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monika1992 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
love it
thnaks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor Maan😆 ...just missed a kiss😆 ...DW Maan ...Teja ll give u chance for a long AK😳, Right Teja ..what say???
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
MAAN SINGH KHURANA or day dreaming??????????😆
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Poor Maan😆 ...just missed a kiss😆 ...DW Maan ...Teja ll give u chance for a long AK😳, Right Teja ..what say???




OH SURE DEAR...
BUT POOR MAAN...AUR TODA WAIT KARNA PADEGA...HE HE HE😉😛😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
tonya dear
where is ur comment yaar
dieing to see ur comment yaar

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Part 19

Maan: I m not dreaming…I m thinking about some work.

Geet has a hard time controlling her laughter but finally does it successfully but maan is irritated to the core

Maan: geettt

Geet controls her laughter…uff finally.

Geet: ok dude I believe u dreaming about ur works..oops thinking about work ok. (and smiles)

Maan without another word turns his back to her and facing the road and starts the engine when he listens geet shouting to stop.

Geet: stop stop.

Maan: kyun?

Geet: I will come front.

Maan: hmm.

Geet settles herself in the passenger seat beside maan as maan is continuously staring at her.

Geet: maan ab chalo.

The ride again starts with geet's non stop bak bak and maan's sweet glances at geet.

Geet: maan stop stop stop

Maan: ab kya?

Geet: I want to go in.

She points to a outfit shop before which they stopped their car after entering one of the town on the way.

Maan: why?

Geet: maan how do u think that I am going to travel with these clothes to delhi?

Maan: y what happen to these cloths they look nice on u.

Geet: wo to hai…any clothes will definitely look nice on me..its my magic after all.

Maan just smiles at her self compliments.

Geet: omg..u r smiling again.

Maan: geeet.


before: part 18

after:part 20

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Part 20

Geet: omg..u r smiling again.

Maan: geeet.

Geet: ok ok..i really need to buy some clothes.

Maan: hmm…ok go and buy I will wait here.

Geet: maan tum bhi avo na plzz.

Maan: no geet I don't like shopping…u just go.

Geet: maan wo kya hai na..while I m running away from home I dint bring enough money to do shopping….

geet keeps a baby face and tells maan which instantly melted him and he accepted to go with her.

Maan: hmm…so u want money hmm?

Geet: plzzz come.

Maan: chalo.

Geet and maan together go into the shop and geet starts selecting the dresses. She sees some jeans and tops but finds the prices are high so she tells him that she will see at some other place.

Geet: maan lets go.

Maan: why? din't u like any.

Geet: nahi maan we will see at some other place.

Maan: but geet those dresses are nice why dint u like.

Geet: no maan I m telling u na we will go to another shop.

Maan: geet saaf saaf batav tumhari problem kya hai?

Geet: wo ..maan wo..prices are high.

Maan: geet y do u worry about money. I will pay them. U take whatever u want.

before: part 19

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Teja,

Atlast i am back. And read all the last 4 parts in one go. Very sweet and cute updates.

Part 17

Maan and his hot hot dream. OMG!!!! What a location! What a costume! What positions! Ye MSK bhi na...he needs everything to be perfect in his dreams too.

Still i couldn't believe that he is really MSK. He is day dreaming of kissing a girl...wo bhi AK. Chi chi babaji. Ye MSK bohat naughty hai.

Part 18

OMG!!! maan wants to dream about Manisha or Chandu...ufff! teja tum bhi na? I killed myself laughing at your lines.

Part 19 & 20

Wow...geet is asking maan to come for shopping is too cute.

I thought geet will make maan go bankrupt by her shopping. But she is hesitating to buy costly dresses. Geet! you have all the rights. He has earned millions to spend exclusively for you only. Please go ahead and empty MSK's pocket. Hahaha...

Thank you so much for this lovely and light hearted ff teju.

Keep up the great work.

143 dear,

Tonya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tonyahk

Hi Teja,

Atlast i am back. And read all the last 4 parts in one go. Very sweet and cute updates.

Part 17

Maan and his hot hot dream. OMG!!!! What a location! What a costume! What positions! Ye MSK bhi na...he needs everything to be perfect in his dreams too.

Still i couldn't believe that he is really MSK. He is day dreaming of kissing a girl...wo bhi AK. Chi chi babaji. Ye MSK bohat naughty hai.

Part 18

OMG!!! maan wants to dream about Manisha or Chandu...ufff! teja tum bhi na? I killed myself laughing at your lines.

Part 19 & 20

Wow...geet is asking maan to come for shopping is too cute.

I thought geet will make maan go bankrupt by her shopping. But she is hesitating to buy costly dresses. Geet! you have all the rights. He has earned millions to spend exclusively for you only. Please go ahead and empty MSK's pocket. Hahaha...

Thank you so much for this lovely and light hearted ff teju.

Keep up the great work.

143 dear,

Tonya


omg tonya dear
really i m flying on moon now..
how many days after u r commenting yaar...
u know what i used to check my thread for every 5 mins after my clg time just to see ur comment and atlast i found them...ufff...
another 2 parts on the way dear...
keep in touch
love u
ur teja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome
thanx for pm waise i read it even before pm😉

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