~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

beautiful awesome part.
loved it.
continue soon.



Thanks a lot Rakhi dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Sorry yaar mai bhool gayi thi update pe reply karna.
It's fine yaar no problem with that ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Good yaar,๐Ÿ‘ tum ye batao ki bina Abhay k tumhara kaam nahi chalega kya?๐Ÿ˜† Pehle apne Karan ko le liya Destiny me aur ab yahan Abhay ko ๐Ÿ˜‰
Dono k dono ek saath gayab bhi to ho gaye na screen se to kaise chalta mera kaam un k bina. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

but sab se acchi baat ye hai ki koi bhi misunderstanding nahi hue VK k beech kyounki turant hi pata chal gaya us ko ki Abhay ki ek fiyance hai jis ka naam Pia hai.๐Ÿ˜‰
Mai koi confusion hone bhi nahi deti na dono k beech kisi bhi halat me ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Arjun par to dhyaan hi nahi jaata ab Shalabh ka,๐Ÿ˜† apni Mugdh k baare me sochne se chutti mile to kuch aur sochega na vo.๐Ÿ˜› Sunny bhi samajhta hai ki kitna possessive hai Shalabh apni Mugdh k liye. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Jahan pyaar hota hai vahan insaan possessive ho hi jaata hai na. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ Ab hai neend kise, ab hai chain kahan


Par the best part was jab V ko ehsaas hua ki Kajal must be hungry๐Ÿ˜ aakhir us ne romantic chat kar kar k us ko kuch khaane peene nahi diya hoga seedhe apne saath le aaya.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
So understanding he is ๐Ÿ˜
๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜

Ab Shalabh ko bhi Mugdh se sorry kehna hai par vo to naraj hi nahi hai us se ๐Ÿ˜† aur us ko apna new name Mugdh bhi kaafi pasand aaya..
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Vo naraj nai hai us se aur Mugdh accha hai na ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰



Thanks a lot dear ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13


For New Thread of TUD ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

My dear Vartu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: prerna1

great part
loved it
plz continue soon




Thank u so much dear ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good

Hello dear and thanks ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

toh kajal dukhi hai aapne dad ke ziker se aur kajal ka yeh dukh yeh pareshani vardhan ko pareshan kar raha haai woh jaanna chahata haai ke aakhir kajal ko kya problem haai par kajal woh vardhan ko aapne pareshani nahin batana chahate haai
Vo abhi apni pareshaaniyon se Vardaan ko jara bhi pareshaan nahi karna chahti hai aur ab to vo bhi samajh gaya hai ki jab Kajal chahegi tabhi kuc batayegi is baare me us ko. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

aur yehi baat vardhan ko dukhi kar deta haai
woh sochta haai ke kajal doent trust him
Haan koi bhi insaan aisa hi sochega

but kajal i thik she needs time
Haan ek din vo khud hi is baare me batayegi Vardaan ko ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

anyways arjun is happy to se mudgha
ye Arjun kaise khush ho gaya Mugdha ko dekh kar? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•

and this abhay he is behaving over protective are bhai tumhare pass pia haai uska khayal rakh
par nahin usse toh pia se zada vardhan mein ke baare jane mein interest haai
Pia to sab se jyada important hai us k liye par Kajal bhi maayne rakhti hai us k liye aur vo nahi chahta hai ki Kajal kisi bhi vajah se hurt ho. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

par the scne of kajal and vardhan with the songs is really sweet
Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

plz cotn soon and pm me



Thanks a lot Ria for comment ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16


Thanks a lot dear ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

hello di๐Ÿ˜ƒ

congrats for completing 150 pages๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘
A big thanks Shreya dear
๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

very nice part๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

as vardaan very easily understood kajal's behavior๐Ÿ‘
Bahut acche se samajhta hai vo na Kajal ko ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

but what is she hiding from vardaan๐Ÿ˜•
Pata chal jaayega jalid hi

i hope that abhay is not going to create trouble๐Ÿ˜ก for vardaan and kaajal but as a friend he is also worried for her
Ek accha dost kuch aise hi sochta hai na ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

and it is also very true that...vardaan sote hue bhi kaajal se alag nai reh paaega๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Kabhi nahi alag hoga vo Kajal se ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

again a very nice part๐Ÿ‘
thnx for the pm and
Thank u par tu thanks kehna bund kar samjhi ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

continue soon
bye
takecare
shreya๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Thanks a lot dear Shreya for comment ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

Hiii Vertika how r u?
sry for not commenting on ur ff
mai bhut busy thi dear
mera exam tha aur abhi
entrance ke exam me busy hoon...
so anyway awesum upd dear
superb
mindblowing
do cont. soon

Love
Deepa



Hey Deepa hello and i a fine ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Don't say sorry yaar and it's fine all the best for your entrance exam. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Thanks dear ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

sorry for being tooo late...but i have already told you that i was catching up wid this!!!
and yes thank you very much 4 pm me
It's fine dear take your time and read without any hurry ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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hey ver...how are you???
Hello Esha i am really fine ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
the update was so romantic, cute it was just awesome!!!
thanks a ton ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
kajaal is really upset and dissappionted with his dad๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ she was so quit the whole way aur vardaan se saahaa nahi gaya kajaal ka roona awww...he really care about her!!!
Yeah really and all the truth about Kajal's father will be revealed soon. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
arjun scean was good too!!! hahaha bichara shalab mughda se milna chata hai aur arjun ne saaf mana kar dia...to bad 4 him!!!
Haan kyounki vo gusse me hai ki Anu ne bataya kyoun nahi us ko. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
abhay and pia seen was so caring!!!...abhey and pia really care about kajol after all kajol us ki best frnd jo hui!!!
Haan sach me but she is Kajal not Kajol ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
when kajal wake up she hugged vardan and she was thinking how her life take a different turn just because of vardan!!!
hahahhaha the last seen was way tooo good,superb!!!
'Sote hue bhi mujh se door nahi jaana chahte na tum?' Kajal thought.

"Nahi bilkul nahi, kabhi nahi." He replied.

it was sooo funny kajol thought that vardan is probably sleeping but...
She was thinking that he was sleeping but he was wide awake to surprise her ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
keep it up!!! and yes congratulation for 150 pgs og this fic!!!๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ
Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
love u
esha



Thanks so much Esha and hope u will catch up soon ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooome...

superb...
fab...
loved it...
thanx for the pm...



Thanks Preeti dear for comment ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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