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Posted: 14 years ago

Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -20

Hi frns,

Thanks for all who have liked my ff and commented. Sorry yaar I am unable to reply for each of u as I have no time. Hope u understand. I m thinking of changing my writing style so here it goes...I m also trying to give colours to this...plz tell me how it is..if u don't like then I will be back with my old style in next update...well what colours should I give???!!!!...i always love to give blue for maan and red for geet..i don't want to change that colour to them...so what about other...ok let me check the colors may be I can find different shades...plz comment'.

Maan: geet tumhe suna nai maine kya kaha. Go and get ready I will be there at ur house at 8.00 p.m sharp. I don't want u to be late. Now go.

Geet: yes sir.

Geet leaves the office and maan looks at her till she leave and goes back to his cabin and takes his laptop and other things and he too leaves...

Maan walks in the living room of the mansion when he finds dadima sits in there reading some book. She saw him coming and spoke to him "maan tum itni jaldi ghar agaya?"

Maan replied " ji dadima mujhe ek dinner meeting keliye jana hai...so I came to fresh up".

Until now after he joined in business he mever came home just to fresh up, he would do it in the office itself to save the time..but for the first time he came home. Dadima thinks that's there's something fishy about this. But if she asks maan he would never say anything, so she thought to herself " hmm something fishy..i should keep an eye on him from now. Ok so tomorrow I should go to office and check what the differences occoured there in last 2 months..."

Dadima again starts reading ignoring her thoughts until again she saw maan descending the stairs in a white casual shirt with top two buttons open and blue jeans. Dadima looked blank at him and asked " maan kya tum sach mein meeting keliye hi jaa raheho??"

Maan became dumstruck at her question and stumbled " ji..ji dadima...aap aisa kyun pooch rahe ho?"

"aap meeting mein jeans pehen ke jaaraheho?"

Maan looked at himself and was afraid that he was almost caught by his dadi and tried to cover up "wo dadima dinner meeting hi hai iseliye"

"hmmm!!!"

Maan quickly leaves from there and sits in his car and droves off from the mansion. Dadima is still sitting in the same position "hmm...now I sure there is really some thing else not meeting...I should find out.maan app mujhse jhoot bola aura b dekho mein kya karungi" and smiles to herself.

Geet on the other side walks in her living room and falls on the sofa to relax when she here a voice and finally sees misha coming towards her saying "geet u came?...now lets go out for dinner we can spend some time talking".

Geet is happy to see mish per sad that she can't go with her "sorry mish...I can't come I have some meeting"

"maine kaha na she will say no"

Geet turns back and finds meera coming out from kichen holding a glass of choclate milk and another two glasses of coffee, she gives the choclate milk to geet and handover one coffee to misha and she takes the other.

" meera!!"

" she always says the same answer to me mish...may be she doent want to come"

" aisa nahi hai meera...mera boss jo hain na..wo karus...dusht danav ...sadu..wo last minute bataya meeting ke bare mai..plz understand yaar...tomorrow breakfast aur lunch be mein aap dono ke saat karungi teekhai?"

"we don't trust u anymore geet"

" plz meera.."

Misha who silently watching the conversation cuts geet in the middle " geet today I saw our boss he dint look that rude why r u calling him with names?"

Geet starts laughing out " mish this is ur first day babz don't worry his avtar is not that cool as u think u just spoke to him once u will know the thing tomorrow moring sharp at 9.00p.m. don't miss it..if u miss u will be fired next moment" and continues laughing.

Misha is hell confused and shocked that geet told that she will be fired if she miss to see something at nine but she dint understand what she ment.

Seeing misha's and meera's confused faces geet laughs so hard holding her stomach and literally falls down from the sofa when meera and mish comes to her side to catch her, but geet is still laughing sitting on the floor.

Meera and misha are very happy to see geet smiling after so many days and let her go to the meeting today while making her promises the breakfast and lunch with them tomorrow. Geet even gave the promise but not sure what her karus boss is going to do tomorrow to keep her busy again.

Maan comes to geet's house and calls her from outside the gate,

" geet I m waiting in the car outside ur gate...come quick" and cuts the call.

After few minutes geet came out wearing a white salwar kamiz which fitted her well toned body with light make up and earrings, watch in the name of accessories. Maan saw her coming towards the car and lost in her serene beauty. He slowly comes out of car and walks to the other side. Geet comes towards hm and stands infornt of him. He is still lost in her eyes and comes out of the trance when she calls him " maan sir"

"hmm"

" sir lets go" geet says in her serious tone by which maan understands that she is still angry on him.

He opens the car door and she sits inside without even looking at him. He goes to the other side and sits in the driver seat and drives off"

Sorry frns it's a small one but I will manage to write another update today...

Plz press the like button and comment frns'

Ur teja😊

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...thanks 4 pm..
Edited by priya.shilpa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

yaar i m expecting long comments from u yaar..
plz plz plz give the feed back..
i know u may be busy...
reading my ff is the grt thing u r doing for me but plz try plzzz
tell me should i continue writing in this style or should i change to my old one
and what about colouring????
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Posted: 14 years ago
woww awesomeee
luved itt teja
super cool
wondering wts d date plan maan has made
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar

thanks come back soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Teju u better write another update😆😆
it was very short but very sweet...i am happy that Geet is finally smiling...kudos to Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh wow! Can't wait to see how she reacts when she finds out what Maan actually has in mind :-) Hehe can't wait update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
loved it
finally geet laughed
bechara maan bal bal dadi se bach gaya
loved the style of writing
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part. geet leughed good yaar.
dicetive dadima on her job .lol lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful part
love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm

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