aankhein moondu mein tu hai
Tu hai mera, tu hai mera
Kuch main jaanu na, itna bas mujhe pataa hai


Kaafi der tak dono aise hi lete hue the jab Vardaan ne kaha, "Jab mai so raha tha tab to bahut baatein kar rahi thi ab kuch bolo na?"


"Tumhe kaise pata mere thoughts padh rahe the kya?"


"Haan yahi samajh lo." He winked at her.


Kajal gave a sweet smile, "good morning".


I am in love, I am in love
Tu hi bataa jaane kya mujhe hua hai


"Bus?"


"Aur kya subah subah yahi to bola jaata hai na."


"Aur subah subah ek good morning kiss bhi to de jaa sakti hai na?"


"Hato Vardaan tum bhi na kitne besharam ho." She tried to stand up but he held her tight in his arms.


"Vo to mai hoon, aakhir meri biwi ho tum." And winked her and she blushed.


"Abhi hue nahi hoon."


Vardaan made a face, "kyoun jhooth bolti ho, tum ne hi Sanya se kaha tha na ki meri wife ho tum."


"Maine nahi kaha tha vo aap ne kaha tha na."


"To tum ne bhi mana tha na ki ye sach hai. Bolo?"


"Haan."


"To is hak se mai tumhara pati hoon aur mujhe poora hak hai apne patni k saath romance karne ka." And he trapped her between the bed and him and started giving sweet kisses over her head, to eyes, than her nose to her cheeks. He gently placed a kiss on both corners of her lips and moved down. He bent over her neck and started licking her neck with his tongue just to make her more arose. She clutched the bed sheet tightly and he enjoyed to see the view that passion is increasing in her. He intentionally didn't kiss her keep on kissing her crane of neck. He wanted her to request to kiss her and the way he was making her week he knew very well that soon she will request him to kiss her.


Baadal pe chalta hoon main, girta sambhalta hoon main
Khwaishein karta hoon main, khone se darta hoon main


Soon he moved down removing her rob he find a lot of exposed skin to be traced by him. Her exposed skin was making him greedy for more and Kajal was not in a condition to protest or it should be said that she loved his touch over her bare skin. He started kissing her shoulders to her deepness off neck. "Vardaan..."


"Shhh", he silent her.


Jaaga na soya hoon main, musafir khoya hoon main
Kuch sarfira sa hoon main, budhu zara sa hoon main


Her hands started tracing his back now and she hugged her literally. Vardaan understood that she wanted more; she wanted to be loved more and more and could not deny her unsaid request. When he was kissing the deepness of her neck she pulled him closer as if she liked that and soon Vardaan's lips started tracing her beautiful mounds over her nighty. He wanted to see them; he wanted to taste that sweet treasure which is of him only. He just kissed them and sucks them and it got stiffened by his touch. Vardaan was happy to receive the passion responded by equal passion of her body. Kajal was happy and she was unable to hold her desires to be explored by him. This was just a start what will happen when he will make her his first time.


Baadal pe chalta hoon main, girta sambhalta hoon main
Khwaishein karta hoon main, khone se darta hoon main


Soon his hands started tracing her back and he pulled her to make her sit in his lap. Soon he was kissing her back with his hot lips which were making Kajal loose all her senses over him. His hands were exploring her thighs and she was moaning now with pleasure. All of a sudden his hands entered in one of his territory of her and he started giving gentle touches to her and now it was enough for her to control her. She turned and hugged her with full force breathing heavey and Vardaan just smiled at her. He was still giving the gentle strokes to her and she was moaning loud after a while he stopped and looked at her face. She was breathing heavily and he said, "Kajal...", but she was unable to open her eyes.


Jaaga na soya hoon main, musafir khoya hoon main
Kuch sarfira sa hoon main, budhu zara sa hoon main

"Kiss me Vardaan...I request you to kiss me hard" she finally gave in and Vardaan wanted that without wasting a moment he captured her sweet honey like lips with his and fulfilled her wish. Their bodies were almost pasted now and she was feeling all his weight on her lips. His lips were too much passionate and were just tearing her apart. He was too much aggressive that he holds her beautiful mounds in his hands and was almost squeezing them. He pulled her closer totally entering in his mouth and tracing each and every part of it with his tongue. Their tongues were playing game with each other and all of a sudden his hands enter in her nighty to touch that sweetness of peaks in his hands. Kajal was trying hard to hide her ecstasy but she was unable to do that.


Dil kya kare, dil kya kare
Tere bina, itna bas mujhe bataa hai


As he pinched them harder she groaned and Vardaan knew that which button of her he was trying to switch which can make her loss all senses soon. His hands were still capturing those treasures of him and all of a sudden he entered one of his hand inside her nighty and now his hands were almost encountering the tender peeks. He was feeling their softness and they felt him so soft just like feathers. Kajal was lost on his sensous touch of his hands to her beautiful area. The first touch of her love to his intimae parts the thought of which made her looses all her senses over her. It was a pleasure experience and she was no doubt enjoying the beauty of it. Vardaan was just caressing them loving and it's swollen tips now indicated him to give her more. He wanted to see them now and love them as much as he can. He slowly moved her rob a bit down and than he saw just a short view and he kissed them hard.


I am in love, I am in love
Tu hi bataa jaane kya mujhe hua hai


After a few minutes, "Thanks Vardaan mujhe samajhane k liye."

He looked her in awe, "sach me mai to barbaad hi ho jaaonga."

"Ab kya hua?"

"Pyaar bhi maine ek aise ladki se kiya jis ko har baat pe sorry aur thank u kehne ki adat hai."

Kajal gave a smile and hugged him, "poore nautanki ho tum samjhe."

"Haan vo to mai hoon aur tabhi tos ab mujh se itna pyaar karte hain na." He winked.

"Sach me, vaise kitne aur log tum se itna hi pyaar karte hain?" she asked.

"Theen to hain."

"Kya?"

"Haan kaun kaun?"

He thought for a while and Kajal said, "ab itna kyoun soch rahe ho?"

"Yaad kar raha hoon ki kis kis ka naam batana hai."

"accha itne log hain tumhare pass?" she got up leaving him immedieatly and questinoed him.

"Oho jaaneman naraj kyoun hoti ho? Bus soch raha tha kahan se start karoon?"

"Theek hai tum socho mai tab tak bath le kar aati hoon hume nikalna bhi hai jaldi hi." And she left for washroom without wasting a single second.

"Oho lagta hai naraj ho gayi ab maana padega."

Here Arjun's house:-

"Kya?"

"Haan bhabhi kal hum ne aap ko Mall me dekha tha ab ye to galat baat hai na ki aap ne hume bataya nahi ki aap Delhi aa chuki hain."

"Actually aane k baad mai kaafi busy ho gayi thi to batane ka mauka hi nahi mil paaya."

"Ab dekhiye kitna naraj hai vo maine kal kaha mil k aate hain jo janab ne mana kar diya."

Anu thought for a while, "bahut naraj hain kya?"

"Haan bhabhi ab kya bataoon?" Shalabh made a face.

"Kya karoon ab?" she was in tensin now.

"Bhabhi kuch to karna padega aap ko, vaise mai rakhta hoon phone aa raha hai vo." And he hung the phone immedieatly.

Arjun came to him, "To yahan kya kar raha hai?"

"Kuch nahi ek call aaya tha bus baat kar raha tha."

"Chal andar chal kai saari prepartions baaki hain."

"Haan chal na", suddnely he thought of something, "Vaise bhabhi ka koi call aaya tha kya?"

Arjun looked at him and replied in no.

"Kya yaar ye bhabhi bhi na kaise bhool jaati hain?"

Arjun gave him a stare, "Tujhe badi chinta ho rahi hai kal se mai dekh raha hoon."

Shalabh said, "na.nahi...aisa thode na hai kuch ab aakhir tu mera dos thai aur mujhe chinta hoti hai teri."

"Pata hai tab yahan khada ho kar itne der se na jaane kis se baat kar raha tha." He tanuted.

"Aaya hoga Mugdh ka phone." Sameer said entering to which he got a hit on his arm in return.

" Kaun Mugdh?"

"Abe koi nahi yaar..is kit o aadat hi ho gayi hai mujhe pareshaan karne ki." He glared Sunny.

"Kuch to gadbad hai, mujhe pakka lag raha hai ki kuch chupa raha hai tu mujh se."

"Yaar kitna shak karta hai tu."

"Nahi teri harkatein hi aise hoti hain aur mai dekh raha hoon din ba din tu bahut ajeeb behave kar raha hai chakkar kya hai?"

"Haan pooch mere uper to chillata rehta hai na ab bata."

"Chal jaldi se bata de varna dekh mai kya karta hoon."

"Abe kuch nahi hai yaar tum dono ko aur koi kaam nahi hai kya?"

"Hai na par pehle tujhe seedha kar dein fir baaki k kaam karenge na."

Tabhi Arjun k mobile ki ring bajni start hue and when he saw the name flashing over it he just gave a smile but as soon as he reminded that Anu didn't tell about her being in Delhi he decided not to pick up the phone that easily.

Sunny noticed that, "kab se baj raha hai phone yaar uthata kyoun nahi hai?"

"Ruk utahana mat." Arjun stopped him.

"Par kyoun yaar?"

"Kyounki jo call kar raha hai us se mujhe abhi baat nahi karni hai."

Sunny thought for a while, "kahin bhabhi ka phone to nahi hai?"

"Yaar tum sab dimaag bahut chalate ho." Arjun replied.

"Abe jab hai itna dimaag to chalyenge hi na?"

Sunny smiled but said,"Par phone to utha, problema kya ha itera? Pehle keh raha tha ki koi call nahi karta batane k liye mai yahan hoon aur ab jab call kar rahi hain bhabhi to tujhe nakhre aa rahe hain."

"Jaise mujhe satya hai vaise hi mai bhi sataoonga. Itne asaani se thode na chodne waala hoon." Arjun said.

"Kis ne kaha chodne k liye, hum to bus baat karne k liye keh rahe hain." Shalabh said.

"Haan aur kya baat to karni hi chahiye the na."

"Vo to mai kar loonga,par abhi nahi baad me."

"Tu aur tera bekaar ka attitude."

"Tujhe kya problema ho rahi hai mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha hai."

"Haan sahi kaha mujhe bhi samajh me nahi aa raha hai." Sunny said.

"Tum dono baar baar mere peeche kyoun pad jaate ho." He thought an excuse, "are aakhir bhabhi ek lady hain aur un ko pareshaan kyoun karna?"

"To kya saari aurton ki pareshaani tere se dekhi nahi jaati kya?" Arjun said.

"Jab tum logon ki samajhni hi nahi hai meri baat to mere kuch kehne se kya fayda hai?" he made a face and left.

"Is ko kya hua?" Arjun asked confusingly.

"Are koi gal nahi mai dekhta hoon."

He came out to search him and he was standing there thinking something. "Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?"

"Tu jaa yahan se mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai tere se."

"Ab maine kya kar diya?"

"Nahi.nahi abhi kiya kya hai abhi to bahut kuch karna baaki hai na tera. Saale do minute k liye chup nahi reh sakta tha Arjun k saamne. Bada maza aata hai na mujhe chidhane me?"

"Are yaar aisa kuch nahi hai mai to bus thoda sa...".

"Tera thoda sa na dekha maine." And bcame silent.

Sunny though for something than said, "Accha baat nahi karna chahta hai na theek hai mai samajhta hoon ab to tu bus Mugdha se baat karega na. Nahi nahi maine to galat kaha us ka naam Mugdha na Mugdh hai." He teased and he responded.

"Tujhe nahi choonga mai ab." And he started runing behind him to beat him. The Tom and Jerry chase started.

Back to VK:-

When Kajal came out of the washroom he found Vardaan no where to be seen. She searched him here and there but found him no where. She panicked where has he gone? "Abhi to bus 7 baje kahan chala gaya Vardaan?"

She called at reception, "yes mam?"

"Mai room no 207 se bol rahi hoon mere saath yahan Mr. Vardaan yahan aaye the aap ko koi idea hai ki vo kahan gaye hain?"

"Sorry mam mujhe is baare me koi idea nahi hai par mai check kar k batati hoon."

"Ok"

Half an hour has been passed but still no clue of him, she got worried and started thinking, "Mai bhi na bekaar me gussa karti hoon pata nahi kahan chala gaya vo? Kitna gussa hoga mujh par jaane kya kya soch raha hoga." She tried his cell many times but it was unreachable.

"Oh Vardaan kahan ho tum?" She called at reception once again to inquire about him, "kuch pata chala aap logon ko?"

"Sorry mam, maine housekeeping staff se baat ki hai par kisi ne kuch bataya nahi." He replied.

One more hour passed and now Kajal was really worried she doesn't know what to do she started crying, "Vardaan kahan chale gaye tum? Please laut aao n amere liye. Dekho tumhare bina meri kya halat ho rahi hai? Please Vardaan come back. I promise ab kabhi mai kuch aisa nahi kahoongi ya kabhi gussa nahi karoongi tum par kisi bhi vajah se."

Abhiya:-

Someone called Abhay, "sir kaam ho gaya hai."

"Theek hai mai aata hoon." Abhay said and left in hurry.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Hiii Vertika
awesum upd dear
mindblowing
amazing
fantastic
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa

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nice part vertika...
par yeh vardaan gaya kaha hai?
continue soon...
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hi!
the update was as usual fantastic and wonderfu👏👏👏
loved the romance and sweet litl noke jhok of vardaan and kajal👏👏👏
lekin ab vardaan kahan chala gaya achaanak😕😕😕
pls update soon😉😉😉 and bring back vardaan nahi to kaajal se zaada me roungi😆😆😆
bbbyeyeee
takecare😃😃

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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#30
hi
the up is tooo romantic yaar
so vardhan is romancing with his wife kajal
aur kajal she is just carried away
but yaar yeh shock dene zaruri the
ab vardhan kaha chala gaya yehi soch soch ke guzarna hoga mujhe
mujhe toh laagta kahin abhay nahin he toh vardhan ka kidnap nahin karwaya haai
plz yaar cont soon and pm me

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