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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 11

Maan: chup...bilkul chup.

Geet: par..mein..

Maan: tumhe suna nai maine kya kaha?

Geet:umm.

Geet turns away from him and starts to whisper to herself while removing her ornaments one by one. All the while maan keeps on staring at her from corner of his eyes.

Geet(whispers): how rude he is...telling me...geet handa to stop talking...how can i?..i cant even stay a min without talking? I will be bored...how can he stay silent like that always?...i still doubt whether he is human or not...uff babaji...help me...get me out of this sadu as soon as possible...

Geet's hands travels to her ears along with maan's stare and she tries to remove her earring and fails. She again tries but fails.

Geet: uff...ab isko kya hogaya?...why is it behaving like this sadu...so stubborn...not at all coming...they r so heavy I cant keep them any ore...hmmm...my dear sweet earring plz leave my ear...or did u fall in love with my ear???..ummm...

Geet jumps up with a sudden touch at her ear lobe and turns instantly and finds maan's hand at her ear.

Geet: yeh aap kya kar raheho?

Maan: uff geet y r u shouting?

Geet: what r u doing?

Maan: I m trying to remove ur earring.

Geet(scared): kyun?

Maan: help.

Geet: kya?

Maan: geet ...did u swallow any question bank before?

Geet: kya?

Maan: confirmed.

Geet:: umm????

Maan: geet I saw u struggling with that earring so I m helping u to remove it.

Geet: ummm????

Maan's hand travels back to geet's ear and geet shouts.

Geet: NAHI.

Maan stops and stares at her.

Geet: nahi..I mean..i will remove it...thank u.

before:Part 10

after: part 12

part 13

part 14

part 15

part 16

part 17

part 18

part 19

part 20

from part 21

Edited by teju2292 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar...but so short
teju2292 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
one more is on the way yaar...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: teju2292

one more is on the way yaar...


waiting ~~ 😛
teju2292 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 12

Geet: nahi...I mean..i will remove it...thank u.

Geet agains tries to remove it and again fails this make maan lose his patience and shouts.

Maan:bas...see its not coming for u let me help.

Geet: nahi...mein ne kaha na mein karungi.

Maan: chup.bilkul chup.

Geet stops and let maan to remove her jewels. Maan takes her earring from her right ear and goes to left one and one by one he removes all her jewelry. When maan touches geet she feels an current pass through her spine and she immediately sloses her eyes feeling him close to her.

Maan on the other side tries hard to concentrate on jewels other than her cute inncent face which is now just few inches away from him.

As maan tries to take her maang tika his lips slightly brushed her forehead which made geet to open her eyes and look directly into his dark choclate eyes. And both of them lost in each other eyes. Maan's one hand is resting on her forehead and the other hand holding her jewel in the mid air while geet's one hand is on her lap and the other one slowly traveled to his shoulder and rested there.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7-sbKGTWow[/YOUTUBE]

[PLZ FRNS LISTEN TO THIS BEAUTIFUL SONG WHILE READING I LOVE THIS SONG...and sorry for patsuc1 taking tis without your permission but hope u dont mind...thank u]

After few mins they both came out of trance and immediately geet removed her hand from his shoulder and maan slowly removed the jewel and placed it in her lap where all the other jewels are resting. He moved back to his seat and both felt restless and uncomfortable due to their own behaviour.

Maan stared the car and both dint look at each other trying to avoid the awkwardness. Geet slowly kept all the jewels in the bag and sat silently for few minutes and gradually fell asleep. After some time maan saw her sleeping peacefully cuddled up in the seat like a small kid and a smile crept on maan's lips which was observed by no one in that dark night.

Part 11

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome parts loved how maan took off all jew wels lovely

geet handa & chup not possible

let's see what's in store

waiting 4 more

thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

loved both parts 11 n 12 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

loved both parts 11 n 12 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful part!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

My Small analysis ...hope u ll like it😛

Its in Ear-rings POV😉😆

Geet(whispers): how rude he is...telling me...geet handa to stop talking🤣...how can i?(DW Geet ...we knw that is impossible😆)..i cant even stay a min without talking?(Thats know factor ...but still U can with Maan's help😳 )I will be bored...(No,U ll enjoy it😉😆)how can he stay silent like that always?...(hey babaji ...Not always😲)i still doubt whether he is human or not(Still U r doubting😕)

Geet's hands travels to her ears along with maan's stare and she tries to remove her earring and fails. She again tries but fails.

Geet: uff...ab isko kya hogaya?...why is it behaving like this sadu...so stubborn...not at all coming...they r so heavy I cant keep them any ore...hmmm...my dear sweet earring plz leave my ear(no ...I need my Maan😆) ...or did u fall in love with my ear???(I fall for my Maan's fingers😆)..ummm...(😳)

Geet agains tries to remove it and again fails this make maan lose his patience and shouts.(Meine kaha tha na I want Maan to remove it)


Maan takes her earring from her right ear and goes to left one and one by one he removes all her jewelry.(I said u know only My Maan can remove it😆) When maan touches geet she feels an current pass through her spine and she immediately sloses her eyes feeling him close to her(Now she is enjoying my Maan ...but she is not at fault sab ka haal yesa hai😆

As maan tries to take her maang tika his lips slightly brushed her forehead (Nahiii ...*in old filmo style*😆 )which made geet to open her eyes and look directly into his dark choclate eyes.(mere Maan sae dor raho) And both of them lost in each other eyes(😭). Maan's one hand is resting on her forehead and the other hand holding her jewel in the mid air while geet's one hand is on her lap and the other one slowly traveled to his shoulder and rested there.(Nahiii ...mera Maan mujhe dokha diya)


hope U enjoyed it😃


143 Buddy



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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part
love it
xxx
thanks 4 pm

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