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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderfull update and geet asking so many questions. mmmh loved it, continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar ...loved it so much !
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
MSK & smiling...really wonder for the world
geet keep sticking to msk & u will get many shocks & wonders
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet non stop bak bak
love how geet asking
many question
wonderful both
love it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

loved both parts 15 n 16 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow ...Geet ..Good going ...kya line mara hai ...Maan to gaye ...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi Teju,

sorry for this late comments.

hope by now you would be in class...all the best for your new academic year.


loved both the updates very much.

geet is questioning maan about the food, as if Maan Singh Khurana is a Dabbawala...hahaha...

dust danav sounds better than Idiot...oh! really?...MSK! i didn't expect this from you...but bechara...what will you do? right now you are with Geet na? so no wonder...things like this happens🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Part 17

Geet: no no not really...u look so handsome when u smile...feels like to lose myself in ur smile. keep ur smile like this always...i really love ur smile.

Geet doesn't realize what she just said but maan is shocked by her words and goes in to his dream world where only he and geet are present.



He is walking in some place. The surroundings are covered in snow. There are flowers and snow every where and far some where can listen to the rumbling sounds of water. Infront of him a geet is standing facing her back to him wearing a ocean blue see through saree and strip blouse with no make up but looking like an angel. Her slim waist is clearly visible as the saree dint cover that part of her body. There is only one string of cloth on her back tying her blouse. Her smooth pearl skin is glowing and his hands are iching to touch it...feel her skin under his hands. He walked towards her automatically like some one dragging him...some unknown force. He stood behind her and slipped his hand on her bare back caressing it and made his way to her shoulder and turned her to face him.

Her brown eyes are full of desired and burning through him. He took her both hands in his hands and slowly placed them around his neck caressing his body all through the way till reaching his neck passing current down his spine. He left her hands and put his hands on her shoulder traveling them slowly touching her every thing on his way to her waist. He placed his hands on her bare waist and pulled her towards him. She shivered in his arms. But its not the shiver of fear...but shiver of love...shiver of desire...shiver of passion...he slowly brought himself so close to her face...their eyes are locked and maan brought her face close to his now their faces are so close that there is only a small gap between there lips. He came more close to close the remaining gap between their lips...to seal his lips with hers...


MAAANNN...MAAAN

there is a voice...he felt that some one is shacking him...so badly...and calling his name...omg...its geet.

Geet: MAAANNN...


BEFORE:part 16

after:part 18

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 18

Geet: MAAANNN..

Maan opens his eyes and finds geet's hands on his shoulders and geet staring at him. But its not like what he thought. She is shacking him and shouting his name.

Maan: kya hua..y r u shouting.

Geet bursts out into laugh and points her finger towards his face.

Maan shouts: geeettt...y r u laughing now.

Geet: maan u r day dreaming.

Maan understands that all this time he is dreaming...that too day dreaming...omg...MAAN SINGH KHURANA day dreaming!!!!!!...that too about a girl...

Maan(st): maan what happened to you? U r day dreaming???? That u about a girl...A GIRL...

(omg y is maan behaving like this??? Does he want to dream about boy or what...maan do u want maanisha? Or chandu?...uff maan...tum bhi na...my poor brain what will I do now..u better continue but plz don't say this sentence to geet she is sooo clever and she will definitely think that u r a...should I say that word...!!!...what say tonya and dia dears...)

Maan(st): this is disgusting maan...what happened to u today! u r explaining to a girl! first u brought her food then staring at her then falling for her words which she herself dints register in her brain and now... day dreaming that too kiss...omg...what will geet say if she comes to know that I m dreaming that I m kissing her...maan seriously u lost it.

Geet(still laughing): maan...ab bhi!!!!

Maan(irritated): ab bhi kya?

Geet(controls her laugh):wahi dreaming.

Maan: I m not dreaming...I m thinking about some work.

Geet has a hard time controlling her laughter but finally does it successfully but maan is irritated to the core.


Before: part 17

after : part 19

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww awesomeee
luved it teja
maan dreaming abt sexy geet
super coolll
luved ittt

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