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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Beautiful part!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

My Small analysis ...hope u ll like it😛

Its in Ear-rings POV😉😆

Geet(whispers): how rude he is...telling me...geet handa to stop talking🤣...how can i?(DW Geet ...we knw that is impossible😆)..i cant even stay a min without talking?(Thats know factor ...but still U can with Maan's help😳 )I will be bored...(No,U ll enjoy it😉😆)how can he stay silent like that always?...(hey babaji ...Not always😲)i still doubt whether he is human or not(Still U r doubting😕)

Geet's hands travels to her ears along with maan's stare and she tries to remove her earring and fails. She again tries but fails.

Geet: uff...ab isko kya hogaya?...why is it behaving like this sadu...so stubborn...not at all coming...they r so heavy I cant keep them any ore...hmmm...my dear sweet earring plz leave my ear(no ...I need my Maan😆) ...or did u fall in love with my ear???(I fall for my Maan's fingers😆)..ummm...(😳)

Geet agains tries to remove it and again fails this make maan lose his patience and shouts.(Meine kaha tha na I want Maan to remove it)


Maan takes her earring from her right ear and goes to left one and one by one he removes all her jewelry.(I said u know only My Maan can remove it😆) When maan touches geet she feels an current pass through her spine and she immediately sloses her eyes feeling him close to her(Now she is enjoying my Maan ...but she is not at fault sab ka haal yesa hai😆

As maan tries to take her maang tika his lips slightly brushed her forehead (Nahiii ...*in old filmo style*😆 )which made geet to open her eyes and look directly into his dark choclate eyes.(mere Maan sae dor raho) And both of them lost in each other eyes(😭). Maan's one hand is resting on her forehead and the other hand holding her jewel in the mid air while geet's one hand is on her lap and the other one slowly traveled to his shoulder and rested there.(Nahiii ...mera Maan mujhe dokha diya)


hope U enjoyed it😃


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omg dia tum bhi na...
loved it loved it loved it sooo much
(Nahiii ...*in old filmo style*😆 )
🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
keep commenting like this dear...coz i have a feeling that i m making ppl bore by this story...coz i m not getting so coments as i expected...atlest ur comment keep this ff alive...😭😊

ur teja😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice updates dear...
maaneet r feeling somthing for each other...
nice...looking fwd...

MystiqueDew thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: teju2292



omg dia tum bhi na...
loved it loved it loved it sooo much
(Nahiii ...*in old filmo style*😆 )
🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
keep commenting like this dear...coz i have a feeling that i m making ppl bore by this story...coz i m not getting so coments as i expected...atlest ur comment keep this ff alive...😭😊

ur teja😊


Hey dear ...

HRU???

DW ...ll be regular here after in both PYS & in MMM too ...for atleast 10 days hopefully ...Btw don't be upset exams are going on ...they might be engrossed with their preparation ...so take a chill-pill ...& flood this thread with ur small mini updates😉

143 Buddy

Dia
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updates plz add me to ur pm list
tonyahk thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi teju,
sorry sorry for this late late comments dear.
loved both the parts.
geet and silence...hey babaji! ye kaise ho saktha?😕. kisi ne maan ko samnjayiye😉
geet has swollowed question bank...OMG!!!! itna bada mouth🤣🤣🤣chalo...maan has find out the top secret behind geet's bak bak. i couldn't stop laughing at this.
lovely updates dear. thank you so much
continue soon
@dia
dear, loved your hilarious comments very much. keep going girl.
143 buddies
Tonya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 13

After some time maan saw her sleeping peacefully cuddled up in the seat like a small kid and a smile crept on maan's lips which was observed by no one in that dark night.

Maan's smile was disturbed by a phone call which he picked up instantly.

Maan: hello.

Person:...

Maan: I m on my way back to delhi.

Person: ...

Maan: I don't want to listen anything about that.

Person: ...

Maan: I already told u.

Person: ...

Maan: u do anything. But don't expect me to agree.

Person: ...

Maan: u should think that before cheating me.

Person: ...

Maan cuts the call and closes his eyes in angry. After few minutes he opens his eyes and sees the face of the innocent girl who is sleeping beside him peacefully smiling in her sleep. He instantly calms down and again stars his car for a ride to delhi.

Geet woke up from her sleep throwing her hands up in the air and yawning trying to open her eyes slowly but unable to get a Cleary vision due to the sunlight falling on her eyes directly. After fews seconds she finally opened her eyes only to find her lying on the back seat of the car.

She sat up on the seat with a jerk an looked around.

Where am i? yesterday night...wait I sat in the passenger seat na so how come I came to the back seat?...maan!...maan!!!...where is maan??...(she looked out of the window and saw the road before her) i think I m on highway...but y is car stopped here?...y this place is so deserted?

She checks her herself...(uff babaji I m looking fine...hope nothing happened last night... ) she jerks by the sudden voice which came from other side window of the car. She turned towards the voice gathering all her courage.

Geet(shocked): maan..

Maan(worries):geet...geet what happened? R u alright?


before:part 12

after:part 14

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tonyahk

hi teju,

sorry sorry for this late late comments dear.
loved both the parts.
geet and silence...hey babaji! ye kaise ho saktha?😕. kisi ne maan ko samnjayiye😉
geet has swollowed question bank...OMG!!!! itna bada mouth🤣🤣🤣chalo...maan has find out the top secret behind geet's bak bak. i couldn't stop laughing at this.
lovely updates dear. thank you so much
continue soon
@dia
dear, loved your hilarious comments very much. keep going girl.
143 buddies
Tonya


Hey tonya ...🤗

HRU??? & Thank u dear ...me waiting for real mirchi ...(i.e.,) Ur update ...when u gonna update❓


143 Buddy
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Posted: 14 years ago
Naughty Geet ...What all she is thinking ...Does she took that ear-ring moments seriously???

EAR-RINGS POV:

Chi Chi Babaji ...What type of Gurls are there in this world ...eyeing for other's properties😆
uff ...
teju2292 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Naughty Geet ...What all she is thinking ...Does she took that ear-ring moments seriously???


EAR-RINGS POV:

Chi Chi Babaji ...What type of Gurls are there in this world ...eyeing for other's properties😆
uff ...


dia dear...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
ur ear rings pov is awesome dear...
keep going...
loved it...
thanks for commenting dear...
ur teja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi teju,
today i am on time...hahaha...
lovely update buddy
maan admiring sleeping geet...awesome
continue soon dear
143
Tonya

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