FF-Ishq Hai Yeh-Maaneet#1

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hi frnds...this is teja...
After reading many of ur all ff...a thought came in this small mind...and i thought to pen it down...
this is my first ff.i am new...hope u all like it...plz press like button to let me know..and guys...plz...leave ur valuable comments for me...plz...
if this ff is some where likely to any of the ff's plz let me know i will change then..plz...i m even ready to accept eggs and chappals if its not nice...

Ishq Hai Yeh


Character sketch:



Maan singh khurana:

27 years old. MD of Khurana constructions. same as in ghsp. Most eligible bachelor in Delhi with his killing looks and attitude. NO friends, no smile, no gf'actually never showed interest in any girl'must say that no girl is enough beautiful to win his one look'He lives with his daadima as his parents are no more. No one actually knows that he liked a girl from his past and still likes her'and her memories. He never told her that he like her'. He doesn't even know where she is now.


Geet Handa:

23 years old girl. Just completed her MA-Architecture in Mumbai. Her original character comes out eventually in the story. But present she is tough,brave and straightforward,hard working,calm going and sincere. She almost forgot to smile with heart'because of her college atmosphere in Mumbai made some effect and lose of her mother and sisters at the time of her graduation. She learned to hide her felling from the outside world but she failed before the people who are close to her heart. She came back Delhi to live with her father.


Savitri Devi: Same as in ghsp'sweet dadi


Dev khurana:

Maan's younger brother..he is good,handsome ,stylish,jovial.

Away from business and responsibilities'..in love with Meera'his college mate'.he respects and loves maan and will do any thing for him. No bad past and deeds guys'he is good guy here.


Meera: Girl friend of Dev'.She is a very nice girl with family respects.


Mohinder Handa:

Father of Geet.he likes his daughter very much and never said no for her. Lives in delhi. He is the head of Handa group of industries.


part 1-page 1 part 24-page 59

part 2-page 2 part 25-page 62

part 3-page 4 part 26-page 66

part 4- page 5 part 27-page 69

part 5-page 8 part 28-page 72

part 6-page 10 part 29-page 75

part 7-page 12 part 30-page 79

part 8-page 14 part 31-page 82

part 9-page 16 part 32-page 86

part 10-page 20 part 33-page 90

part 11-page 23 part 34-page 94

part 12-page 25 part 35-page 98

part 13-page 27 part 36-page101

part 14-page 30 part 37-page 106

part 15- page 31 part 38-page 110

part 16-page 35 part 39-page 113

part 17-page 38 part 40-page 117

part 18-page 41 part 41-page 120

part 19-page 44 part 42-page 125

part 20-page 47 part 43-page 127

part-21-page 50 part 44-page 133

part 22-page 54 part 45-page 135

part 23-page 56


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Guys plz tell me'.should I continue or not'.i will even try to write part 1

Now'.plzzz tel me should I continue or not''''

I will be waiting for ur reply''''comments I mean''

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it !!!continue soon and do pm me tooo
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Ishq Hai Yeh

Hi guys here is part 1…hope u like it…..plz press like button……plzzz

Part-1

Khurana mansion:

Morning: 8.00Am

Daadima: nakul did u finish arranging breakfast on table?

(nakul was the same nakul guys….head cook in mansion)

Nakul:jee dadima

Daadima:where is maan?

Nakul: he is in his room dadi….he said he is coming.

Daadima: teekh hai.

Up in his room………..

Maan just came out of wash room…fully dressed in his formals…ready to leave to his office…….(u can imagine guys in his formals…how hot he looks………hmmm…unable to resist for girls…..)his shirt stick to his body clearly showing his muscular body.

MSK….always on time…..

8.15 AM

He was about to leave his room when his eyes fell on some rectangular box which is designed beautifully with bronze touch which is placed on the side table fof his bed.

He went near the bed, took the box into his hands and slowly opened it as is touching a rose petal. He stared at it few moments and quickly placed it back in his cupboard and went down stairs.

At Breakfast table:

Maan: hi daadi. how r u?

Daadi:main teek hoon beta. come and sit.

Maan: yesterday night I m a bit busy daadi so I dint come to dinner.

Daadi: that's ok beta.i know u well..u and ur work..ufff.

Maan:hmm…so whats on news today(while looking the newspaper)

Daadi:maan I want to ask u something.

Maan:jee dadi.tell me.

Daadi:Now a days I m feeling a bit scared beta.

Maan(worried):what?why daadi?is everything all right?

Daadi:haan haan beta..main teek hoon.

Maan:then y r u scared daadi?

Daadi:after dev and u leave in the morning,I m feeling totally lonely in this house….no one r there to speak with me and attend me.even if I die…no one even there to see……….

Maan:daadi plz…don't say like that..If u feel lonely…I will start working from home.

Daadi:how many days beta.

Maan:what do u mean by how many days daadi.

Daadi:I don't want u to stick to home maan.

Maan:so,what do u want me to do daadi?(a bit frustrated)

Daadi:I want u to marry maan.

Maan: oho daadi…plz…don't start again.

Daadi:plzmaan…meri baat suno.

Maan:nai daadi…I m already getting late to office…..see u in the evening…take care …have ur luch and medicines properly plz…bye daadi.

(saying this maan left for office)

Precape:

Dev:so daadi….what do u think?y bro is running away from marriage?

So guys plz tellme….should I continue or not??????

Waiting for ur comments………….

Teju………….😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oye Hoye

Sounds awesome!!

Add me to your pm list and update soon!!!

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thanks guys...
plz send buddy request...if u want pm from me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great intro n part 1

continue soon plz.
do pm me if u can.
thx
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awsome update.
do continue plz.
add me to yr pm list .
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds interesting
nice character
awesome update
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh
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cute update! and do continue soon! and PM me!
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Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -2

Maan:nai daadi...I m already getting late to office...see u in the evening...take care ...have ur lunch and medicines properly plz...bye daadi.

(saying this maan left for office)

Daadi: why does he always run from the word 'marriage'?

A voice answers her from back.

"shaayad...he hates marriage...!"

Daadi turns to see whose voice is that.

Daadi: so dev beta...when did you return from ur vacation?

Dev: haan...yesterday night daadi. when I came u were sleeping, so I dint disturb u.

Daadi: oh..ok beta.come and have your breakfast.

Dev:jee dadi.

Dev sat at the table and started his breakfast along with his morning chit-chat with daadi.

Dev:so daadi...what do you think,why bro is running away from shaadi?

Daadi:pata nahi kyun dev...whenever I ask him he just skips the topic.

Dev:daadi..do u think bro likes any girl?may be in his past?

Daadi:no beta...I don't think so.he never shown any such signs,not even in his past.

(yah guys...how can daadi know...our MSK is king in hiding his feeling...right guys)

Dev: that's strange daadi...how come anyone be away from girls? U see me. No way I can't...hmmm...girls...wow...their angelic look...wonderful eyes...sweet voice...soft skin..hmmm...i wonder how bro resist...u know daadi how beautiful the girls in the office will be..!!!!!!!

Daadi(holding his ear): dev...!!!!!

Dev: oops...sorry daadi(pulling his ear out of daadima's grip)

Dev:ok daadi..i m going out to meet my friends...see u in evening..have ur lunch.bye daadi.

Daadi:uff...yeh dev bhi na...

Daadi went back to her room.

Handa Haweli

Morning:10:30 A.M

Geet is sleeping in her room peacefully.everything in her room was colorful unlike maan's. All the things were scattered on the floor...all her clothes,books,sprays,creams,bags,spread,some cusions except the one she is hugging and sleeping. The room looked like as if a C.I.D search has taken place.

Her one hand was under the pillow hugging it tightly and another one was hanging down her bed and is holding a book in her hand. After ages there was a smile on her lips while sleeping.

There was a sudden knock on the door which makes her wake up from the sleep. She slowly sat on the bed and answered the door in her sleepy voice.

Then mohinder handa(Mr.handa) entered into her room along with a maid who is carrying breakfast for her which she kept on side take and left.

Mr.handa: Good morning geet...how r u?

Geet:mein teekh hoon papa.yeh kya hain? Y did u bring the breakfast to my room?

Mr.handa(smiling): It will be better if u call it as brunch than breakfast.

Geet(surprised and shocked): kya?(looking at the time)..11.00A.M!!!

I slept till now?!!...y didn't u wake me up papa?

Mr.handa(smiling):just yesterday you came back and you were tired.so I let u sleep.

Geet:jee

Mr.handa(looking at the condition of the room):geet what did u do to yur room last night?

Geet: papa...wo...I am searching for something last night.

Mr.handa:did u find it?

Geet:haan papa...I got(while tucking something behind her pillow along with the book in her hand)

Precap: sweet memories...

So guys...this is it

Plz tell me whether ulike it or not...and plz press like button...

Plz write ur valuble comments...

Ur teja😊

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago

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