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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 14

Geet(shocked): maan..

Maan(worries):geet….geet what happened? R u alright?

Maan keeps his hand on geet's sholder and shakes her.

Geet: u almost killed me idiot.

Maan: what..!!!...oh…means u r scared hain na!(smirks)

Geet: shut up. First tell me how I came to back seat? Where r we? Why did u stop here? When did u stop here? What r we doing here? Where did u go leaving me?

Maan: geet…geet first take breath…inhale and exhale again inhale and exhale do it one more time..inhale exhale inhale.

Geet without thinking does as maan says inhales and exhale ans after some breathing realizes what she is doing and shouts on maan.

Geet: MAAN are u going to answer me or not?

Maan: cool down geet cool down yesterday night u slept in the passenger seat and I picked u up and kept u in the back seat.

Geet: why did u keep me in back seat?

Maan: coz in sleep u r falling on me and I m unable to drive.

Geet:then u could have woke me up.

Maan: wah lady copy of kumbhakarn…I even tried it but failed to wake u up.

Geet:..oh…hmm..ummm…ok….but ….but…where r we? Y did u stop here? Why r u not answering this question?

Maan: uff…if u give a break.

Geet: ok…now tell.

Maan: don't u think I am also a human and I too need some sleep.

Geet(whispers): but I never thought u r a human.

Maan: what?

Geet: nothing…nothing….so?

Maan:what so?...i stoped here to sleep for some time.

Geet: but y at this place u can stop at some dhaba.

Maan: ya I thought of it but thought it will not be safe for u.

Geet is touched by hid words and stares at him. Maan does see that she is staring at him and says to geet while taking the water bottle and some packet from the front seat.

Maan: geet take this.(he hands over the packet and water bottle to geet)

Geet snaps out of her thoughts and feels weird for herself. she takes the packet and water from him.

Geet: whats this?

maanujaanu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum updates
n d excercise Maan gave Geet was awesum
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part now they go back to dehlli hmm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved how maan told geet to do inhaling & exhaling air
loved how maan watched geet
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
both parts
wonderful part
love it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi teju,
very nice part as always
maan teaching geet breathing exercise was hilarious. i can imagine geet's face.🤣
geet...lady copy of kumakharan...hahahaha...🤣
geet is still doubting, if maan is a human...
maan! ab kuch karo taakki geet will believe that you are a human.🤣
i wonder what maan has to do to prove it😳😳😳
thanks for this very cute part dear
143 teju
have a nice day😃
Tonya
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey story moves really interesting...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: teju2292


dia dear...🤣
ur ear rings pov is awesome dear...
keep going...
loved it...
thanks for commenting dear...
ur teja😊


Teja ...me forgot to mention ...that Pepsi hena ...think that as Maan ...IN ER's POV🤣


143 Buddy
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet is not just Question bank ...she is Doubting bank bahind MSK;s intention.

BREAKING NEWS:

MSK's Doubting intention bank is available.Toll Free & Service Free for those believes MSK is not a human😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update yaar
Doubles !!
update soon

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